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Damn. Celestia's got this shit down to a science by now, doesn't she.
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She's been doing this for how long? She knows everything that she needs to do.
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Here's a trollestia. Well done.
If Celestia has planned this union to happen, why she forbids Velvet to get involved with Light? Or she calculated the possibility that her pupil with unleashed rebelliousness will do entirely opposite?
This kind of punnery is like crack to me
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Exactly what I was thinking. Celestia is a sly one.
"I was on my way back to the castle
8599227 Wow, good catch! That made it past me and two other editors. Fixed.
A+
TL;DR long lost siblings? :0
You know an easy way to make sure they would probably never meet? Don't assign him as her personal guard. Get literally anyone else.
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Shouldn't this be two paragraphs? Because first it's Velvet talking and then you say "He"?
yes yes i know, trying too hard
Damn... ain't she a manipulative cunt...
I'm getting discomfiting vibes from this, though that may simply be memory of LP1. I hope this story takes a different kind of direction than that one's ending.
Made famous by Monty Python as The Excessively Noisy Room.
(Also, misspelling, just in case that wasn't obvious.)
8938734 Fixed.
I read the first several chapters of this, then read LP1, then restarted this. You have celestia scheming by the century.
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I was on my back to the castle...
Erotic.
I'm calling it here, Night Light is Velvet's brother who was put up for adoption. Thus why Celly wants them to know each other but not be romantically involved. Might be a stretch but thats just how i see it going.
Ah telling somepne no to make sure theg do it. I use this on my DND players sll the time
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Hell, it wouldn't be the first curve ball we've gotten with this series.
She wasn't
Funny enough, "signaling" only has one "l." I just learned that
Would it be okay to pm you if I have any more editing suggestions?
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You may.
This would have been the perfect place for Velvet to tease Nightlight about being into kinky bondage fetish. Too bad their relationship dynamic is not at the point where such teasing would feel organic at this point in the story.
"You civilians have the luxury of not having to know the truth that we know. The truth that we live in a world that has walls. And those walls have to be guarded by ponies with spears. Who's gonna do it? You!?" You, LT Velvet?! I have a greater responsibility then you can possibly fathom. you weep for Luna and you curse the guard you have that luxury. the luxury of not knowing what i know. that Luna's banishment while tragic probably saved lives and my post while grotesque and inconsequential to you saves lives. . . i could go on. in any case fucking amazing reference you absolute madlad.
Damn this is fucked up
I have a creeping suspicion that Celestia hired the thugs so she could incest those two.
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Shit. it's almost like you saw the cover illustration which features a family tree that clearly shows that Night Light and Twilight Velvet have the same parents. And that this is an incest story. Except I think Celestia wants them to get together because she is purposefully been inbreeding this lineage for generations, trying to create the mutations that we have already seen will manifest in T. Sparkle.
*Inhales deeply* SA-LA-GA!
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Bruh, did you have a stroke typing that?
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I don't get it.
Welp, theres Celestia's baited setpiece.
You tell a teenager no. And they go and do it anyway. That, and velvet appears to be quite the rebel when it comes to rules, 'going against the grain'as it were.
Love this Ghostbuster reference
Sure, that makes sense, in Spain. I get the impression Equestria is a bit more temperate. Is it the middle of summer?
LAST CHAPTER:
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The "A Few Good Men" speech didn't really fit Night's and Velvet's relationship, they aren't on nearly as bad terms as they'd be if Velvet had been trying to get Night convicted of war crimes or whatever went on in that movie.
Utterly shameless, that pony. Really. This is probably what is going to bother me the most about this entire manipulative affair, this pretentious outrage. Might be due to all the pretentious outrage outside of pony fiction.
[EDIT] No, nevermind, what's bothering me most now is the suspicion that Celestia set those mares up to make fun of Velvet for not having a date at the last gala.
I love puppet master stories.
Interesting! Is Shining Armor and Twilight the result of Celestia failure or is she trying reversed psychological warfare?
Celestia has a Bonzai tree, isn't that telling enough about her liking her projects orderly?
Love the dynamic between Night Light and Velvet! They have more chemistry than... someone smarter than me could probably put a funny chemistry reference here.