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The plot has thickened even more, and I'm loving it
Keep up the good work my good man
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Welcome to my ride: Liquid Pride.
A roller coaster that only goes up.
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First: nice Superman world of cardboard reference
Second: Twilight you little minx...
So how long until Cadance and Shining Armor find out the truth about their relationship? I get the feeling that Cadance is going to really love this family. Plus how will Celestia react when she finds out that Twilight is now pregnant, before Cadance?
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Well, Twilight's plot is about to thicken those coming months, that's for sure
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You know, I was really close to making a joke with my PLOT comment, but deep down I thought that if I wasn't going to do it, then someone else will.
I should go with my gut instincts more often
aw yes i can see we are close to cumming full circle, or will this grate story steer to a new direction after all there is a 99.9% chance Twilight is pregnant.
Shining feels as if something worse is coming, everyone thinking it’s Twilight’s pregnancy. And I’m just over here waiting for Sombra to turn up and reveal that he’s one of there ancestors who didnt agree with Celestia’s plan
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The 'Surprising fire' is obviously [probably] an Archer reference but the one that I can't quite place and for some reason I just go to Bobby Hill yelling 'That's my purse!' and 'I don't know you!' is 'Get off my train.'.
Also I'm sure you're aware those these two vids
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I can almost hear Shakespearicles rushedly rewriting the next chapter
His is the second one of your stories to make me think this... but yer a dresdenfile, harry.
Reminds me of this https://youtube.com/watch?v=sXasCjUTNpE#
And now Twily is pregnant. As I'm sure you'll agree, Shakey, It's always wonderful to see a story where that happens. Thank you so much for your work. ^_^
Also, soulfire? With that description and some other related lines, that's unmistakably a Dresden Files reference. That's my favorite novel series!
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Guilty.
9020375 Interestingly, I had written an entire scene with Night Light fighting in the city streets with the other Royal Guards in a desperate fight against impossible odds. But the chapter had already run quite long, and it didn't really fit the feel of the rest of the story. Although Game of Thrones seems to be able to blend the genres of saucy, romantic drama and bloody battles.
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What? N- no.
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I love the ever interlocking and escalating drama this fic champions... but goddamn. I feel like I'm one (story plot) climax from my head exploding.
Don't stop.
What a way to end a season. With a nice strong punch. I'm curious to see how this develops into the third season. I also can't wait for Celestia to spill the beans about Cadence.
Oh, hi there Cyril.
Oh yes... OH VERY YES indeed...
The Emergency DJ reminds me of the music video Dramophone by Caravan Palace where the waitress breaks the glass and pulls out an emergency record.
The plot is getting E X T R A T H I C C!
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Is... Is that it? There's no more? Aww but all the good stories end too soon. Luna damnit all to Tartarus.
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>double-checks status
> incomplete
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Oops mah bad
There was a story, a few months ago, which was the same Superman scene but with Celestia and Chrysalis. It's was eh, but also less than eh. Honestly wish you didn't use this line.
Dude I can't breathe.
I'm convinced you're trying to build a Steven King style universe with these stories.
I now wonder if I should expect Shining to come home from the market and notice a carrot missing...
i stand corrected ab out being bored, i skiped the last 2 chapters to read thru this one and now im going back to read them
damnit SP you pulled a switcharoo on me!
"But Celestia had a problem. She to be careful. She lived in a world of matchsticks. She always had to take constant care not to break something, or somepony. Never allowing herself to lose control, even for an moment or somepony could die. She could have easily incinerated Chrysalis where she stood. But if she used her full power, she could just as easily reduce the entire stone building to molten slag. Everypony she cared about, and everything she was fighting for, would be destroyed. Cadance and Shining Armor, a millennium of work, were within range of the queen. Celestia traded power for precision. A beam of focused magic fired from her horn at the changeling."
No, sorry. Out of all the changes to cannon you made that actually make a lot of sense... this one isn't it. Celestia's just weak. Objectively, hilariously weak. Plain and simple. All hype, nothing concrete to back it up. Chrysalis, however, amped up on Shining and Cadence's love, is objectively more powerful than Celestia, though, again, that's not saying much since Celestia is so weak by what we actually see that a stiff breeze could knock her over let alone something like an actual modern army using actual modern weapons and actual combined arms tactics. Arty, tank, and jet spam for the win.
And don't give me that "she moves the sun therefore she's star level" bullshit spewed around, because if she was that powerful, why does she even have the pretense of needing guards? Plus there are so many things in the show where that kind of power would have been useful and just smacked down fools left and right no question. Fact is, Celestia is all hype, no substance to back up said hype and it's really annoying when fanfic authors try to save her low-showings by wanking her to obscene degrees even for narrative purposes.
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No it wasn't. That reference was awful because Celestia isn't the flying brick superhero that always saves the day in that speech, she's LITERALLY THE CARDBOARD he's talking about she's so weak! When Superman makes speeches talking about 'worlds of cardboard', Celestia is but one of the many pieces of cardboard Superman has to take great pains not to breathe on else she would perish!
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After 3 day not drinking one normally dies...
This story got quite complicated...
What a masterpiece!
This wedding will be hitting the history books for all the right and wrong reasons
No Changelings army splattered in the streets?
Would be realistic... Bug juices everywhere
Kinda odd Celestia didn't charge Chrysalis and teleported them to a save range.
Than again she might fear her project to be harmed when not around.