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I haven’t read this, I just wanted to point out that the cover art depicts Cadance and Shining Armor as siblings.
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read the story , everything willl make sense!
no im serious read it its a REALLY GOOD Story
Oh no...
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Oh no x2
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Ahhahahahahahaha xD
This story is making me feel so conflicted, it is really good, but i dont really like ShiningXTwilight, but the story is so good
Oh boy
also different from what I thought might happen the previous chapter, ie Twilight and Shining in a frenzy to pack up the house while Nova is feeling guilty for opening his window
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This is a rollercoaster that only goes up.
WOW Talk about Teenage rebellion, jerking it of the the Pony his Mother & Father has tried saving him from. But as it says, trying is like bowstrings spend too much power points on them & they will allways snap in the end.
I am on Team NovaHeart all the freaking way to the cosmological event horizon and back, so i have butterflies in my belly now. But i SO! would like to see where this goes.
Also, i think that we are in the Endgame now.
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If this rollercoaster goes up any higher i am going to need warmer clothes & oxygen tanks, because airplanes are nothing but small dots, (below me).
I'm still unsure as to why they didn't flee north. Surely the best balance of safety and living would be in the Crystal Empire?
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It would pretty much guarantee that the whole thing comes out, which would end in reprisals and/or all-out war.
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I did write most of this scene, but ultimately I felt that it didn't really serve to drive the narrative forward and that it could simply be implied with the subtext of the time lapse.
Additionally, there was going to be more stuff happening on the train, (chatting with other ponies for some side-exposition and comedy) but again, it just felt like it bloated the chapter and bogged down the pacing. (Which is the last thing you want to do during the Rising Action part of the narrative arc leading up to the Climax.)
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hmm, neat to know, and I suppose I can see what you're getting that
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I am scared now.
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Gulp. Help.
*claps hands in preparation* I'm expecting the epic smackdown Twilight is gonna lay down on Celestia and am hoping she sells it on pay-per-view.
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Read it. Do it, if you haven’t already.
Damn it Twilight you have really messed up now. Now we are heading into the endgame and I wonder how the prices will fall when the board gets over turned?
Twilight is gonna pull the entire Faust-damned forest out of the ground looking for Nova, screaming like a mad mare the entire time.
They're gonna be able to hear her in Yakyakistan.
I feel like Twilight unwittingly used Celestia's trick to forbid her son from Celestia.
Funny how just letting their son have a friend was never on the table. No just have sex and keep him under house arrest a bit longer. I'm conflicted, obviously Twilight is okay with the idea. But I'm glad she's kinda got her base desires under control. Tho I wish something had happened. What's another year and a new sibling, huh? Lmao!
Also I guess this may confirm that alicorn mares can only have 1 offspring?
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it would be too obvious. Plus they would avoid a confrontation between nations.
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By all means bloat it up! I love those little tid-bits.
Part of me wants Celestia to have what she wants, but I'm also afraid for Nova.
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At least Alicorns who were made after the fact instead of being Naturly Born like Flurry Heart. Because i belive that Flurry has the ability to breed endless times with Nova & have 1 or more foals with him for ach year.
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it does make sense from a biological view. I mean, if you were immortal, and capable of birthing a 1000 offspring in your lifetime (using Celestia and Luna as an example). If only half of those were of one sex; so 1000 male and 1000 female in 1000 years that's 1 million, and if half of those million were female that's 500K females and in a 1000 years again; that's 500 Million. 250M of that might be female. And in just 30 more years we arrive at 7.5 Billion.
So in just 2030 years; Alicorns could populate the world at 7.5 Billion; roughly the same as humans in our world today. Only it gets worse because THEY DON"T DIE!!! The numbers aren't accurate, because once the 1000th foal is born, there's already 985 offspring that are already capable of breeding; so the numbers should be WAY higher. But this is more for simplicity's sake.
I'm assuming Celestia is approaching middle age; otherwise she's going by Invincible Viltrimite rules; and she actually ages slower the older she gets; so if she's as beautiful as she is. I'm guessing she probably not even in her late 20s biologically speaking. iirc the dialog from that show.
I could see the Alicorns completely dominating the world, or being an alien invasive species. But if they can't have but 1 offspring, then their numbers are automatically curtailed, and they're like the Elf race of the pony world, or something.
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Indeed it does. My theroy of what is the difference between a 99% Made Alicorn like Cady & Twily, to (True) 100% Natural Born Alicorns like Nova & Flurry is something i wrote lower down in the comments but i copy paste post it here again.
I do belive that Twilight Sparkle is barren just like her Big Sis. The reason being that both sisters were not natural born alicorns, but rather made one. Making them just short of the of being absolute full blooded alicorns like their foals are. And i do belive that an Alicorn that wasn't born one but made, does not have the extra strong wombs + extra high healing factor needed for repeated births of natural bron Alicrons. And that any made Alicorn giving brith to a natural Alicron will be a glass canon, it will do the job, but only 1 time before it shatters.
Speaking of Invincible & the Viltrimites, if Celestia was fully honest with her goal of securing the future for all Alicorns in the future, she would have to go full on Omni Man on her fromer friends & alies, then go full on Thragg on every sinlge little Unicron, Pegasus, Earth Pony, Zebra & Donkey. Heck even the Griffons, Hippogriffs/Sea Ponies, Kirins & even Centaurs might be in danger of Extremination. Because the Alicorn gene is so highly recessiv to the extreme. Leaving only Nova & Flurry left to breed the new future from, because the 2 are immune to the effects of inbreeding. I know the sisters are also full alicorns, but it never was stated that they were immune to the effects of inbreeding too, just because of that. (Note) I do not hope this fic go (This Dark).
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I think we can assume they are immune to inbreeding, since Alicorn DNA is supposed to be this absolutely perfect in every way kind of thing; and again using Invincible rules, it can be affected by a virus as is already evident in this story.
Celestia had no issues with having Luna breed her (after making Discord give Luna a stallionhood for a second time.) Which she probably concluded from her experiment with the Sparkles.
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That's a good point. But i am not Sure that Celestia & Luna are the same breed of Alicorns as Flurry & Nova. Think of the fromer as Alicorns 1.0 & think of the later as Alicorns 2.0 & i am not sure that if the exact same Virus were to re appear that it would be able to infect Flurry & Nova, as it can with the 2 sisters.
That is true, but using my doubts of the older 2 being the same breed of pure Alicorns as the younger 2, there might be genetic issues & complications if they were to interbreed.
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Flurry and nova should be immune to the virus. Because infected alicorn 1.0 lost wings and/or horns. 2.0 is derived from the survivors of 1.0 sans wings and/horns.
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That is what my theory also speculates is true.
So if Celestia honstly had the best intentions for the Alicon race in her heart & mind, she would have drafted a contract with Flurry & Nova to keep them breeding & keep the Alicorn line clean & pure for all time to come. Then surender her life & begging Luna to do the same so that the odds is in the future Alicorns favor as much as it can be. Fullfilling the wishes of their Mother when as she turned them to stone.
Just curious..has anyone thought of just giving in?
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I could be wrong, but I was under the impression from the previous chapter and this one that Shining and Twilight learned from Cadance’s labor with Flurry and Twilight is still capable of bearing more foals.
They both talk about getting her pregnant again in the previous chapter, but it didn’t seem like “pregnant play”, but an actual thing cause Twlight was in heat. Which while Shining had “quenched”, was still affecting him and Nova. Not quite clear if that meant Twilight is pregnant again, or if he’d just quenched her heat (due to them talking about pregnancies in actual conversation).
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> mfw reading all these wild fan theories
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You're more of a cock tease than Rarity.
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It is true that Flurry's & Nova's births were different & i am not saying that Cadi & Twily is renderd barren in the same way. I just belive that due to other complications, she is unable to have more foals as well.
That's ture, but i belive that the 2 has used protection magic all the other times & that it isn't untill now when they stop they will find Twily's foal chamber not functioning any more.
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I see.
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I mean, that’s possible that she can’t have anymore, but Cadance was specifically said to have had a very difficult labor with Flurry that damaged her womb enough to make her barren for further foals. And that was with an assumed medical team and personal aid from Celestia herself.
Whereas Twilight had a home birthing with only her brother there with her. I’d think that if her pregnancy had the same, or similar enough, complications that also rendered her barren…then it’d have been enough trauma for them to have gone to a hospital for emergency aid, which would have then alerted Celestia immediately to their whereabouts.
However, all indications are that her pregnancy and birthing went off well, that she didn’t have any real complications. There’s just no indication, either from convo between Shining and Twilight to environmental storytelling to indicate that Twilight is no longer fertile.
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That is some very good points, i tend to belive that the complications is more suttel than Cadi's was & that they haven't found that out yet. So still holds frim to my theory of Barren Twily untill the story indicates anything eles.
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True! With Twilight only being 99% Alicorn, alongside Cadance, that is still a possibility until the story reveals otherwise. Given that Shakes is keeping his secrets…it’s all speculation right now.
Right now, we are dealing with Schrodingr’s Twilight: she is both fertile and sterile. And both have interesting implications.
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That so ture my friend. Given how cloes the Cards are being hold by Shakes, speculation & theories is the only thing we have to go on as of now.
That was the abolute best way of descibing it, Schrodingr’s Twilight or Schrodingr’s Sparkle. I just love that term, it fits like hand in glove for what we are dealing with right as of now.
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Gotta admit: Schrodingr’s Sparkle has a much better flow than Schrodingr’s Twilight.
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Now that i think about it, i also think that it does have a better flow.
You sure know how to make a guy even more angry and disgusted with a villainess.
And Tia...I hope those male alicorn you're so bloody determined to find and have makes you regret ever considering chess.
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Basically if Celestia even suspected both Nova and Flurry were in the same place, she'd stop playing nice and launch an all out war against the Empire. That's why they haven't gone there.
crap this is not going to end well at all.
i can see shit hitting the fan followed with blood lots of blood.
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Good catch! Let that be your introduction to Shakespearicles.
Considering the author has said there’s a lot in these final chapters, I thought of something that I think could be possible, but probably isn’t, but it would be fun.
Nova runs into Flurry, also in disguise among the public, they start talking and hit it off, putting whatever he’s thinking about doing on hold. He starts sneaking out multiple times to see Flurry, going on dates with her. This continues for a long while, they eventually have sex, and THEN shit hits the fan.
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That sounds like an awesome pathway, i would be totally in for that.