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I think once they are in the Empire, Velvet and her husband are going to spill the beans to the elder two kids. May as well just make it all the more messed up becuase it would not make it any worse.
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I wish you could see me wringing my hands right now...
I don't know what surprises me anymore, how complicated the situation is between them, or how in Faust's name you manage to do it without ruining the story.
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<<< World's Strongest Writer™
Equestria's current feelings summarized
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Or maybe not until Twilight has sired Flurry Heart. Maybe it does take two alicorns to make a third.
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I think that it would have some karmic justice if they couldn’t get Shining Armor to become an alicorn and no matter what happens he and his father only produces fillies from here on out.
I still await for when Discord will get his punishment for what he did to Shining Armor.
And more sex, of course, between all parties.
I predict that Cadance will be ecstatic to hear that Shining can in fact release semen, but won’t take any chances. She’ll blow him or give him a hoof job first to see it for herself. Then she’ll take doses of fertility drugs (and maybe aphrodisiacs) so large that doctors would advise against it. And Flurry will be conceived.
So basically, now apart of Velvet and Night having a shared secret, Velvet and Shining's adds up. The question arises, Shining, now competent enough to plow, would be intercepted by Twilight or will it reach Cadance first? A mighty seed for a mighty steed.
I really like how you didn't kept Velvet and Night out of the frame in Cat's Cradle, really adds up nicely.
My felicitations on keeping your pace on this magnum size story, those who rode Liquid Pride can see the improvement and hope you don't feel rushed like LP did around the last part.
頑張って!
and here I thought this was dead
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as long as it stays not-dead, I'll be happy. Seriously, this story is like heroin to me.
It was short, but it’s was totally worth it to see what’s coming next
and LP2CC just gets better with time.
a grate new chapter World's Strongest Writer
Only minor typos, but I think the dialogue could have been handled better. You use 'said' a bit too much. Cadence said. Twilight said. Maybe mix it up a little so there's some flare. Twilight assured. Cadence intoned darkly. Just some suggestions on an otherwise fine read.
I'm disappointed there was no scene roughly like this
Velvet: I thought you where dead
Night Light: I've been getting that a lot
Velvet: Cadence? I thought you were dead too!
Cadence : Well-
Velvet: No, like REALLY dead! Shining told me you died!
Shining: What? No I didn't
V: you said she was gone
S: Oh... uh... yeah I did say that. I meant she'd been sent to tararus
V: *hugs Cadence and proceeds to beat shining with a thong [flip flop]*
As a Factorio player, I commiserate
Ok... If Velvet get a Alicorn foal... I honestly don't know if it will be Shining or Nightlights foal
Discord logic is very... Odd...
He sure lost all snuggel points with Fluttershy!
Sooo... Flurryheart incoming?
*Comment Section gets it*
Damn good point, Celestia should share it! Or stand beside it.
Wait... Flurryheart wasn't coming from his mother or?