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My ten minute spiral of Holy Shit aside, I have a question. Is that name a John Doe joke?
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Uh, yeah. Kinda. Shit, I just made it up when I got to that sentence.
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Amazing.
Oh my!!!!!
Why do I think they have a very good plan to hide the birth. I wonder how Celestia took the news?
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We will find out in the next chapter!
Wait, is that?
Two Archer references?! Well played sir, very well played!
FWIW though, there's a couple "You're Highness"es that shouldn't be.
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He's got electrolytes!
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fixed
Thanks Goldblum
Well this certainly isn’t how I expected it to go at all. I staright up thought there would be a small war when they suggested it.
I’m incredibly curious to see how this goes.
And hope for some lengthier sexy times than what we got here. I half expected it to be a good chunk of the chapter.
So the Sparkles finally go into revolt. Can't wait to see how this plays out or what Twilight's plan is.
O boy, things really getting interesting now. I wonder how it’s all gunna play out. I imagine Nightlight and Velvet just moved to the empire a good couple months after their “deaths”. Mourning with fellow family members, would also be an excuse for Cadance and Nightlight to rekindle what they once had. Also poor Spike looking basically his mother/sister/whatever figure, basically him and flurry being the only ones in the family who really think they’re dead. Not to mention how the other main six are guns react.
I’m really interested how it’s all gunna play out,
Celestia is going to be overthrown..
Brawn dough, sounds like john doe, I love it
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Shining recovered rather quickly from the truth about his family. I thought after initial shock and a bit of hysteria he'll be depressed and like: "All my life was a lie. I tried to do what is right... only to discover that I've been fucking another sister all this time and moreover made a foal with her. I don't know anything anymore, Twilight"
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This is a direct quote from someone I witnessed have their entire life get destroyed in moments. He had just gotten back from a deployment and he was about to put a down payment on a house, and his wife served him divorce papers, drained his back account and was fucking is best friend. (He ended up getting himself back on his feet, but he basically lost everything and had to rely on his other friends for help while he started his life over from scratch.) I was there are the airport when he got served, and he found out after a call to the bank a few minutes later that he had $25 in his savings account, and not the $30,000 he had been saving. I thought he was going to run out into traffic, but he just chuckled. I asked him why, and that was what he said. Different people react to stress in different ways.
Luna is gonna have the Castle bakery put together the largest cake ever imagined by Ponykind for Celestia, with 4 words in elegant icing on the side: "I told you so."
Well, I suppose he does mutilate Twilight's thirst.
I suppose it was too late for Twilight to sneak the scroll back into that closet and let Celestia think she succeeded.
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holy shit
Me, finding out we're being treated to a two-parter to Cat's Cradle:
YEEEES!
Also me, finding out the final act won't be nearly as long as the first two acts:
NOOOO!
celestia isnt that stupid that she doesnt know what is up
she knows that twilight probably stole the scroll, and its VERY convinient that she and shining just HAPPEN to die a short time afterwards!
for all we know this is a 4D chess manuever from Celestia
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Then again Celestia probably found out about her scroll missing and thinking Twilight and Shining couldn't take the truth. Thus killing them selves.
Twilight could've use something like a forget me spell or something on Candace and their parents to make things more realistic.
Typo
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It's not.
Well, finally caught up to the story, and its been a trippy ride, thank you and I will look forward to the next chapter
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Well considering the fact that when Twilight looked at it initially she saw a few branches that didn’t come back into the tree I bet once Celestia stops grieving she will go looking back through the tree for the parts she sniped to see if they have any offspring to breed Flurry with. Once she realizes her scroll is missing then all hell will break loose. I bet Twilight will wish she had grabbed the books.
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This one feels a bit rushed, compared to other pacing, Like once Twilight finds the scroll everything seems to go Boing Boing Splat. Though it may just be me.
correct me if im wrong but this ending is way different then the first cats cradle
"Zephyr Breeze?" Rainbow Dash groaned.
Hope this means we get some Fluttercest somewhere down the road in this fic.
Perfect Song for this chapter, especially the Twi-Shining scene: Sexual Healing by Marvin Gaye.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eA4_O3oeJCw
O this is a amazing twist to the story,, grate righting team.
I just thought of something. What’s going through Cadance’s head now that she know she not only has a brother that she’s been fucking and had a kid with, but that she also had sex with her dad?
On a related note, with Shining in hiding, how’s she dealing with her own needs? Guards? There’s certainly no issue with unwanted pregnancy after a certain misfortune. Or maybe something that someoen else already suggested...
At this point, in a WSW™️ story, I wouldn’t be surprised.
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"What’s going through Cadance’s head now that she know she not only has a brother that she’s been fucking and had a kid with, but that she also had sex with her dad?"
Kinky things obviously.
A very impressive climax to act two. I look forward to reading what you get out next!
But that goes without saying, as I've yet to not enjoy something by Shakespearicles!
Though I do have one question. What's to stop Celestia from trying to use Night in Shining's place?
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There's a reason I worded it so vague. Didn't wanna spoil anything for the new readers. :p
feels totes rushed and weird.......i dont get it....if twiggy were to have foal(colt) why'd celestia take it??? all she wants is its dick as soon as its old enough to work....
Edit: feels super rushed....after a like a few years and bagillion words of reading we just get a 2 minute fuck session and knock up??? kinda mega underwhelming.....
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I'm gonna come back and rework the end of act 2 before moving on to act 3.
Add some more to smooth out the pacing. Probably break this up into two chapters.
If it had been me, I'd have left that as a cliffhanger.
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I was gonna say... I thought this was the end and was thinking 'wow, this wrapped up more abruptly than the first one even did'.
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oh, no. This is nowhere NEAR the end. Don't you worry about that. There is so SO much more that is going to happen.
LOL I was about to comment “I dunno the ending felt rushed” then I saw “End if Act 2” OH SHIT.
My question is how did Celestia not gone flipping batshit crazy from hearing about the "death" of the siblings...?
Or will that be the start of the next chapter of Act 3?
Also now thinking about it wouldn't the Cutie Map in Twilight's castle be able to easily find the siblings in hiding?
As happened once before...
Finally got caught up on this. I'm on the edge of my seat, Shakey. Looking forward to whenever you begin Act 3. ^_^