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Haha, someone's salty about the princess' handling of Tirek and Discord's falling for Tirek's BS. Good thing they got him proper the next time around.
Okay I know you are following the show and leaving out SOME parts, but are you not going to do ANYTHING about Equestria Girls, I mean surely you would have Sunset Shimmer at least mentioned at some point during the story.
I wonder if this was Discord’s plan the entire time. To beyond a doubt really mess up Celestia’s crazy breeding program. I think that this is all about to become one giant mess and every party is going to be turning on Celestia very shortly.
No matter how much you try to smooth out the season 4 finale, a ton of lumps remain.
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Thank you. Fixed!
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*ominous laughter*
Huh. So THAT was the payoff on that.
Yeah, Celestia was on a low streak in seasons 3 and 4 with her handling of various things being pretty boneheaded. Especially her plan B for Tirek of "Instead of all of the princesses going into hiding so Tirek has 4 targets to find, we'll give our magic to Twilight, giving him only one target, and then don't do anything to hide her, nevermind that he's already working with someone who knows about her."
Also on another topic, saying you don't kill your enemies doesn't make you sound like the good guy when what you do do to them is arguably worse, like turning them to stone with the implications that they're still aware the whole time, or putting them in a magical prison where there's no release, not even death.
If I didn't know better, and if it weren't for the fact that Aegis seems to be a common name for guardsponies among writers on this site, a large part of me would wonder if the World's Strongest Writer was intentionally referencing one of my own characters or if this was just a happy littke coincidence.
dang this a lot of cum.
if Velvet is not pregnant after this well ok that is silly of cores she is hum who will the new foal be.
some how i have a feeling it will be a Alicorn.
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Mostly the fact that Aegis is a common name for a guard pony. I've used him in several stories as a senior-enlisted Royal Guard. So unfortunately, it's just a coincidence.
Private Camisa Roja, and Lieutenant Sea Cay are also recurring O.C. guards of mine.
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That's what I figured. I've seen several Aegises, it's jist that this one had the same rank and seemed to have the same snarky disposition (but then again, in this fandom, which characters ARENT snarky?). If he were Braytish, then I really would have seriously considered it.
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Yes.
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While I would like so see Sunset, I don't think the story needs her, unless she has a connection to the breeding Plan - which is not likely, because of how the Plan is structured ~ logic error.
I hope Sunset plays a role in the Pinecrest Resort sequel(s) that might or might not come, since Shining + Sunset are quite the interesting ship.
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Disrupting a perfect plan is basicly his thing.
I'm glad that you went with the "faking it all along" route.
Still can't believe that he really trusted Tirek in the actual show, when I see the obvious hints for his guiding hand
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Not the way I see it. Twilight is the whole spanner in the works. Shining Armor cannot fully commit to Cadence with Twilight competing for his heart. With how the plan keeps being repeated sooner or later it was bound to happen where the pairing just couldn't happen. What would have happened if one of the siblings had been attracted to the same sex? Celestia always intended for Shining Armor to marry his sibling, she just chose the wrong one. Then again if Twilight Velvet had properly socialized her kids Twilight Sparkle and Shining Armor wouldn't be in this predicament. Of corse then we wouldn't be having all of this fun drama because she did it this way.
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Doesn't mean he has to succed. (Disrupting doesn't mean destroy)
"Let's mess with it and see what happens, could get funny" - sounds like Discord.
If he really wanted to stop the Plan, he could do so in many other ways.
So Discord has to die like on principal, right? Or be temporarily trapped in normal pony form and forced to endure the same torture Shining did?
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Spoiler alert: Discord has his comeuppance coming.
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Theirs is a special relationship.
Short bus that is.
When is Shining going to frog his dad?
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I dunno man...
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As a bisexual, I demand equal representation in smut and have the means to see it done! I'M A PROTECTED CLASS GOSH DARN IT!
Also its only gay if it involves kissing. Everyone knows that, unless you're one of those inferior orientations <spits in disgust>
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Kneel before the glorious bisexual master race
Read the first few chapters. Gonna keep going a while longer. :)
I feel like the double use of the word “look” in this sentence makes it a bit clunky and awkward.
As soon as I read this line and figured out what was about to happen to the potion, I leapt out of bed and exclaimed “oh shit! Shakes you clever bastard.” The result of what would happen when the potion was destroyed though, I definitely didn’t see that one concert.
I think you’re overdoing this trick now. It was good in the first chapter, okay during the chess scene, but I think doing it a third time (especially so soon after the second) just seems a little cheap.
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Yeah. Me too.
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Not the worst movie I have ever seen, but certainly the one that most ENRAGED me. I am a sucker for alien contact/ invasion movies, and I was so psyched to see it, and then that nonsensical twist ending.... it was like the movie had roundhouse kicked me in the face.
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Eh I'm generally oblivious of reverse psychology.
Too much verbatim with the show. A quick summary paragraph catching us up would be much better. I understand if you have a small joke in there. But it doesn't seem worth it to me if you have to read an entire episode before you get to it.
Shining is the butt end of the Authors jokes in this story... Poor mega Stud...
Kingdom Come - The game comes to mind.
Twilight and Celestia are not so different in the end?
Both just want to be a mother...
Just Celestia has more years and the weight of a entire race to shoulder.
Shining Armor getting the stick end from birth to his eventually ending like every other mortal.
He sure had not the best life, but there are fates worse than his.
Something I wonder, once Shining Armor will eventually help sire Flurryheart... Why would Celestia and Luna not go for him as a mate. After all he will have by than created one Alicorn already.
Unlike Celestias and Lynas former lovers he is 98% Alicorn after all.