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Yes! You are a F***ing c*** tease! You know that?
Anyway, great work as always!
So Twilight is sure she bear another foal? Well her pregnancy with Nova seems to be different from Cadence's pregnancy
Was refreshing to get Twilight's and Shining's perspective again.
Luna and Discord are both grabbing the biggest tubs of popcorn they can conjure right before giving Celestia just enough rope to hang herself with.
They are enjoying themselves way too much watching the slow motion car wreck.
So Twilight can still have another foal. Well at least Discord knows how to stir the pot. I wonder how Celestia will take that ominous name and how long the rest of the bearers will be left in the dark?
All we know is Twilight can be in estrus. Not indicative of conception yet. Also, kinda disappoint ya didn't have a paragraph there describing how different the sex is now that she had her first foal. If there was to be any difference.
Part of me hopes Luna will help the Sparkles, but before she does, in order to "prove" that she wants to help. She tells them what she really thinks of them. "disgusting abominations" that was the reason she went to war against Celestia, to prevent their very existence. But now she's okay with it.
Either that, or she'll help Celestia, because sisters should share everything, if ya know what I mean. But I think her feeling of the former is still strong enough that won't come to be. But it seems to me she just enjoys watching Celestia self destruct. But I don't think she knows how heinous things have gotten with her with all the deaths.
Celestia is also turning her back on her promises. She was supposed to care and look after Night Light's adoptive family, and now its got me wondering what's going on with his adoptive father knowing 2 of his sons are dead. Also, was there a third brother or no? if not, that means that family line is gone. Tragic.
Edit. Going back to Air tenders analogy about bananas. And the following Invincible reference. Having Celestia fall victim to the virus which caused the extinction of the Alicorns would be a hell of an ending. I'm on the fence whether she should survive. She could live as a mortal and have as many foals as she can. Or be imprisoned and never have a chance.
Well Celestia, with all the $hit you did and have done to the Sparkle clan and alienated your allies what would you expect to happen. Twilight won't let you near her colt or any foals of hers and her clan will probably not be easy to forget or forgive your actions that you have done to them.
A new star will be born or one will die
Why not both? Either Twi gets knocked up again or Celly gets what she wants with Flurry and Nova but she gets killed. Idk man, I just wanna see Flurry and Nova unleash hell on Celestia
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A Prince with the power to vanquish the Dark Princess approaches. Born to the family who have thrice defied her, born after a zeplin died. And the Dark Princess will mark him as her equal, but he will have power the Dark Princess knows not... and either must die at the hoof of the other for neither can live while the other survives.
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Night light, Mage Star and Air Tenders father has been dead a while now
is it wrong that i am hopping the castle garden gets a new stone statue.??
how long till nova meets his cousin and helps with the plan?
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Not likely. But how crazy would it be if they never taught him about her. Or if they did and they fell in love anyway.
And Luna's officially off the books as an ally... Drat. She may not have gone as far as Celestia but even if she doesn't actively help Celestia it's obvious now she wouldn't pass up the chance to use Nova to fulfill her own desires.
Meanwhile, despite Discord's not quite subtle warning to not mess with Fluttershy, I wonder how long it'll be before Celestia goes after the rest of the Element bearers to use as leverage against Twilight?
Odd thought I felt like sharing, the idea of seeing Pinkie Pie mad at Twilight for all the parties she missed getting to throw for her and Nova then pulling out a scroll and going into detail the kinds of parties and the total number heh heh
I came (ha ha) for a scheme to make incest happen and I’ve stayed…in the hopes of more incest happening, but also to see how this whole debacle concludes
We all know the truth: there’s no going back. She’s changed things. Forever.
Prediction for the first time Nova and Flurry meet/see each other
“Wow! He’s cute!”
“Wow! She’s beautiful!”
Oh shit! I didn't notice the story image changed, I was wondering what nova's cutie mark looked like. I had something more foreboding in mind.
Edit. I still liked the way it looked. Celestia's unease made it seem like it was something more heinous.
Maybe instead of describing it as a "broken" six pointed star. How about a "mark with six separate geometricly shaped points making up a yellow six-pointed star, very much like the signature mark of the Sparkle family line."
That's a bit wordy. But it's what I got on the spot without much thought.
Discord really is the bane of all MLP protagonists.
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At least they’re only half-siblings
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Don't count our dear dream mare of the moon, off the ally books right just now. I have a feeling that she is like a Severus Snape of this universe with Celestia being Voldemort & Discord being chaos Albus Dumbledore.
Upvote this comment if you, like me, are on Team NovaHeart.
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I know , I JUST noticed it as well, that is SO cool!
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It's neat to know for certain what it looks like but I kind of prefer the previous image, it was less spoiler to someone new to this story and added to the the atmosphere with the ominous Celestia
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Well I hope those of you following along committed it to memory...
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The former did provide mystery and intrigue among other things I'm too dumb to think of on the spot.
Maybe reintroduce it within the chapters at the start of each arc? And progress it as the story progresses. Like have it just Velvet and Night light. Then V, NL, and cadence once she's born, then Shining and so on...
your*?
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I did, Well I hope I didn't spoil your fun with the new story image :(
you know, with buckball being a three person team game in canon, it makes me hope twi has twins for that sweet sweet twincest.
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Fixed.
I do have 2 theories about the question if Twilight Sparkle can have more foals or not & about the virus that almost exterminated the Alicorns.
Theory 1. I do belive that Twilight Sparkle is barren just like her Big Sis. The reason being that both sisters were not natural born alicorns, but rather made one. Making them just short of the of being absolute full blooded alicorns like their foals are. And i do belive that an Alicorn that wasn't born one but made, does not have the extra strong wombs + extra high healing factor needed for repeated births of natural bron Alicrons. And that any made Alicorn giving brith to a natural Alicron will be a glass canon, it will do the job, but only 1 time before it shatters.
Theory 2. I do belive that if said Virus appear again, that these new Alicrons would be immune to it & that only Celestia & Luna would be in danger. With them being Alicrons 1.0 & not Alicorns 2.0 like Flurry & Nova. & That Celestia would have spent the last 1000+ years finding out what kind of virus it was & making dame sure that it couldn't ever strike again.
This is my theories, tell me what you think of them.
We've seen how powerful Flurry is, now I'm wondering how powerful Nova will be.
Also...damn you and your cock-teasing cliffhangers! Now I want more!
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I love how ever chapter in this story makes me think “surely this can’t get any more twisted than it already is” and then it gets more twisted than it already is. This is going to be one heck of an unraveling.
(Original comment was pointing out a typo)
Is it just me or does anyone eles here wish that Celestia got some numbers wrong in her science calculations & that Shining Armor in fact does have the ability to ascend to an Alicorn with the extra help of his family. Making him the Prince of Family?
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Fixed. Thank you.
"Oh, to be a fly on the wall…"
It's been years and yet I instantly got it.
Jeesus I'm almost tempted to tell people about this story it's so good!
But... you know...
I enjoyed this much more when it was a (mostly) feel good forbidden love story. The last few chapters got dark fast and now I’m just kinda sad and feeling drained. Still interested in what happens next but some of the characters actions seem too rash and out of place based on their earlier personalities.
I'm pretty sure you got that one line from Dogma. Nice. I like how Discord is just taking a back seat and watching the tyrants hang themselves.
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Which line?
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Faith vs. gullability.
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Ah, yes.
typo
Why was Nova's dream not warded? In Manehattan, clearly the ponies themselves warded their dreams, but the room was penetrable to dreamwalking, since Luna found the unborn Nova's dream. Here they merely ward the room but not the colt himself against dreamwalking? I feel like with as cautious as Twilight has had to be over the years, she would have redundant systems in place. Or did Discord remove the protections when Nova opened the window?
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Nova opening the window broke the ward,
as Discord knew it would.
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Because plot had to happen maybe?
Celestia should have never rushed things. All it did was destroy bridges indefinitely.
Luna is still not letting Celestia be alone. Yet...?