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That beginning...
A teaspoon of semen makes the incest go down!~♪♪
Oh my sweet Jesus this is...this is just TOO MUCH! I love it!
Keep up the good work my good man
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The entire chapter was more cute than anything. Shows they love each other a lot. Can't wait for the awkward to be dialed up more.
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omg yes! turn it up it's glorius!
pic below for the lol's
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Yees!!!Finally gets to the parts I was waiting for
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So it has begun.
I noticed this had similar wording to something else, but it wasn't exact, so I didn't think it was anything else. And then...
Anyone else feeling schwifty?
What do you mean, Velvet? You're in a Shake story. Of course there's gonna be an Archer reference.
The breast feeding and unintentionally triggered orgasm felt like firing a blank, or a BB gun. This feels like cocking the gun with the live round.
Aim true, Checkov. Aim true. We're all counting on you.
Here's hoping she doesn't end up looking like a boiled cow hemorrhoid, or getting thrown down a space station reactor shaft to the Who's "Baba O Riley", like that other guy.
Aw yeah, we're starting to come around to the ShiningSparkle. Keep up the good work, Shakey! I'm loving it!
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That moment when the plot thickens.
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I guess since that biography is all about the new Alicorn ruling race they should just call it "The Aristocrats"
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That should be canon in this story now.
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Hmmmm, hot~ Chugging in front of hot mom like you don't care.
Lets see what a horse.... Oh god.
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Okay then.
*cracks knuckles*
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K O'd
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lmao well played
.-. this chapter... Ok whatever.
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He was staying
in the sweltering (???)
Combine (it's been a while lol)
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So, is this basically a re-write/alternate version of LP?
Not that Im complaining, this direction has SO much more potential, and the original was already good.
O MY this is just so good. this is going to be a vary interesting talk cumming up.
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"Non-serious" enough yet?
Actually, I semi-agree with you. But for me it's a 'grass is greener' situation for me. I've read both types of stories and either one leaves me yearning for the other. And unfortunately, the 'non-serious' version of this story would have a far louder outcry for the moral implications involved if they were to just be brushed over, and I would have to agree. Especially in a story as big as this one.
As a reader I could, upon reading this from the outside, wish that those sort of problems were a non-issue, in-universe. But we are all of us shaped by our cultural biases. And we can't help but question the fantasy through that moral lens.
I have a foot in both camps on this. I agree with you, and I would likewise want to see what you are describing. But I am positively certain that I, and indeed most readers upon getting that version, would prefer this version more in the end. I just hope that your intrigue outweighs your disappointment for the course of the 'slightly uncomfortable ride'.
I assure you. I have many far-less-serious stories on the horizon once I complete this story.
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Oh, I'm absolutely going to stick around, even if it wasn't quite what I was expecting. It's interesting and very well-written, and I've got to say that you've got me hooked on seeing more even if the moral issues being raised do not have any obvious answers. It can't all be sunshine and happiness at all times, right? And I can admit, if you had written a story like this but where nobody really concerned themselves too much about giving up their firstborn foal and the story really focused on the sex and romance aspects of it, I'd certainly enjoy it but I would probably be thinking to myself, "Wow, I sure would have loved to see what this story would have been like if the author had taken these ideas more seriously. Can you imagine how Night Light and Velvet would have to deal with the bombshell that they're brother and sister? Surely they'd do more than shrug and go back to fucking like they did in this (hypothetical and nonexistent) story."
tl;dr: you did a good
I'm seeing a pattern here, I think. And I also remember your blog on the topic
"It's only weird if you make it weird" indeed. Great story
I absolutely love the unexpected chapter endings
Innocent So cute
This is absolutely hilarious. This story needs way more likes 👍
This is where the fun continues 🤝