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I can't wait until Celestia comes clean to Shining Armor and Cadance. I bet no one in the Sparkle family will ever be able to look at one another easily again. With just how crazy these two generations are I worry about Flurry Heart and if Twilight where ever to have a foal.
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well poo.
plan a hum.
shining can get the job dune.
There is a quotation mark missing at the beginning.
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I cannot wait to see the big reveal! When Flurry arrives... And when Twilie finally gets her wish.
inb4 Twilight is actually pregnant this time, but her ascention causes her to misscarry.
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I had seriously considered that as a possibility when I was drafting my outline. Taking the alicorn magic of her unborn (alicorn) foal to ascend her (as we see in the sequence).
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But that would have raised more questions about the nature and necessity of Starswirl's spell, Twilight "creating new magic", and frankly, would have taken the story into a darker direction than I want it to go.
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I was hoping that would put a smile on your face.
I had to check this out for myself. Innocuous as the source may be, it takes on a very different feel in pony form, especially from you.
Is a good thing Cadance insisted on using a qualified hair dresser.
Seriously, binging this story has worn me out, and I'm dying to see the reveals and aftermath. Not to mention the whole bit you set up at the very beginning, which I assume will be Act 3.
*reaches the current end point* well...now what...the whole thing between cadence shining and twilight is reaching boiling point levels of awkward here....
somethings gotta give, and soon...
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I was largely speaking in relation to their knowledge in the first story. By roughly this point, he was well into puberty and she had experienced changes and been doing ample research. I was just noting the difference.
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While I’ve never heard of a tree transplanted to open soil and allowed to grow freely being considered bonsai, I’m far from an expert on the topic. Still, what the story describes is a tree that naturally grows extremely slowly and is only as large as it is because it is so very old. That doesn’t sound like what you’re talking about.
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> points aggressively at the word 'Fiction' on the website
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Oh gosh, if ever a few words needed to be expanded. I love when Discord and Celestia have a few moments of honest heart to heart and this could have been even more amazing. It's good now, the quick awkward realization and quick vulnerable exit, but... Oh man.
I can think of a explanation why Luna and Celestia might never have a Foal.
Females are born with a finate amount of eggs in their body's. Meaning they eventually run out of eggs that can mature in them and get released in the heat cycle. One problem of a imortal body, unless it can regenerate lost part (a limb etc), they will run out of eggs in the ovaries that get send to the Womb.
Celestia & Luna simply waited to long / are to late.
Unless they are compatible with Twilight or Cadance...
There are medical procedures that can basically make clone baby's by using genetic material from the female to substitute for a male seed and other stuff that medical science can accomplish.
Pretty impressive stuff I found on Google.
But maybe the solution can be found outside Equestria.
Be it space or mirror universes.
Are the Pillars of Equestria like Rockhoof etc, not trapped in limbo with the pony of shadows?
I wonder Celestia could get her wish for motherhood granted like that. The story 'Off the Mark' with its many sequels comes to mind where Equestria started to travel parallel universes after the main story is over in its sequels.
Griffon Celestia inspired a story where I made Cadance a Griffon immortal
Anyway... Regeneration of tissue if worked on the body might solve any infertility for stallion and mare alike.
Battlewound damaged reproduction organs? Maybe growing it a new would be ideal.
Great chapter.
To bad Discord didn't play the other way around, giving Celestia the stallion parts and prolonged the running dark joke.
This is when Celestia is supposed to ask if it would work the other way around. But she doesn't think of that. Because her greed has blinded her to various obvious solutions to her problems
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Yes and no.
Yes, Celestia is the one that wants to have a foal for herself.
But no, the alternative is not quite so obvious. We as readers have a bird's eye view of the situation, and upon re-reading it, we know the larger picture in light of the ending.
But the alternative solution is not so obvious to Celestia in this scene because the way Discord tells it to her makes it sound like he can't give any mare, including herself, a fertile penis.
Whether or not this is intentional lying by omission on his part, I'll leave up to the readers' interpretation.
But at the same time, one has to wonder if Celestia, (at this point in the story), would even take the other choice if it were offered.