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Hmm Was Twilight Sparkle an unforeseen child?
Welp. That is going to leave an amorphous ball of feeling in my gut for the day.
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One problem, Alicorns also have Earth Pony magic and power. .. you failed to account for them.
Hands down best Fausitcorn implementation I’ve ever seen: background pony, not disruptive, fitting with the flow of the story and knowing or not about it does not alter anything in the story. 13/10 would read again.
Also, my incest-o-meter broke. Again.
I’m liking this way too much
8613796 In this particular exchange in this particular chapter, yes, that point gets omitted. But don't worry, I still account for it in the story.
I suspected that last part when looking at the cover. https://youtu.be/hWozHt9wbO4?t=1m59s
And I'm fairly certain I know who the future/alternate world unicorn is.
And I've figured out this is a splitting into a new reality type of time travel, not like (my preferred, non depressing perspective of) Back to Future where it's just one timeline that can be rewritten. Here's the thing though, the explanation in this chapter is the same as the one in the first story (I'm pretty sure), and Twilight from show continuity is dealing with a certain cunts (the not fun kind) time fuckery and is looking to fix the past of this timeline, but if it's the exact same explanation as before, then I'd take that to mean she's ensured how this timeline plays out. So unless she changes something to rectify all the evil/kind of evil shit with Celestia and Luna and improve this timeline, then it's gonna stay as is, but that would mean having a combo of reality changing, where seperate timelines can be altered without creating whole new ones. I feel like I should be confused.
Let's see what fuckin happens!
One thing I hope will happen is Cadance, Twi and Shine find out they're all siblings and make the eventual sex times when the former is older even hotter. *Looks at author name* Let me rephrase: I can't wait for when that happens.
Except Alicorns have the powers of all three tribes. If you get alicorns by simply selective breeding pegasi and unicorns, where does the earth pony genetics come in? They wouldn’t be true alicorns, just pegacorns. 🤔
So the entire Sparkle family line is composed of sibsin/cousling fuckers. (I'm sure there's a third thing in there, but I don't know what because I'm pretty sure no one has ever thought of this. Maybe....second cousin? No, that would be sex with your cousin's kid. Which could double as unciece or aunphew and Sam or....Dater, or Daud? WHY AM I COMING UP WITH THESE COMBO NAMES?! And we haven't been told this goes on in this universe *looks at author name* but I have good rea- no, I have all the reason to believe it does/will. Yay. Wait, what was I talking about?)
wow was i wrong about this.
and at the same time this is going to really get good now as things come full circle.
This is turning into one of my Crusader Kings 2 games.
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Just as two Earth ponies like Carrot Cake and Cup Cake were able to have a Unicorn and a Pegasus foal;
It is possible for two Unicorns like Night Light and Twilight Velvet to have a Pegasus (or an Earth pony). Because there is Pegasus in their family tree. AND Earth pony too, even if it isn't explicitly stated in this particular scene.
You get Alicorns by selective breeding Pegasi and Unicorns that ALSO have the right mix of Earth pony genes, even if they are not visibly presented. It is anything but simple. This is why it is such a monumental task for Celestia to undertake.
Fuck you Celestia and your pony Eugenics...
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I have no problems with two unicorns having a pegusas foal, as long as we know that there are pegusas in the direct line above them
My critic is because it seems as though you didn't mention that there is Earth Pony in the family bloodline, a line drop from Celestia stating that at first it didn't seem to be working just mixing Pegasus and Unicorn but with a few Earth Ponies in the mix things started to turn things around... just a thought to help clarify.
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That's not Eugenics, it's selected breeding.
8614177 Done!
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It kind of is, by definition.
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We were talking about ponies and eugenics deals with eliminating 'detective' blood lines, via various forms of sterliatiztion. I am from Norwich, CT home of the old Norwich Mental Hospital the East Coast Capital of Eugenics.
Celestia is selectively breeding this family to beget another alicorn. She's not making ponies without the alicorn traits from being able to have offspring.
Knew it was Cadance. You and that sneaky cover art.
Although, that's the only I figured out.
Are there anymore surprises, Master Shake?
I mean, Mister Shake?
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There's more [genetic] distillation going on here than in a Sunoco refinery! I want my incestual distillates the highest octane you have, none of that low-grade stuff.
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"Please don't make our sacrifice become in vane!"
*vain
Also:
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I love how you take into account the Westermarck effect and perhaps even GSA in the writing of this story. I don't know how intentional or how much for plot but its really nice to see such a realistic take on the actual mental and emotional drivers and hindrances to incest. The fetish and taboo of incest has its own appeal to me obviously or I wouldn't have read the first Liquid Pride or be reading this one but to see the more realistic aspects taken into account as well is a very unique and welcome addition to such a story. This is a truly amazing story with so much potential and I am very eagerly looking forward to more. Thank you.
8615693 Bruh... I don't even have the words... I'm touched.
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Thank you.
And, you're welcome.
Incest on top of incest. Let the depravity begin!
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The symbolism is there so it is what it is, im not going to let such a minor detail ruin the rest of the fic. I just felt the original art of Bonsai was a stronger metaphor for what she is doing. But cant fully judge that until I read the whole thing. So keep it up.
well damn now this is a utter mind fuck xD not only does shining armor knock up twilight sparkle in the end... but.... he knocks up cadance who in this timelime is actually his sister as well xD getting balls deep in both his siblings x3 heh kinky
So that's what Celestia's plan was, huh? Maybe in Equestria genetics works differently but, if my memory doesn't fail me (I am a student of medical university), one-time incest in a family with healthy gene pool will do fine. If a family practice incest for generations, it's strange that Night Light and Twilight Velvet weren't born with severe diseases.
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I'm gonna file this under 'Fiction'.
I FUCKING CALLED IT. Not actually that difficult because incest is a theme in this series, but still.
Oh shit. Man, tryna guarantee one boy and one girl must've been a bitch. I'm just glad that none of them pulled a Henry VIII.
Ok, well 1st off, I was wrong about it being Shining, but DAMN nice twist. Means that he got in with both his sisters.
Wow, that felt weird to type.
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C'mon man, you can't be doing this to me
*it's
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Actually the danger of multi-generational incest depends on the number of chromosomes something has. Humans for instance have 23 pairs. I didn't dig up the number a pony has but it is easy to find out how many horses have given so much breeding is done for racing so that number is a lot more out there. They have 32 pairs. This makes interbreeding them a much less risky proposition even over multiple generations. In fact its a rather common occurrence in the real world in order to continue champion racing bloodlines. Now nothing like on the scale of what Celestia has done but a lot more than what the vast majority of humans ever end up in. So while still likely increasing genetic risk to a fair degree over so many generations its not the same threat it would be if it was a human family.
Then again we are dealing with a world where magic moves the sun and moon. Celestia could be hiding some magic to prevent double recessive results, other than the ones she wants, in the offspring.
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man this is a mind blow chap i ask you if you find some of my brain in your house.
sorry for the brain joke but i fell that was necessary
I would say i called it but i was looking too small scale. damn this was a total mind fuck. Loved it.
This was a fun backstory.
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That's how I do.
Damn, dude. Just... Damn. I wasn't too caught off guard by the opening of the chapter, but that ending...
WOOOAHHH! Holy crap, I did not see that coming!
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Hold on to your butts, because this rollercoaster of a story has more twists than a pretzel!
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That clip sums up my reaction perfectly.
So Celestia basically turned Canterlot into pony Deliverance, just with less squeal piggy, squeal?
Oof, this chapter… disgusted me. It felt like a betrayal of characters, and ruins future characters too if you realize that Cadence and Shining are siblings. I do not like incest. I rarely give downvotes to stories, but this one is an exception.
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what else were you expecting?... the story's image and title is not really hiding the fact the there is going to be incest in the story...
First of all
And second of all https://youtu.be/FNIeQDP37Nc
O fuck! Those are the reasons why she forbidden it!!!
My fucking mind is blow!!! Shiiit... I love this story
Kay I wasn’t expecting that….