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Nice 'Signs' reference, I personally always liked that movie despite what everyone else says.
Damn, pretty emotional at the end their, I look forward to where this all goes.
Keep up the good work my good man
8975748 I did not think that anyone would get that.
Wow, Trixie and Maud working in a Brothel together, VERY KINKY.
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Eh, got lucky. You could probably do a hundred more and i wouldn't get any of them
The whole Shining's bachelor party where he's attended to by Trixie scenario, and they don't have sex?
What unholy, pleasure depriving witchcraft is this?!
If shakespericles was a car it'd have no steering wheel or brakes because fuck you where he's taking you those'll be the least of your worries with all the twists he's gonna do. And all you can do is scream, cry and ask yourself why you took a ride with him in the first place but then smile and lose your sanity because somehow in the end he pulls a 1440° tailspin parallel park with just a milimeter of clearance from the curb as if everything fit perfectly.
this is a different twist to the wedding i like how this is looking.
so Shining is going to be a dad sever , several times over now. interesting.
8976899 That's going on my user page.
I'm not sure if you'd made the joke already and I'd just forgotten [supressed] it but I hate you so much for the Lieutenant Sea Cay pun...
Worse than Ram C.
As soon as I heard strip club and Trixie, I knew exactly which pic this was a reference to.
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What was the reference? I may have caught one, but I'm not sure...
Yo, holy shit. It's at this point that I am reminded of why I choose not to write: I can't put my thoughts into words. You're doing great though Shake. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
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V.I.P.'s (the period after P)
Behind them, a pegasus chariot
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Eh whatever, she was flustered and messed up?
Those fuck-wits (???)
The fuck-wits (???)
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brother's
You wrote this part after some dialogue, but it's separate enough that you could make it its own sentence. Just capitalize it I guess.
lifted
i'm dYING
Even though this passage is about Shining, I get the sense that Trixie, like the geology hammer, also swings both ways.
On a more serious note, the end of this chapter was very well written. Chrysalis' conversation with Shining was so good? I could tell she was asking leading questions, but in a way that Shiny would never know the difference. The ending tore my heart out, but at least Shining is starting to realize his feelings.
I always wondered why Chrysalis never replaced Shining, seeing as Cadance is the literal princess of food to her. The obvious reason is that Hasbro doesn't want a 'female' character pretending to be a male for a lesbian wedding, but that doesn't explain why no one's talked about it in fanfic very much either.
All in all, a good chapter. Thanks for bestowing it on the fans despite all the trouble at work!
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The scene where Phoenix's character was talking to that military sergeant.
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Alrighty then, yeah, I didn't catch that
8978563 Thank you. Fixed.
so shinning is the who's trapped now, that's an interesting canon divergence
A real EPIC get-together with Twilight is coming soon right? So intense that puts El Toro coaster to shame?
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So we are now Just fucking quoting Signs ?
God I hate that movie. lol.
"Trixie was an only foal to a single mother. She fantasized about what it must have been like to be Twilight herself, growing up with such a stud for a brother. "Mmm," she hummed."
Calling it now. Trixie is also a part of NAZI-lestia's unholy eugenic experiments. Likely also related to the Sparkle family in some way. Likely from a cousin branch unless it's revealed that Velvet or Night Light had an affair we didn't know about it. This combined with your comment earlier that said that the Sparkle Family wasn't the only branch in that bonsai tree she started a millennia ago lead me also to think that other main character unicorns from the show like Starlight and Sunset are probably related to the Sparkle line in some fashion.
Quite the deviation of the original unless Cadance is not as potent currently and Chrysalis changes her mind.
Is Chrysalis retarded? Don't she know Celestia or a lot of Unicorns are needed to keep the day cycle running?
This makes no sense, the salting of fertile farm land makes it impossible to use it again.
A farmer that cares for his lifestock, can harvest the produce over and over...
Chrysalis can't pull that stunt more than ones or twice, since the national community would get wind of the Shape-shifting race.