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8626436 Fixed! Thank you.
You forgot to add "fucking" and have her holding a shotgun.
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yay update!
i had this really odd comment in mind for this chapter but,
all i can really say is this is a vary in lighting chapter.
the breeding graph celesta is referring to i have scene.
breeders call it line breeding rather than incest, the same as they call a horse a red roan so you don't have to say you ride a pink horse.
this story is above the norm for Shakespearicles yes this is clop but at the same time this is a super good slice of life.
i doff my hat to you sir exultant writing.
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I have a feeling we will discover alongside with Celestia what caused the collapse of the Alicorn race.
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Yeah, it explains a lot. Even, referring to origin, it's convincing why Flurry Heart is alicorn. But even if it was the matter they wouldn't explain it like this in child cartoon. And if it's true, so Celestia let Twilight Velvet and Night Light to have another foal (Twilight Sparkle) but her main goal was marriage of Cadence and Shining Armor? Now it is clear why the relationship between Shining and his younger sister was unacceptable for Celestia. But why? Was it lesser chance that they would have an alicorn children or Princess was too concerned on her original plan?
Sweet. Now just don't have another daughter first, eh?
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Ok, first off, *discrete
Second off, discrete doesn't even work here. It means separate and distinct; number of people in a room is discrete (you will always have whole numbers), but shininess of armor really isn't.
Delete "And", combine
Shakey, this is excellent so far. I'm well and truly engrossed at this point, and I'm looking forward to what's ahead. Well done! ^_^
sure has been a long week....
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Dude, it had been a long month!
Sh!t has just been sideways IRL.
Srsly want to get back on this asap.
I love throwbacks.
i stand corrected about her useing magic to help things along...going with the 'life found a way' road eh?
SCIENCE!
also, I'm a little confused at the end, who was it who said "Oh, what tangled webs we weave..."
Also, is that last line a refence to something, that it could be useful for me to know?
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Was the double 'the' a mistake? Or an actual grammatical application im just not smart enough to understand?
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Fixed.
Don't Cadance get the milk Velvet produces?
Seems wasteful...
Damn... That one hell of a long plan...
Reminds me of two rather dark storys ...
Not how genetics works
Life will find a way.
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Equestria is not earth, otherwise i tell you Hyenas rule the world instead of Apes.
They can eat slightly rotten food and have redicules healing factor by human standards.