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...Celestia seems likely to have something blowup in her face soon with the amount of smugness she’s giving off. She is just asking the universe to smack her down a peg.
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... cometh before the fall.
Twilight knows the Litany Against Fear...
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I love this series. Thank you for another great chapter!
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It will be interesting to see where you go with her character this time, she seems slightly less “kill others to maintain her immortality” but I don’t think I’ll rule out anything just yet.
Okay, I am now scared of Cadence. I mean, holy shit just that barely restrained use of force and deadly magic, Celestia probably wants an alicorn army.
It begins.
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Why though? It can’t be because she wants to expand her kingdom out of a desire for more power as she would be creating an army that could turn on her, especially since said army would be made up of mothers-daughters-aunts/sons-fathers-uncles so their loyalty would likely be more for each other than Celestia.
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I could be wrong though...
Edit: given that Twilight has shown to have “the x factor” Celestia shouldn’t be too worried about Shining falling for her rather than Cadance since either way she would get the same result.
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See, now this is why sex ed is important. My daughter knew enough to be properly horrified when she caught me wrist deep in my wife's cooch. She always knocks now.
And we see the seeds of how this is going to go horribly wrong for Celestia's plan and horribly right for your readers.
I would tell you that you should be ashamed of yourself if I weren't certain that that function has been nonfunctional for years.
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The Horse Awakens
Celestia feels like such slime in this chapter; I just want something to blow up in her face, and her plans to come crumbling down!
*snort*
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Too much! That's too much!
Not the reference, just......horse. Damn it! XD At least have the decency to capitalize the H.
I'm sure in the future he will. Many times.
Alright Chekov, you showed us the gun, now make sure it doesn't go unfi-
*looks at author name*
Hang on, let me get some kevlar vests. Like...80 of them.
Please don’t.
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I'll dial it back in the future.
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Hmm this is a bit troublesome as it means that the dance IS public knowledge and loses a LOT of "identification power"
horse?
UGH!.. I got it...
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No. No I’m not. I know better than assuming that when you’re involved.
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She's all smug now that she's confirmed to have 2 new genetically engineered members of the Master Race. It's not uncommon for this idea to come up since even the US Army is experimenting with this. http://naturalsociety.com/us-army-super-soldier-genetically-modified-humans-food-sleep/
But yeah, she now has 2 literal Gods that are going to be just as, if not more, powerful than her. With their strong family bonds, and potential to breed a herd of alicorns now. (I expect at least a half dozen more between the 2 sisters and possibly mother. 🍤 ) She's going to have to subtly manipulate them in order to keep them at bay.
I'm guessing Celestia trained Cadance like that to really test her abilities and make sure she was a pure alicorn with all the powers and skill of it. Hell, she held off King Sombra for a week and Shining won in a one-on-one fight against him too. Those children are ridiculously powerful, and both girls could potentially level whole cities in the end. You'd want to keep them obedient at all costs, maybe make them look at it in the very warped perspective like Celestia has about it being her project to bring back alicorns, instead of objectively where she's subtly manipulated and ruined\used hundreds of ponies lives to make her new herd happen.
Then there's the Unknown Factor with Princess Luna\Nightmare Moon coming back... Celestia could have possibly bred for alicorns for when her sister came back as well, and defeat her for good since the Elements won't react to herself. So she's going to have to do something to make her new weapons work right and try to defeat her sister when she comes back. Either killing her, banishing her again, or somehow purifying her.
This got darker all of a sudden.
Or....
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No no no, all too fucking obvious in each case...
That leaves me with one problem... I feel so bad for Velvet because she's going to be lonely and feel cheated on. I know their paternal instincts are very strong for Cadance and want to see her grow up into a nice honorable mare, but we all know with that Chekhoves Gun staring back at us...I kinda expect Velvet to have a big fight (with some walls blown out) with Night at some point in the future, especially from the strain that Cadance brings them since they know she was their eldest daughter, she's legally not her own and can't have her, and Cadance is going to have an affair with the only other pony who knows their secrets and Velvet trusts\loves explicitly with.
I'm very much expecting all this to literally blow up in Celestia's face at any time now. She can't juggle this many factors.
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There is the possibility that Celestia is telling the truth and is just manipulative about how she is going about it...
Edit: not that the part about the whole thing blowing up is any less likely to happen regardless of what Celestia is planning as I have to agree with your points regarding Velvet.
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So I think we now have 2 different things. Celestia is altruistic and does or doesn't realize what she's ethically doing, or Celestia is being a bitch and she knows it.
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What about the idea that it could be beneficial or non-harmful since incest just reinforces existing genes?
Isn't that the point of trying to wake up to watch the sun come up??? Like, wake up before the sun is out so that you can see it come out and you won't be late???
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Not unexpected. Still tho .-.
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Yo. What's up with this chapter?
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Combine. Also, I've definitely missed a few of these. I don't think most are as big a deal as these.
Should the "she thought to herself" part be unitalicized?
it is funny as i was just thinking of watching this episode to day.
I really can say how much i am enjoying this story, just totally amassing.
8726893 My lead editor wasn't available in time. But lo, it's you to the rescue!
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You say that as I'm a few weeks late.
8727280 To quote my girlfriend, of her menstruation,
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8727348 That is the most elaborate face-palm I have ever received. I feel so blessed.
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You'd better. Took me a full minute to find where I'd saved it...
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No, please M O R E!
Depending on how you depict Twilights living arrangements after becoming Celestia's protege, Velvet might be giving Celestia a piece of her mind soon. I've seen the different setups range from Twilight staying in the castle pretty much full time, living at home and traveling through town to the castle, or even being given her tower from S1E1 to stay in right from the start.
"You've already taken one daughter from me for your crazy plan! You can't have both of them!"
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God, I feel like a housewife waiting for her favorite soap opera.
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... you know, i have a program on my browser that switches every instance of the word "force" with "horse". you can see why this made reading certain comments... very confusing.
Gdi Nappa! I wondered when the first hiccup in this plan would appear.
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Not all monsters are ugly Cadence. Such a pity you're exceptional
Fucking Dune reference. I swear, half the authors on this damn site have read that book. I love it. Too bad this story is already finished, I might have asked for a reference to another dune quote. Yueh! Yueh! Yueh! A million deaths wasn't enough for Yueh!
Oh snap, I see there could be some incest with her dad in Cadance's future :), Hot!
Was it like thousands of ponies whinnying out all at once?
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So Big E is close to revealing himself?
"Twilight's mortal mind was held hostage to all of time and space flowing through her.
All that was. All that had ever been. All that would ever be. All things that could never be."
Sounds familiar.
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Hot damn... One generation and we already have to Filly to hit the big goal!
I can see Celestia singing and tap dance in joy in her bedroom.