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the healing has begun, i think with time all will be good in the world.
Yes
God damn is the argument convincing. If I knew of a couple who found out the same news, I'd show them this. That actually reminds me of someone on the radio saying they hooked up with someone and either got married or pregnant, or maybe just sex, and finding out they were cousins, like after a while.
suggested twist, Night Light and Velvet have two sons between Cadance and Twilight. Of course Shining Armor and the other being a certain orange pegasus.
This sounds incredibly familiar.
Thought this was gonna go Chinatown on us.
8623864 I think you just found a way for me to support FlashLight.
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Join me and together we can rule the galaxy.
Search your feelings you know it to be true.
I also bake cookies.
8623893 Never. I'll never join the dark side. You failed your- wait......what kind of cookies?
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Sugar, Snickerdoodle, Chocolate Chip, Macadamia Nut, Chocolate, Brownie (which is what is known as a bar cookie), and a few others
8623913 'Macadamia, chocolate chip'
What about peanut butter, and m&m?
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Those too.
8623919 My application for the AU incest FlashLight division is in the mail.
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Your acceptance letter is in the mail.
8623864 8623884 Here you go:
After an intense labor, Velvet finally gave birth to Shining Armor. And then his fraternal twin brother, Flash Sentry. But everypony mistook the Pegasus for the afterbirth and left him at the hospital.
8624028 Oh god! Please change that to after birth! I have unpleasant memories of that word thanks to someone elses fic! And also to stay more accurate to the Family Guy Blue Harvest reference.
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, you expect me to buy that? Seriously? You expect me to believe that? With the big deal you made about the afterbirth when Cadance was born, do you sincerely expect us to believe that they would mistake a younger fraternal twin (Flash) for it? Because that's just shitty writing and you know.
Listen, if you don't want a FlashLight ship in this story, that's fine, it's your story, it's your call. But don't insult my intelligence. You make a big deal about something and make the characters learn about it and then make them forget about it when it would 'inconvenient' for the narrative that they recall it, is the kind of writing I have come to expect from Warner Brothers' DCEU. And you're clearly better than that.
If you don't want a FlashLight ship, I am good with that. But don't insult my intelligence and don't contradict your own continuity, you are a better writer than that. And I have come to expect that degree of writing from you because you have always presented that you are that skilled.
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Chill dude, it was a joke. DeltaXeno1138 got the reference.
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Sorry, it didn't come off (to me) like it was one.
8624100 It's alright.
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And the cat's in the cradle and the silver spoon
Little boy blue and the man in the moon
When you coming home, dad?
I don't know when
But we'll get together then
You know we'll have a good time then
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"Welcome to the party."
> looks at watch
"...You're late."
Oh my god, this should have been the part where both parents got fireballs to the face.
This would be the point where I'd seriously consider leaving the "family".
8624098 Thank you for changing that by the way. Pumpkin spice. *disgusted shudder*
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Pfft, this is what happens when a joke flies over someone's head, and it's absolutely hilarious! It's funny because Flash gets mistaken for trash because he is trash! Arguably anyway, because that is the joke.
...I'll shush now.
I FUCKING CALLED IT. A second time!
Man, I do all my best thing in at 1:30 AM. Weird.
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On the other hand, incest IRL can actually harm the grandchildren, so you should definitely not do it. There's a reason this is fiction. With magic. And stuff.
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It never was (???)
Because the last paragraph ended while talking about Night Light, you should name his dad by...name.
Same as before. Playing the pronoun game is generally not that fun.
Ok, but why didn't you just have this as
"There! Now stop pretending..."
In the first place???
had
So...why didn’t Celestia work on breaking down the taboo of sibling relationships if it was such a big factor? I mean why risk losing all your progress in the event that the newly revealed siblings don’t stay together?
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Then the story wouldn't have an arc.
8693652 Because its for
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Right?
Why is everyone such assholes about how upset Velvet and Night are? I think realizing you fucked your sibling, had a child with them, and then had that child taken away warrants a bit more of an understanding response than "tough tits, now make another baby."
I gotta be honest, this chapter didn't feel much like a MLP fic, most likely because of the parents's behavior, especially the way the dad talks. I have a hard time not picturing a human, Godfather-type mafioso when reading his lines.
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then picture a pony godfather type mafioso, not so hard, take a portly pony like the one from what was it 'spice of life' the father switch his fur to grey or black, add a fancy illtalian suit and stlye the mane just right and boom, godfather the pony.
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because context of universe, and to be honest given how equine herds work in reality incest is actualy somewhat common among them, not to this extream but common enough, an equine herd typicly has one dominnent male who thru his prime years does all the breeding, or most of it, as a result hes gonna probly end up banging one or 2 of his own daughters if he stays on top long enough
lion prides are the same way
and both have the same solution for it, eventualy the male gets old and another male, more then likely one not related to him knocks him off the pedistal and the ball begins rolling once more
truthfully humans are the only creautres that make such a big deal out of it, not without cause but as a general rule single instnances of incest are non problematic geneticly
its when you get scenarios like 'this' one that shit can go horificly wrong, and the only reason it likely hasnt is theres been 'alot' of magic involved, potions tonics special diets genetic therapy that probly nobody but celestia knows about keeping everything going the way she wants, minimizing aberations she doesnt want in favor of the traits shes trying to breed in, but that shit makes for a boreing story so its been skiped
They'll get over it! We already know they will, twice :)
When I was editing the recording, I came across a bit that sounded weird coming out of my mouth so I came back here to check I said it right.
'The door opened and slowly swung open.'
Hence that's how you wrote it, oh well.
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That and make Tortellini the pony name equivalent to Giovanni. I don't know the don's name from Godfather, it's probably not Giovanni, but Giovanni's a fairly stereotypical mob boss name. It's also a fairly common Italian name in general.
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Don Vito Corleone.
Don Pesto Tortellini would work.
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Animals tend to act on pure instinct and they lack the brain complexity to develop sapient thought and higher reasoning. When it comes to breeding season, a male will mount anything receptive and even inanimate objects.
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I meant to mention this before,
but the style of the cover art was partially inspired by The Godfather logo.
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Complicated situation still working out in the end
Shining Armors life is decided, but Twilight is rather loose i guess?
What about Sunset Shimmer?!
I guess Celestia always has two families running the project at the least? Accidents can happen, illness or simple infertility that can hit a male or female.
So two or even tree families would be required.