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LegionofPony
I write commissions and sometimes write stuff I come up with too. Nuff said.
LegionofPony
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This was a amazing story, it had an lovely feel and atmosphere to it.
Keep up the good work and have a like. I would fave but I'm a bit cautious when it comes to favoriting Clopfics.
7821826 Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it!
Will this just be these chapters and the epilogue you mentioned or will there be a continuation of the story in another story about the, hopeful... child and the family's life afterwards? But no need to answer if you don't know and I don't want to pressure you into telling stuff you don't want to tell and spoiling anything. More of just a hint like "stay tuned" would be good for me.
You should probably change the first "wife" word into something else - doesn't make sense chronologically, as Lyra proposes only later than this.
There are a few tiny errors as well, but it was only a minor thing which didn't do anything to detract from the experience (and to be honest, I already forgot exactly what it was, heh).
Great chapter though, a wish come true for the two of them indeed! Or better said, a wish about to become true.
As with pretty much everything else I've read from you, this has been a great read. A good amount of heartwarming fluff, and good action. Nice flow of everything.
What's even better is that there will be at least one more chapter of this
Thumbs up definitely earned!
This was nice and sweet. I don't tend to read stories like this much, maybe that should change. You also mistook Bon-Bon for Lyra a couple times, once in ch 1 and once here.
7822341 I am planning on there being only the epilogue chapter for this, and didn't have any further plans past that.
7822502 Thanks for the heads-up, I'll (attempt to) fix them.
7822506 I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was a fun one to write.
7822656 I'm glad you liked my writing, and you're welcome to read any other stories I've written too, as they're all similar in content. As for the name mix ups, I'll (attempt to) fix them too. Thanks for notifying me.
7822896 Ok, thanks just wanted to know, I think it would actually be a good story if it was there lives afterwards but you are the author above all and you shouldn't feel you have to write something you don't enjoy writing.
Very Nice legion, very nice indeed.
7824485 Thanks, glad you liked it!
Oh I don't know about "99%" less, but thanks for the thought anyways!
Um why is Lyra addressing Bon Bon as Lyra? That needs a fix.
7826126 Can you specify the line please? It'd be a great help.
THIS IS FUCKING HOT
7828388 Glad you think so, that was the plan! Thanks for reading!
This might be another for a story idea that you'll like after this story's done.
7831596 ?
7826666 Yes, yes I can. It's right here in this paragraph.
Again it's clear that the focus is still on Lyra but for some reason you called Bon Bon Lyra in Lyra's line.
Other than that I saw no errors at all Legion.
7831846 Thanks a lot, fixed.
7832176 Glad to have helped Legion. I also have to give you credit for actually addressing how these kinds of things can be dangerous. It is so willfully ignored so often.
7833670 I want my writing o be the best it can be. If my readers are willing to take time to point errors out to me, than I am thankful for the help and learning experience. :D
7834116 Same here Legion.
Maybe the reason Zecora make these potions means something.
7854689 Yeah, so ponies can have foals and share love.
7856433 She needs a special somepony.
Wow these two have their hottest lesbian love-fest all year long and then Lyra pops the question right afterwards. Way to go Lyra!
Damn, can't believe this story went under the radar. It was great.
8182794 I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm kind of surprised it didn't get more views as well. Oh well, had fun writing it at least!