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Silly, fun, and completely adorable (no, not the story; I was talking about Derpy).

I hope you had fun reading, and I hope you have a wonderful clopmas!

Well... bubbles huh? That's a new one to add to the list.

WHAT IN TARNATION

8619702 You really think Granny Smith would appreciate Derpy's bubbles? Hrmm. Sequel maybe...

Not long after, a new business called Magic Bubbles opened, where ponies could buy two high quality bubbles lasting twelve to twenty-four hours (depending on amount of use and roughness). It became quite lucrative, but stallions were the most popular customers, with Thunderlane being their top buyer.

8619780 And thus the true nature of Derpy Hooves' cutie mark becomes apparent. The Cutie Mark Crusaders were not notified.

Are breasts involved by any chance?

8619861 I had a huge problem trying to find a "breasts" group on here to put this in. There was a few for "crotchboobs" but I eventually found one. :derpytongue2:

I first thought Twilight would research on some kind of anthromophism spell, but this fit Derpy just fine.

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*Blink blink*
Not entirely sure what I just read and I usually wait until a story is more popular but for this one I have to ask.
Can I include this in my time capsule project?
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/213216/the-pony-media-time-capsule-project-hub

8619944 Huh. Well, there is nothing I can do to stop you doing it. Sure, why not.

8619931 Yeah, Derpy holds the answers to all of life's questions. :derpyderp1:

You could totally write more boobs-oriented horse words and I'd happily snap them up, :) This fic was my introduction to your work, and it was quite pleasing to partake of.

Hehe. Typical Damaged Story.

I loved it.

8620626 Heh, glad to hear you enjoyed it. There is going to be some more boob play in another of my stories, but it is by far not the main kink in it (in fact, the "main character," EqG Rainbow Dash, is almost flat as a board).

Breast play is not normally something I delve into, sticking mostly to non-anthro, but this one just wouldn't let me avoid writing it.

Have something cute and boob related.

Oh, and the other story that is about to get some boob-play is:

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8620672 Heh, thanks! :rainbowlaugh:

Heh, bubbles.

8620674
Aww. I was hoping for some play between Derpy and Twilight

I think I laughed more than anything else.

It felt good to chastise a princess and then make her uncomfortable. Really good.

I would imagine so.

An unusual interpretation of Derpy, and I love it!
I had no idea how much fun you can have with two bubbles...

Great story!

8964027 Thanks. It was good, silly fun—nopony does silly fun like Derpy Hooves. :derpytongue2:

8964084
Even better:
Derpy isn't actually silly. She is merely fooling most into thinking she is.

8964104 There's a great little story about just that:

EDerpy's Faking It
While strolling around town, Twilight Sparkle accidentally knocks out Derpy's contact lenses, revealing perfectly normal eyes hidden underneath. So what else could Derpy be faking?
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8964105
Yup, I remember that one.
So cute!

8964117 I've portrayed her as a clever pony before myself, in one story she even became a princess!

8964121
Without looking it up: The princess of muffins?
Or something more serious?

8964139 Heh, nah. She actually refused to take a crown. She was knighted (alongside Rainbow Dash) however.

A good idea and a good start, but I feel the second part of the story is weaker. Due to lack of derp.

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