You should probably change the first "wife" word into something else - doesn't make sense chronologically, as Lyra proposes only later than this. There are a few tiny errors as well, but it was only a minor thing which didn't do anything to detract from the experience (and to be honest, I already forgot exactly what it was, heh).
Great chapter though, a wish come true for the two of them indeed! Or better said, a wish about to become true.
You should probably change the first "wife" word into something else - doesn't make sense chronologically, as Lyra proposes only later than this.
There are a few tiny errors as well, but it was only a minor thing which didn't do anything to detract from the experience (and to be honest, I already forgot exactly what it was, heh).
Great chapter though, a wish come true for the two of them indeed! Or better said, a wish about to become true.
This might be another for a story idea that you'll like after this story's done.
Wow these two have their hottest lesbian love-fest all year long and then Lyra pops the question right afterwards. Way to go Lyra!