It's Sunset's first winter since being reformed, and her new friends are intent on her learning all about what she's been missing to help her get past her guilt over past actions. A chance encounter, however, leaves the girls stunned as they stumble across the human dimensions Sunset Shimmer, who is anything but what they expected.
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This sounds like it is going to be an interesting story so thus I will be keeping an eye on this one.
Well, this is an interesting idea, I look forward to reading more.
IT'S A GHOST! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!
Her counter part is blind....
I like where this is going.
I am liking this take on sunset meeting her counterpart very much so far, here's to hoping this gets featured
I was summoned here. Will stick around.
Looks interesting so far! Definitely tracking!
7783611 I too am tracking this story. sounds very interesting
Hmm, so one was blinded by ambition while the other was blind.
I like that bit of irony.
apology accepted.
Hmmm.... This isn't bad at all. Tracking
Holy crap this is featured! Thank you EVERYONE!
Seriously did not expect it, you all are awesome.
You're Sunset Shimmer to? How's that work?
alternate dimension? and what on earth
“Alright, the three of us will be there.
1. Too.
2. Forgot to capitalise.
3. Forgot your closing quotation mark.
while Blue shot into Sunsets bedroom
but why dress like you then
they had to have /something/ planned out
wait, I thought you believed their story
1. Sunset's.
2. Forgot to capitalise.
3. Looks better italicised.
4. Forgot to capitalise.
The premise is certainly eye catching, no pun intended there. Certainly will like to see where it goes on.
Blind ninja Sunset. Can dig.
Well, they're going to be in for a surprise.
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I think there's an even stronger contrast:
One was blessed with incredible power, while the other lacked even the sense of sight.
The former couldn't be satisfied with what she had, and the latter carried on and found happiness in spite of what she lacked.
since when did this get 1000 views?
Just started reading this today. Pretty good. A like and a follow for this story.
8129503 I know right? Why doesn't it have more
The bolded to should be "too."
I was enjoying this and the ending of this chapter just begs me to ask for more!! 😂😂
TL:DR, a hippie, nothing wrong with that tho, :3
...... oh, oops, well, she sounded like a hippie in the chapter before this one......
Heh, when sight is missing, every other sense is reinforced, :3
More please, please, please, please, please now?!:)
Please update this fic already, want more!