I fall asleep one night, only to awaken in Equestria as a foal! Not only that, but Nightmare Moon is my mother! What lies ahead for me in my new foalified life?
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I am a brony and a long time writer. This site will be for my MLP fanfiction, and you can read my other works on Deviantart.com under the name potsticker13.
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Well written, cohesive. Flowing ideas. All in all, a good beginning!
Why does Nightmare Moon have a baby? Why wasn't Celestia attacking her? O.O
Thank you so much you got north star's personality perfectly!
Reads chapter... died laughing.
Yup, that was me when I was little.
Also, my oc is a Unicorn but this Pegasus version intrigues me... I love it!
Yay. Also you got 2 Times Melody Song and Not Note. But other then that, you did you really good. I like it
7509041 You're welcome!
7510052 Sorry about getting your OC wrong. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
7510300 Sorry for getting the name wrong.
7510441 it's okay
Next Time ;) oh, and my mane is red with a purpel Strip ;)
Perfect. You describe me so perfectly I-I*sniffel* I think my going to cry. Thank you.
Also, I really don't mind, but if your going to ship me (yes even a little) give me a heads up. Again I don't mind, I just want to know.
Mostly because At me school I get shipped with a lot of people and I just like to know when I'm being ship.
Good job, keep it up and thank you for using me oc
Oh and one more thing; I love the night, especially on stormy night I just love the sound and lights. And will probably be with Luna and/or NMM a lot. Just in case you want to use that for anything.
but either way have a good night
If you need some back story pm.
And I think that's it, sorry for booming you with everything I said in this one comment
7517227 I don't intend to ship you. Blue Moon likes you because you're fuzzy
7518165 cool. It just look like, to me, I was being. And I don't mind, I just like to know when that happens.
Plus you pretty much go the wolf background/backstory down. So I could care less.
Great Story
i really like it 
Adorable!!!!
keep it up
In any RP scenario game I played as a kid, I'd get very into character. Good or bad guy... (hint, hint.)
North star is scarred of the dark dawww
Neat, been awhile since I have seen someone come up with an original concept involving nightmare Moon. Attention gained.
This was weapons grade levels if "dawwwww"
All the daaaaaawwwwwwssss!
Cute
Na' not my style. But the idea is good.
Last I heard giving a booster shots to someone that's sick is a bad idea.
7602075 It's just a story.
Adorable. Can't wait for more
I like it if they have to be urged a bit, and then go after their instict if they take their first taste.
. It is nothing important, but I admit I'm a little bit dissapointed that this isn't like another story I know, where I would be able to read his thought about the whole thing, and not him just well acting and probably even thinking like a Baby.
You could say, even if I like it, it feels as if would be to easy again somehow.
Don't get me wrong, I like it but it are still parts of my thoughts about this chapter.
If I remember it right, we know have three versions of Luna in this story.
It is interessting, but in a TV show and in storys, I always thought it was a bit strange too, even if I couldn't exactly explain why. I mean it is like if they could suddenly talk, they could take part in a game show about "knowing your best friend".
Maybe the older ponys even should know about Babys bein able to understand each other.
I think I would like a different prologue, in which he starts in some sort of a blank state, where he remembers nothing. If it is like this I always feel like he shouldn't completely act like a foal, at least not perfectly since he seems to still remember a part of himself in he beginning of this chapter.
I guess it depens on how many foals you take and where you plan to take the story, because when a random army of foals invades the story, I don't exactly know if you would even let him stay friends with every foal in the future.
I don't know, that is probalby my usual late night reaction, but it was not bad, but at least not completely how I like it the most.
meeeeehhh I think I need to know which direction this story is supposed to go, becauseright now I would prefer them to finally meet each other and get over with it, to finally proceed with the story, but I guess this is maybe even supposed to be a foals playing with each other, that way it would be okay.
I'm not going to ask if he is already old enough for that.....I guess I just did, but then again...Ponys.
sorry, I always feel a bit more picky in this time of a day.
Hhhhmmm If I'm honest, then I have to admit I expected one of them or the main char to make it a bit more difficult for Applejack. I guess it went a bit to easy for me, and till now it made no sense that he had to be a Human.
I mean I got the idea that he was a Human before, if he was a Pony before then that would mean someone suddenly went missing.
As I battled Nyx, Ekko defeated or hunted North Star, Melody fought Bioquill. I just thought he is probably still the scared one.
7578848 till now I kind of agree but I wait till I get the idea or an answer, about where this story is supposed to go. It remembers me of that one cartoon, that was only about the weird parents and all the Babys.
This was a nice chapter.
You do realize that if you hadn't shown that he can keep down formula in the last chapter, that punishment would be considered abuse, right?
Are you still accepting OC's?
a small typo, i think. Blue Moon i feel would be more appropriate?
I hope she only means Twilight and Nightmare, because all of them would maybe to much, at least if they do it like that all the time.
Nice chapter, even if during Bluebloods treat, I only could think :
"and three arguments from the other princesses and Blueblood has no real power over her anymore."
7645601 Not at this time.
7646158 Okay.
The Dawes and the lolz were real this chapter
One word:.........awwwwwwwwwwww
It's that sort of present where I image the cartoon figure to throw it back at the head from that person that gave him the present. (mostly because it was herself)
Nice chapter, but I still hope there is a time when it doesn't always has the feeling of that Cartoon show about the Babys and their babysitter.
(awww I just cant remember the name)
Well it is not bad, once in a while I should actually be happy about something like this. I think at the moment I just can't wait for the different storys to continue.
You know what, I just enjoy it for now.
Yay, new chapter! I almost thought this story died. Glad it didn't
Didn't we had that situation already?, just saying it is not really a bad thing.
it is rare that I say it in mlp okay maybe not, but that was probably more than dangerous.
I don't remember the rest and can't really judge if they are able to talk already, or read for the matter and cast that spell. I remember that he had already casted a spell but more as an accident. This means it looks a bit weird to me that they suddenly know difficult spells already. I know I shouldn't take this story seriously but I still try to make a bit sense out of it.
I would like to see Blue have adventures with each of the mane 6
Yes, new chapter. Foals be All Powerful!
This was similar to what I did when I was little.
good job
Wow, that's what my cousin calls his niece.
This joke needs to die in a fire. The sooner the better.
Is no one gonna comment on the fact that the foals made an apology card with WORDS in it? I'm pretty sure they haven't gone to school yet, otherwise the author might have told us....... Soooooo, no one? Is it just me? OK, I'll give you guys time to comment first before I give up and continue reading.
Well. That was cute
He already knows the true
Normally I'd say a pony doesn't deserve to be flushed down the toilet, but in Spoiled's case she more than deserved it. Heck, you should've let her stay down there for a while.