Missing The Mark

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Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo have come up with a new plan to get their cutie marks. By being Foal-sitters! It may seem easy, but will little Pumpkin and Pound Cake prove to be too much for the CMC to handle?

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Normal

Normal #1 · Nov 24th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Shows marked improvement from your last story.

SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #2 · Nov 24th, 2014 · 3 · ·

Looks like the CMC learned the hard way that "Toddlers are The Devil!". (Thumbs up if you get the reference)

Anyne

Anyne #3 · Nov 24th, 2014 · 3 · ·

“Why can a dumb baby like you fly already, but I can’t?!

That's normal for baby pegasi. Scootaloo went through the same

SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #4 · Nov 24th, 2014 · · ·

5308620 Supposedly. We won't know for certain unless we ever see Scootaloo as a baby.

Shine

Shine #5 · Nov 28th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Funny story, I enjoyed it.

Kobitsu

Kobitsu #6 · Dec 12th, 2014 · 1 · ·

5308629 Rainbow stated that it's normal for baby pegasi to fly, so Scootaloo went without a doubt through this phase

SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #7 · Dec 12th, 2014 · · ·

5374910 Perhpas, but until we see it in canon we may never know.

Comment posted by Art Luckyman deleted Jan 25th, 2015

Rye Snoot

Rye Snoot #9 · May 14th, 2015 · 1 · ·

This was funny I like how Scootaloo became frustrated...

Alex Warlorn

Alex Warlorn #10 · Jun 13th, 2015 · 1 · ·

The CMC don't think first the babies are just lonely without their parents? Pumpkin can teleport now? Oh dear. -_- That baby is never going to be safe.

“You...can fly!?!” Scootaloo said with a mixture of shock and anger.

Ah Scootaloo, that must kill you just a tiny tinny bit inside.

“Pound Cake is just a baby, Scootaloo. He wasn’t trying to mock you” Sweetie Belle said. “And so you can’t fly. You’ve already accomplished so many things without flying”

“Pound Cake is just a baby, Scootaloo. He wasn’t trying to mock you,” Sweetie Belle said. “And so you can’t fly. You’ve already accomplished so many things without flying.”

Easy to say for a unicorn filly who couldn't do magic when they first met, but now CAN.

You have a habit of leaving out your periods.

Jonny Bench