A human from a distant universe crash lands in Ponyville, finding her body transformed into that of an Alicorn. She must adapt to her new form as she learns of this new alien world.
However, she isn't the only thing to come from her universe...
This story is only still up because someone asked me not to delete it. I was just a teenager when I dabbled with it and it brings me great shame to this day! Read it if you want, I guess!
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A moment of silence for the phrase "Bee's jeez" which I was not able to work into the rewritten chapter
7414165 o... k... ? I apologize but i cant remember what this story was before the rewrite for the life of me. When i read it usually works like each story has a folder filled with what ive read, and i cant find this story's old folder at all. So now you have 2 folders!
I await for more.
Good Chapter! *tumps up*
I have read the old version and have like it. I hope that you continou to write so well.
I also hope off a soon update.
I wish you many new Ideas and Inspiration for your Story!
( sorry for my bad english grammar, but the Xbox has no translations tool! )
Till next time. Bye !!
Is this is re-write? Nice. Looking forward to the next update!
Oh come on I preferred how it was before, so why did you have to start over of all things?
7414534 Honestly? The chapters and ideas kinda all broke apart and my little writing space was a mish mash of conflicting thoughts and ideas. Plus, it shouldn't change too much. I just don't like writing the mane six much. it should unfold sort of the same in some ways, totally different in others. Plus the chapters are going to be longer. That's good right?
7414665 * sighs * Well I understand that now, but as suggesting have the main character at least speak normally around others, but only her other language for stuff she knows about, and can talk that language.
It should help the readers out a lot easier.
I like the rewrite. The old first chapter felt forced and was missing the world/character building the new version has.
7415278 Huh? Can you repeat that? I don't get what you're trying to say
7415482 Okay what I'm trying to say is have Ethereal speck normal around others, and for Ethereal to speck with non-normal when talking to like the hunter before you decided to rewrite the story.
7415864 She is, for the most part. But She's still adjusting, she spoke in Empire Standard in the old version at first too.
7415890 So Ethereal is adjusting to their speech is that what you're saying correct?
7415944 Yes, her people have a hard time remembering their own thoughts, so she keeps forgetting, but it won't take long for her to fall into the habit.
7415954 Okay I wanted to know what was going on which in the future how about you put her foreign language in parenthesis next time.
7415988 It should be pretty obvious when she isn't speaking english.
7415999 Well it was difficult at first for me since I had no idea what was going on.
Huh... the Ur-Humans vaguely remind me of the Abh from Crest of the Stars.
Poor Ether's just shown up and she's already got an existential crisis on hoof.
More.
7416604 The who from the what now?
7431119 It's a Japanese novel series (and of course, two anime serieses), mostly military sci-fi. The Abh are the descendants of a race of human-derived bioroid servitors designed for better function in space, who then overthrew their creators and formed their own empire.
It's a pretty distant likeness, admittedly.
I can see it, did they also have a limited emotional range?
7431495 I'm not sure I'd call their emotional range limited so much as... different, at least from a baseline human point of view. From what I remember of it (it's been a while
) they can seem quite ruthless, and yet strongly moral, depending on the circumstance.
The series also has a pretty neat space combat paradigm. It's a fun watch.
7431636 I'll have to check it out.
Ur-humans differ greatly in their emotions, they're really docile, and they hold sapient life in high regard. They don't feel envy, loneliness, or hatred easily. They CAN feel emotions like we do, but most will never feel the more 'complicated' ones
for example, our main character HATES the swarm, but only because she's spent a long long time fighting it, after it killed her family.
I love this story! When is the next chapter going to be up?
7505574 sometime after life stops kicking me in the metaphorical nuts
Yeah, good start for Ether to immediately meet Lesson Zero version Twily
7579606 Hey, at least Twilight has an excuse for being weird, Pinkie pie isn't going to win any favors from her at all.
Great read, when's the next update?
7594221 Well..... don't hold your breath, I'm currently grappling with depression so.... ehh? I churned out the first version faster, but at a much lower quality.
7595578 ah, sorry bud. Hope you feel better soon
7596869 I'm trying, thanks man
7597255 welcome, I find that incense help with clearing the mind
7597318 Can't stand incense
7597402 to each there own I guess
I would like to have a new chapter please.
7670720 Sorry, I just... I can't it's too much. The anxiety. I just can't even write anything anymore. Sorry
Addendum: I'm incapable of working on the story without past mistakes haunting me. I can't force myself to do this right now, I enjoyed writing, but the things I regret doing just... I can't.
7671298 Sorry about that.
It's sad to see this canceled...
Do you think you can repost the original chapters by chance? Or are they gone?
7845216 I will never let them see the light of day... besides, they're half gutted from revising, that's why I chose to rewrite the whole thing
I might start up again though, if enough people want me to
do it please
WHY???? I just found this... Well I'll put this in the Deadfics section and hope it up dates
8141954 depression, mostly.
But I have been getting on new medication, but I'm not sure if I can pick this up again
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I've always hated depression. Hope it gets fixed soon!
Also, here's something that might help a tiny bit, I don't know but it made me laugh:
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I want more please revive it in a blaze of glory to kill the sworm!
Youre an amazing writer
This looks like a good story,would love to see is be rewriten
Why would you cancel this it started great!
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Because I have major clinical depression, and a debilitating anxiety disorder
8902396
I’m sorry, that sounds terrible, I hope you can get better in some way :)
-fox
8902396
Oh right, look at the reviews for an app called OurPact Jr, it’s just kids complaining, besides me .p.