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Twilight floated a second fritter up to her mouth when she realized the first was gone. “What is in these things?” “Mostly love. Love ‘n about three sticks of butter.”

T

Complete!

Scootaloo has a job as a flight instructor in Cloudsdale and a cloud house of her own. She doesn't have a special somepony, but she's cool with that. Just a normal life for a normal young pegasus, until a streak of rainbow turns her life upside-down.

After all, could she really resist the chance to train for the Best Young Flyers competition with a Wonderbolt? Could she turn down an offer of no-strings-attached passion with the most awesome pegasus in Equestria? Is there any way she could not fall in love with the shining idol of her foalhood?

Could Scootaloo ever say no to Rainbow Dash?


(Obviously aged-up Scoot. Rated T for some sexual situations, but nothing graphic.)

A big thank you to dbzordie for his awesome proofreading services.

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As much as I dislike shipping, this seems like it may be really interesting! I'll come back to read it when I have a computer. :p

As soon as I saw you were the author I insta faved. I love all your stories

You described Scoots mane as pink?

Isn't it clearly purple?

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Oddly, no. The star in the image for the story is exactly the color of her mane in the screen cap I had, and the trail behind the star is part of the shading of her eyes.

If I were Dashie, I would NOT bump Scoot's hoof...

That being said, Dash was really quick to ask Scootaloo to get in bed with her. That's a good thing, for it fits her character perfectly. Well done... again.

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Oh..

Well how about that, you learn something new everyday.

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Thank you! I hope you love this one!

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Scoot did wash her hooves, at least. I made sure to include that.

Glad you like it! I know it's not the sort of thing you usually do, so I'm proud I can amuse you with it.

This might be
The.
Best.
Possible.
Thing.
:raritystarry:

Glad to see you took my tiny bits of advice:pinkiehappy:

Unless Sorin' is a petname for Soarin', I suggest correcting them.

Applejack, Sorin', she really thought those were going to work.
With enough time to smooth things over she was still friends with both AJ and Sorin', but she'd given up on romance.

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You are awesome. Thanks for pointing that out.

And I'm glad you like it!

Sounds...interesting (in a good way) I'll have to be sure to come back and read this one!!

I foresee Scoots overlooking the 'No strings attached' part...

Sounds great so far! please do continue.

You can always count on me to give the honest review! Anyways, I thought the whole ScootsxDash was a good idea. There are a lot of those floating around but I do believe this one stands out. Another thing is i like how you don't hold back on how this story is going. You are pretty brave telling the audience Scoots likes to masturbate to Dash's image and even more bold to have Dash describe Scoots body in great detail. But I like it. It keeps me interested in what is happening and leaves me wanting more. Now the conversation Dash has when confronting Scootaloo was exactly like the conversation I had with that girl I love. She didn't believe me even when i said it over a million times. But you had Scoots believe Dash and that is what a reader wants. Hope. Hope that they will be together. Hope that Dash doesn't mess this up and the ultimate goal, hope that Scoots wins the Best Young Flyers competition. Great story as usual and keep up the great work.

-Magic

Well, it's certainly a cute story so far.

Both Dash and Scoots appear to be in character, and it's very well written.

"You think I'm hot. If that was a crime, half of Equestria would be banished."

Now that's about as Dash-like a line as I've ever heard. And really, I'm glad to see something in which Scoot isn't either crying her eyes out or about to perish horribly.

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Thank you! I will.

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I know I can count on you. :ajsmug:

Actually, there are fewer than you'd think, at least on FIM. There are a few clopfics, but the only actual romance I could find was a Rainbow Factory fix story. Of course, it might be a subplot in a lot of longer fics for all I know, it's hard to figure out the ships happening in those. And I have no idea what goes on on fanfic.net, and never will, and there are none that I can find that ever made EqD.

And yeah, I kind of went straight into things there. I was a teenager in the 90's, and for some reason when I was thinking of grown-up Scoot, I saw her in a kind of Kevin Smith movie, Reality Bites, 90's slacker way. So I went with that tone for the thing. Plus I wanted to really make the disconnect with little kid Scoot.

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Thanks! And I know, what fanfic writers put poor Scoot through. . . there might be more sad Scoot fic than any other character. If you figure it by percentage of all fics about her I'm sure of it.

:pinkiehappy: I LOVE this. I've been waiting for a ScootaDash shipping that's actually good:pinkiehappy::ajsmug::yay::heart::ajsmug: Applejack approves

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Thanks! I'm especially glad you think Scoot is in character, it's sometimes hard to take a character from a kid to an adult and keep the right feel.

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Thank you!

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Thanks! I know, I went looking for one, and found next to nothing. Hopefully this will fill the void. . . as long as I have AJ's approval, I guess I'm good! :twilightsmile:

“Thanks, Dash.”
“No problem. Glad I could help.”
That voice didn't come from her head.
:rainbowkiss:

i did not see that coming :rainbowlaugh: i think Dash has to be kidding herself to believe she can have "no messy emotional stuff" with Scootaloo. sadly overlooking something like starting something physical with your "biggest fan ever" could become emotional is completely on point with Raindows "be awesome now and ask questions never" personalty. cant wait for more. XD cant saw much else without repeating someone else so i'll end this with AWESOME DASH! :rainbowdetermined2:

okay, i didn't get interrupted this time, so i could finish reading it. as usual, it was amazing.
i am glad to see scootaloo not dying or something, in like, the first chapter. nice work.

Cutie-Mark Crusaders Proofreaders YAY!!!!

Great chapter, can't wait till the proverbial shit hits the fan. No, I'm not hinting at possible future developments, I just like it to happen :raritywink:
off course a happy ending is top priority

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Glad you liked it!

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Granted.

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I know! Scoot might get a good ending or something.
Thanks. Glad you liked it.

Rainbow Dash: I just had sex, and it felt so good!

"Number 8, according to Pony magazine's 50 Sexiest Ponies. I don't care how old she is, if one of the sexiest ponies in the world wants to sleep with you, you don't say no!"

Next time I'm told that ponies and humans are, like, totally different, I plan to mention this in rebuttal.

am i sensing future drama :rainbowkiss:

well this updated came out fast... i think. the past couple of days seem to be blending themselves into one anther. work is making me lose track of time. :derpytongue2: i gotta get more time off :twilightblush: every question i asked myself about this fic was answered in one chapter. now all i gotta do is sit back and watch the awesome unfold. :twilightsmile:

Peaches n' Cream :pinkiehappy:

It's amazing how every character has gotten so much older, and yet you've kept everything about what they are currently doing so believable. I probably would have goofed up on something about them, believe me.

I didn't no what to expect about this story at first but, this is possible one of the best fanfics i have read so far. All the characters are spot on and very believable. Great job!!!!! I cant wait to read the next chapter:ajsmug:

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Subtlety is not an attribute Dash posseses.

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Hey, ponies and humans can't be that different. :ajsmug:

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Future drama there will be. I just hope I can keep things interesting until it gets going.

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Thank you so much! I didn't really have any of them doing anything unexpected, but I'm glad it works for you. :ajsmug:

(And maybe someday I'll do a side story about Peaches and AJ.)

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Aww, thanks! I hope I can keep it up.

you know other posters don't do quite as well when giving the mane six saucier personalities, but the manner in which you did it is very believable! not to overbearing and not once do you deviate from the characters traits. My only suggestion would be to not be so blunt on exposition. You're description of Dash's physical attraction towards scoot is very well written, but at the same time you should leave a little to be desired with your audience. Let us come to our own conclusions, make us think how Dash really feels about scoot. But other then that this is a great story so far and im greatly anticipating how its all gonna unfold! keep it up:pinkiehappy:

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Thank you for the comment!

You're completely right, I think I was laying it on a little thick there. I was nervous because there aren't a lot of Scoot/Dash fics out there that I could find, and I was totally over-compensating. I hope things will be better with future chapters, now that I know people are interested in the story and okay with the grown-up Scoot and older Dash. :twilightsheepish:

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It really is hard to find a scootdash story that isn't incredibly sad or incredibly disturbing, for some odd reason there just isn't any type of ambiguity regarding this specific duo. It seems that all scootdash fics are at each end of the spectrum, which is one of the reasons I consider this one a breath of fresh air. but then again judging from how this story is turning out it possibly have a sad ending as well :pinkiesad2:

and on another note the way you've characterized dash in this story reminds me of this song, its SOOO rainbow dash lol. regarding to this story at least :rainbowwild:

Haha this has been a good story so far, it is funny, and all of their actions seem in character. Good job once again!

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Thanks! I'm glad you like it. :ajsmug:

I claim the first comment on this chapter, 'tis one of the perks I enjoy :p

I enjoyed proofreading this chapter :pinkiehappy:
Story is shaping up greatly :yay:

Rainbows falling in love!!! :rainbowderp: cant wait for the next update

Reality Slap for Rainbow, coming soon to a FIMFiction near you!

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Thanks! I can't wait to post it.I just have to finish writing it first.

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Oh Dash has a few of those coming up. . . :ajsmug:

So, not the biggest fan of ScootaDash, but this is amazing, also, I loled because this song started playing at the end.

Haha do I sense a upcoming commitment? :rainbowkiss::heart:

Scoot doesn't drink anymore, eh?

I think I know how to call a chicken when I see one...

SCOOTALOOOO! SCOOTALOOOOOOO!

Scoots and Dashie sittin on a cloud, unsure on what their feelings are

871633 Scoots and Dash sitting on a cloud, K-I-S-S-I-N-G out loud

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On its way.

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Maaaaybe. Maybe not. :ajsmug:

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Hey, if I kissed Diamond Tiara, I'd swear off drinking too. Poor Scoot, and here I was trying not to do horrible stuff to her.

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That. . . doesn't quite scan. It is accurate, though! :twilightsmile:

878145 Whoah! Whoah! What were you trying to do to her? (perhaps I should stick my head out of the gutter)

875771 kissing out loud just sounds horribly wrong. It's like you would be purposely making noises to try to add something to the romance, and they'd come across as grunts rather than, uh... affectionate noises?? :rainbowhuh:

However, that was a valiant effort.

Rainbow and Scoots are sittin' on a cloud, K-I-Sses are allowed.

I have no idea.

Wanna see some magic? Words will appear here once I finish reading...

See! Magic

Everypony knows whats goin' down, except Scoot and RD of course

Next Chapter: either proclaim their love or have a fail of a time. (OR both!!!)

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