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Alchemystudent


Loves to read and write, I decided to try writing fanfiction after a long hiatus thanks to ponies

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Scootaloo has been living with Rainbow dash for a year now. Her best friend has just gotten her cutie mark and she is getting better at flying. But why does Dashie seem so lonely lately and why does she still think of her mother. Maybe its time that she gets someone for her big sister to be there for her. Maybe its time to get Rainbow a special somepony.

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Comments ( 248 )

There's a typo in the short description. Just sayin'.

i always loved a scoota dash sistership :D gonna read it nao wahahahaha xD

o.o did you just list all the mares ever?

p.s. typos plague this cute story... fix dem D:

Sweetie Belle blushed as she raised her hoof, “And...Soren,” the girls look at her weirdly,

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This seems like a rather cute story. Typos / grammar aside, I really like it. :twilightsmile: Have you considered asking for a beta / proof-reader at all? Well regardless, I'll look forward to seeing more. Also, I cannot tell you how hard I laughed at the scene of Scoots listing off all the ponies (and people) Dash has dreamed about.

Please do continue.

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In the process of looking for one now, thank you for the comment.

Scoots playing matchmaker? I love it! Keep up the great writing! I know you are going to make this story great!

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You are too kind, I am going to try my best to make this very fun and sweet

i broke down laughing when i read Samus Aran.:rainbowlaugh:

:pinkiehappy: Hey, this is pretty cool so far! There really aren't enough sweet stories with Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy and Scootaloo all together like a family. :twilightsmile: And this is just so funny, going out there to find Rainbow a wife! I'm looking forward to how this all unfolds! :pinkiehappy::yay:

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Thank you, I was trying to find some of the more random names from my favorite shows I could to throw in there to see who can catch what.

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Thank you, I am going to try and make this both fun and still sweet.

2491160 I believe it! I look forward to it all. :twilightsmile:

You know what? I hate over-repeated ideas like Scootaloo wanting a family, but this looks different for some reason.
Have a like, have a favorite, but the cheese is mine.

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Are you sure I cant have a little cheese? how about a muffin? :derpytongue2:

Some spelling errors and stuff but other than that you're off to a pretty good start I think.

You have my complete and undivided attention :pinkiehappy:

Honestly in my headcanon this is more or less what happens, so I'm super excited for this! :yay:

2491160 .... Photo Finish, Molly Carpenter, Sapphire Shores, Bo, Melody Pond, several of Luna's guards, Mab, The Morrigan, Berry Punch....

So far so good. Here's hoping for some Flutterdash soon :rainbowkiss::yay:

I found it funny how Dash pulled a fast one to get Scoots.

Samus, River Song, Kim Possible. Hahahahaha I was laughing my ass off this is brilliant I love it so much gotta up vote and fav and then check every five minutes for the next chapter great work.

This is gonna be good. Big Mac and Cheerilee together.:yay: Loved RD's list, but there was one name I noticed missing. Where's Amelia Pond?!:flutterrage: What person wouldn't find a red headed Scottish girl attractive.

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Happy to oblige, I liked the idea that Dashie would try and adopt Scoot for a friend.

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Stayed tuned, there will be some sweet Flutterdash moments. I can promise that. Oh yes...there will be dawws

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Awww thanks, I am glad you enjoyed the gag

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I couldnt help it, they somehow look cute together! The main reason Dashie didnt dream of Amelia Pond is because she hadnt met her yet.

Those doctors are fucking assholes. Instead of consoling the crying Scootaloo who just lost her mother, on Mother's Day, they just ignore her breakdown and discuss who she should be given to.

If I saw a crying Scootaloo, the hugs would last forever.

Oh and decent story, I'll keep reading.

2493783 I absolutely agree. I like Cheerimac.

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I see. Best of luck looking for one. :twilightsmile: If you ever feel short changed and I have the time, I would be delighted to assist. Oh, and you're quite welcomed. :twilightblush:

I'm only about 5 minutes into the read, but I have to comment. I'd say spoiler alert, but only 5 minutes in, not missing much.

So Rainbow Dash saves Scootaloo from the chimera that killed Scoots mother. Dash tells the doctors she'll take care of her because she has no one left. The docs to her no because they're not related. Dash say's she promised her she'd take care of Scootaloo. The doctor say's,

“Miss dash, I am sorry, but if we could support promises,” the doctor sighed, “There would be a lot more happy kids in this world.”

Does anyone else find this to be the dumbest line ever? Or at least the dumbest line they'll probably read all day? I could not stop laughing at that. I know this is a comedy, but I don't think part was supposed to be comedic. Maybe the doc is right. It's very important that we limit the amount of happiness in the world, lest it all fall to chaos.

I jus had to comment on that line. I'll finish reading the rest now.

CONTINUED

Ok I finished reading the rest. No significant developments yet that weren't explained in the description. Still I am interested in the next chapter. I don't understand why so many writers believe most ponies swing both ways.

Scootaloo put a hoof to her chin, “Well, I know she likes mares thats for sure. I kind of heard her in her sleep sometimes, dreaming about doing ‘things’ with Spitfire, Rarity, Applejack, Twilight, Luna, Celestia, Cadence, Derpy, some mare called Littlepip, Terra, my...mom, Pinkie Pie, Surprise, Samus Aran, Fluttershy, Firefly, Lauren, Blossomforth, Cloudkicker, Flitter, Lotus, Aloe, A gender changed Shining Armor, Snowdrop, all of the nurses, Nightmare Moon, Chrysalis, River Song, Kim Possible, Bright eye, Melody, Lyra and Bon Bon at once, Trixie, Gilda, Miss Harshwinny, Peach blossom, Fluer De Lis ,and that one mare who delivered us pizza yesterday.”

why, might I ask is Kim possible in there, hm?
:rainbowderp::pinkiehappy::derpytongue2::yay::pinkiegasp::eeyup:

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Its a long story for another time. Lets just say the adventure with KP involved an evil shadow and a giant monster.

What a dog. Rainbow Dash having dreams with most of the mares in Ponyville... :rainbowderp: but just Fluttershy is good enough for her.

This most certainly is interesting. I like the idea and can't wait for more. Hopefully, Rainbow Dash won't be lonely for long and will have dat special somepony. :scootangel:

Truth is, half the people here also dreamed of Spitfire. Kidding.

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They were drunk, Ron and Shego were nowhere around for miles and they admited to never speaking of it again

i really liked this you should continue

This needs to update soon it was soooooo good and I need some good FlutterDash

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*Construction workers hat, carrying a giant drill and hammer* WQorking on it! I'll get this updated once I get a chapter of another fic done *Puts the drill onto his other fics*

2561479 *puts down his own hammer* well then ill just have to check those out then *walks over to other projects*

This was WAY TOO FUN!!!:rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy::raritywink::yay::twilightsmile::applejackconfused: I loved the, "Who says I can't take her home?" Dash rant and the dream list almost made me pee:facehoof:. Keep up the sweet, k?

I'm almost positive I had read this story before, did you rewrite it?

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Well, I havent rewritten it before. Maybe you have read a story with a similar premise.

“Because, theres no way she’ll say what she is looking for in a marefriend, “Scootaloo said with a sigh, She’ll just say that she’s too cool to be looking for a special somepony and just fly off. This is something we’ll have to talk to the others about.”

Misplaced a quotation mark there :)

You knew we would all be clicking on "What is Love?" then bobbing our heads to the song while reading this, didn't you?

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:trollestia: MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYBBBBBBEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE:pinkiehappy:

"Baby, don't hurt me,
Don't hurt me no more.":facehoof::rainbowlaugh:

well i ever so slightly apreheisivly await the next chapter. it sounds like those CMC are up to no good there...

But heres hoping for some flutterdash soon :rainbowkiss::yay:

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I cant help it, I love that song!

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What...up to no good? the CMC? :scootangel:

Dont worry...the flutterdash is next.

This is adorable. I can't wait to see the dating shenanigans the CMC cook up.

Yay I've been waiting for this one. This was another good funny chapter I loved the Nightmare Eclipse part that was great. Now I can't wait to see the evil shenanigans the CMC come up with oh boy this'll be good

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