• Published 12th Jun 2016
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Twilight's Shining Experience - The Inner Lewd



Shining Armor accidentally barges in on Twilight Sparkle moments after her first orgasm. Naturally, his initial instict is to get away from his obviously aroused sister as swiftly as possible... that is, until she asks him to stay.

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This will be featured in no time at all. And let me just say: Men, women, we are truly a bunch of perverts... Let's never change. :rainbowwild:

Bry7x7x #2 · Jun 12th, 2016 · · 1 ·

Insest is wincest.

Just what have I gotten myself into?

More like, who!

Lovely to see my name on something. Also good choice of cover-art. Hope to work with you more in the future. Also, don't mind the dislikes. Filthy hethens have gotta stop hatin' the clop, and embrace the smut. TABOO SHIET 4 LIEF

I always love Sparkle inseste stories' i can't wait to see more of this story see. I wander if Shining was sent to the Guard by his parents after they learned of this.

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Yeah, so? You don't control me! Forget you, I do what I want!:raritywink:

twil'armor, always a hit

No! There's got to be more! Write another chapter!

7298546 I'm still thinking about it. That's why I left it open-ended, after all. Will change to incomplete if I decide to!

7298575 Yea write another chapter

...I don't know how to feel about this I am giddy the sex scene really has me going but then I just had a daydream of a pregnant filly Twilight this breaks a rule somewhere that some pony is too lazy to enforce

This was both cute and hot at the same time. I wonder what would Teenage Cadence think about this...interesting experiment. :twilightblush:

7300057 Well, they don't worry about pregnancy because there is a simple spell that is guaranteed to work up to thirty minutes after sex. After that it becomes a matter of probability. In short, you don't have to worry about pregnancy, as Twilight's a good little bookworm who read up on all aspects of sex; including safe sex. The spell is glossed over in the 101 Things a Growing Mare Needs To Know book, so she went and bought a medical sell book to learn it. She's nothing if not pragmatic.

Oh no... and you are Celestia’s student, whom I am currently balls deep inside of!

Hahaha! Thumbs up

Welp Shiny, in for a penny, in for a pounding. :rainbowlaugh:

Other than some misused punctuation, this was a pretty solid read.

7306314 I've been trying to expand my punctuation from commas and periods to include more colons, semi-colons, and em dashes where applicable. I imagine I'll be as bit rusty for a few fics, but I have been referring to thepunctuationguide whenever I grow unsure: which is often.

THIS IS SO CRINGEY
BUT ITS SO HOT
I CANT STOP READING
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH

I have barely any words to describe how I feel when I read this but the words intense and hot come to mind touching on such a taboo subject and making it detailed while not repulsive is not good but great writing my highest rating for a very detailed and captivating story 10/10 Oh sweet Celestia to all cloppers and those into clop I recommend this

okay now after reading some of the comments I see im not the only one with a fetish for incest porn great to see so many open minded people that don't turn and run at the first sign of content such as this would to see more of this

Must. Read. Later. Very. Intrigued

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Truer words never haz Ben spoken

God speed you magnificent bastard God speed

There is one user out there Hella determined to down vote every comment on lewd's stories.

And also, hawt.

Comment posted by The Inner Lewd deleted Nov 5th, 2016

This is all kinds of hilarious fun. Most excellent.

Twilight is sooo smart and sooo clueless at the same time. Her talking so brazenly about sex, without shame, while discovering her own sexuality is hot on so many levels. I absolutely love it!:heart:

And that's how Equestria was made!

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3/4 failed images. Gg

Just bought up Walmart's bleach department. Mind still not clean after reading this.:fluttershysad:

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To partially quote another comment,

>Reads an incest story
>Only other (major) fetish being underage
>No impregnation
>>Needs bleach
Oh, my sweet summer child.

Usually I'm not fond of first times and foals...
But! You certainly made it work! I love their bantering... Would enjoy sequels! :)

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