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I just can't help but to say; "Sweet Celestia! So many typos!" If you have a pre-reader, he's not doing his job. And maybe you should get one...
*Shiver
Damn, celestia got pretty lucky. Also, great story, somehow missed that there was a sequel to your other story
oh chrysalis thats just evil
yea that is going to be one LOOOONG night.
Looks like twi isn't getting much sleep
3337186 agreed.
Chrysalis is eviiiiiil. Also, very convenient cupcakes
D'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
3338117 It's pinkie what do you expect.
This....... was very very painful chapter to read
get a proofreader!!!
Y'know where this hits me?
*points to chest*
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Right in the feels.
this has so many mixed emotions! difficult to keep track
That was quite the cute set of scenes you put together there. I am quite pleased by the way you got those two together and didn't just rush it with the 'she just falls for him instantly' kinda deal. The only thing I can complain about is the bunch of grammatical errors that popped up. It is probably the editor in me but it did break up some of the scenes with my brain trying to come up with all the errors that needed to be fixed before I could continue. But maybe it was just me.
All in all keep up the good work.
Depending on what the story is, I might be able to help. If you want a pre-reader/editor let me know in a PM or something and I'll fit you into my schedule.
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No, she didn't get lucky. Weren't you paying attention?
What the what!
Nooooo! Cliff hanger!
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Ah. Yay. Also... dafuq. I see some kinda interesting buildup... if Twilight finds out. Or Shining finds out.
Yeah, there are some ITTY BITTY typos all over these two last chapters.
Well, that was certainly interesting and maybe a bit unexpected, but it was also pretty awesome.
I did spot quite a few spelling/grammar errors there though, wasn't really in the right mind set to note them down though.
3402636 I guess the question is who will be her first. My hope is that Twilight will be Celestia's first.
So Chrysalis DID use her changeling magic on Shining Armor for that.
hmmm the queen does have a good point for her fear, she and twilight do share a bond, and for once chrissy does not have to lie or steal, but will her nature be what does her in, it gives you something to think about that is for sure. Though the fact that she has regrets over her actions shows that she has changed, yeah when twi finds out there is going to be problems but if both queen and princess are wanting it to work, then they will work through it
then again I am a hopeless romantic at heart so I always want the good ending
Wooo whooo!
you my good sir/madam are evil... I like it
nooo, keep going, I love this beautiful work. Go as long as the story demands.
3651604You should see my story, it's still in the beginning phases, and I still haven't gotten to the best parts of it yet.
I forsee it getting larger than even Fallout Equestria by the time I finish.
Sexy.
Haha, conception through threesome sex is a must? Seems legit xD
hmmm, so when are Twilight and Chrysalis going to make the plunge into parenthood I wonder...
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Though I could see it being fairly low on that list... right behind 'make a dick spell that can conceptualize'
Eh, when you're an immortal being it's not so much as 'it's an option' so much as it is on your list of 'things to do to alleviate the boredom' in my opinion
On to read the new chapter now!
After many distractions, I have finally read the chapter and I have to say: that was appropriately violent/sexy
I would've expect Pinkie Pie getting laid by Cheese Sandwich.
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And when I saw the solution, I have to admit that I may have panicked just a little bit about certain end of the world scenarios
And vice versa!
LOL that their nookie was interrupted.
Is it wrong to imagine Pinkie being held down (barely) by the strength of two alicorns and a spirit of chaos?
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BY THE POWER OF EDITING! Let thy will be done!
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Most likely. She could get tied up to the castle like Big Mac was tied to a house but I think that would cause some serious property damage in Canterlot
Siscord....
Cadence is pregnant?!!? How will Twilight tell the news to her friends?
That was absolutely arousing what discord did to Celestia in the previous chapter. I wonder if you'll do it again except in the current time line using Cadences milk since she will be producing it while growing her baby.
Very sexy.
4300220 Aww well that's okay I was into the chapter because of the mind break.
Before I read this, is this about Chrysalis being a serial rapist?
(screaming) NAILED IT!!!!!!
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No this way love story between twilight and chrysalis.
The story was before it was exactly that
Question: Update?
Hahahaa Do it, do it just for shits and gigs.
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I want more chapters too, there are not much TwiSalis fics D: