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lorettafox


Twilight is best Mane pony and Vinyl is best BG pony. Discord is best draconqquus and I update on my own time.

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This story is a sequel to These Dreams


Twilight and Discord flee to Manehattan for a short while to hide from Celestia who wants to put them under a sleeping spell. But soon, Screwball, Discord's daughter comes along and joins them in hiding but this isn't the strangest thing. After being sick a few weeks, Twilight soon discovers that she's pregnant!

Their time in Manehattan is cut short when Twilight receives a letter from Celestia informing her and the new family to come back to Canterlot so she can formally apologize to them. They head back to Canterlot, unknown that a green unicorn is following them back, determined to get rid of Discord and will stop at nothing, even if it means harming Twilight and Screwball, to get rid of him forever.

Chapters (26)
Comments ( 360 )
Gak

Hmmm ill have to read your other story first.

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES I'm currently at school :rainbowkiss: Yous is the best for posting it

very high potencial. note to self: read the story behind this story. totaly fav. you will be hearing from me in the next chapter

Oh my, a sequel! :pinkiegasp: Interesting! I'm definitely keeping track of it! :pinkiehappy:

Looks interesting so far, I have to say! XD Ah, Discord...same as always. ;)

Will eagerly await more chapters to this story.

I'm not sure how I feel about this...:rainbowhuh:

One the one hoof its not really love is it since Discord keeps putting on more and more power into the Acceptance Spell he has on Twilight....:pinkiesad2:
On the other... I have no idea if the spell is merely enhancing what Twilight already feels about Discord or not...:twilightoops:

But it is an interesting read... if a little... chaotic in places. But hey that's what happens when you date the Spirit of Chaos isn't it?:twilightsmile:

So many ponies like the first chapter of Renew! I'm so happy! I got 50 notifications and I thought something was wrong with the system, but nope. You are all awesome my readers. :rainbowkiss:

773841 I made sure to make you happy today. :pinkiehappy:

774955 Yay! I'm so happy! BTW, I see what you did with Surprise :trollestia:

775061 Finally glad somepony noticed that. :pinkiehappy:

Twilight's dialogue seems a little... iffy. She yells in your story way more than she does in the show; She's not so easily flustered, you know. She has a remarkable amount of composure, and is a natural leader. here, she seems more like... A spoiled filly most of the time. Very out of character.

Nevertheless, I have enjoyed the story so far, and I wish you the best of luck in your writing.

YES GOD DAMMIT YES!!!!! UPDATES!!!! Will read then post later

787895 I'll try to remember that. Thanks for reading though. :raritywink:

Hello i love this, this is AWESOME!

787987 I has read it... Oh dear...:twilightblush: Discord is pretty creative when it comes to names isn't him? Sarcasm :trollestia:

I like where this seems to be going :rainbowkiss:

775065wait, finally? Lol I'm surprised no one really noticed. Once I saw blonde mane, white coat and wings I'm like "SUPRISE!" lol

AND THEN CAME PONY SECKS!:derpyderp2:

801613 It's implied. XD Most people didn't say anything about Surprise, but that who I was intending. :pinkiehappy:

Oh dear.... sounds like Screwball maaay not actually like Twilight being her new mummy judging by her reaction to Celestia's words :twilightoops:

813161 She doesn't know her yet and she doesn't know that she and her friends were the ones who resealed him in stone. I'm sure with a little bit of explaining (and perhaps a bit of magic) she'll came to adore Twilight. :twilightsmile:

813306 Is that a spoiler alert I here? :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

Well shit, I cant wait to Keith about this! (L4D2 Reference)

Dang. I knew I should've stayed awake at 2 in the morning! Can't wait to see if Twilight has any problems due to little Chaos Star. (My name for the baby)

I want moat!!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

815761

You want moat?

Shall it be an alligator filled moat, then? :pinkiecrazy:

Yay screwball I'm happy she got along with twi I was worried there was going to be a big argument but good story keep it up.

So far an amazing story.great plot and writing. I cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy:

This caused many fangirl squeals, clapping, and gasps and etc. Looking forward to the next one. Grrr when will Twilight realize she's partially under a spell?! :twilightangry2: And oh yeah, I forgot about the waffles in the toaster :rainbowhuh:

827694Same thing, but I left my fish sticks in the toaster. Lol:pinkiehappy:

827767 Um, don't you mean Fridge? :derpytongue2:

827839No, I was just referencing to the song fish stick sandwich burrito.lol

827694 I think your comment just gave me an idea that I could use in the next chapter. :yay:

828076 I just click on the emote I want to use and it's code (which makes it show up in the comment) will be pasted into the comment and hopefully show up. :twilightsmile:

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