After years of exile in Tartarus, Nightmare Moon finds herself back in Equestria, at the request of her sister. Celestia hopes to repair their relationship, but she enlists someone.... unique to guide Nightmare Moon along the path to reformation.
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Just a stupid AiE short I came up with, told in first person as Nightmare Moon. Originally, I started out writing it as part of a chapter of Changing Lanes, before spinning off the idea and completely rewriting it as its own story.
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Both adorable and funny, a winning combination. Though the one problem I have here is that it's hard to take a name like Anon in a non second person story seriously. You could have at least given him a name.
This was a truley wonderful fic, both funny as well as sweet and touching.
Nightmare Moon is teenage Luna going through her emo-and-mascara face. Yeah, you heard me.
A thousand years of helmet hair will do that to a person.
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Especially with a mane that long. Yikes.
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Nightmare Moon's true punishment.
Who knew Celestia could be so cruel?
Her color scheme is no coincidence. The elements are actually just overpowered magical mane conditioner. Don't tell Rarity. She'll have a stroke.
Don't bother with trivial details.
Anon: " Which means... Oh..."
Good story!
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They could be half-sisters.
You just got a like.
Awesome, absolutely loved it
Nice, short, and in the feels.