After being separated from the darker, uninhibited versions of themselves, Celestia and Luna set out to reform them. After months of work, training, and discussions to set the pair on a better path, the sisters host both Nightmare Moon and Daybreaker together in a private, casual dinner to see how well the two have been listening.
It goes less than smoothly...
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Stupid little greentext thought up while absolutely smashed on a weekday morning before bed, now converted to prose. Teen rating is for minor sexual allusions, but nothing explicit.
Cover art is a prior work by SilentWulv. The original image is here
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Well, that seems to be a fairly nice premise
i prefer my steak medium well.
it has to have a nice bit of crunch crust on it and it should certainly not be bloody in the middle any more.
This was lovely!
(and I prefer rare steak)
Just because Daybreaker is part-dragon she expects all the other carnivores to share her taste in carbon.
This was a groovy story, except for one thing.....
Daybreaker ruined a steak!
Well now I just want more of this concept. That was great!
This seems like it could be a fun anthology sort of story with different scenarios they had to go through.
This was quite interesting to read. Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon appear to do their best to be as insufferable as possible.
every time I see these four people trying to have a peaceful dinner, I am reminded of this image. :3
This was a surprisingly great read. Love the banter between all of them and I actually really love the detail of Luna having an acquired taste for meat after being Nightmare Moon. I would love a sequel if that's a possibility.
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A sequel or an addition is a possibility - I won't rule it out. My biggest issue aside from fleshing the idea out is I still have an ongoing green I've been writing regularly since August of '21 which may make it here someday, a la Changing Lanes, another project I'm in the process of finishing, and then juggling those with the time spent on my other hobbies. I'd like to be more consistent, but as my history of submitting new stuff shows.... it doesn't happen often.
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Ah, I see. Well regardless, I do hope to see more of this some day.
CMON CELESTIA KEEP THAT NICKNAME!
BLACK N' MOPEY IS MY NEW NICKNAME FOR HER!
Considering what could have happened things are going good so far.
Luna: "At least not again. It wasn't that tasty after all."
Tobe fair, what did you expect?
I love that response!
Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.
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No she only ruined a chunk of steak if you had red correctly she cut it into a small piece to taste
This was a thoroughly enjoyable read. All alicorns invovled with a humorous dinner party, a fantastically executed concept. For critique, I offer that some space between dialouge bursts might be advisable and more flow with drama.
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IF you get more time to write this I throw my own desire to see more. Do not ever force yourself to bend to readers of course but should spare time and desire hit you, please consider it.
These all have > in front of them, most likely remnants of the aforementioned greentext. Also, Daybreaker's comment should probably have an enter/space between it and Nightmare's rebuttal.
Not sure what happened here, could be a lack of punctuation or a unnecessarily capitalized "But."
Small errors over, this was a great read. Very funny, and quite enjoyable.