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Uncle Smiles


Been getting a weird vibe lately. Disease, dispair and distrust. A sinister cloud of looming uncertainty.

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Come on man, if you're going to write power fantasy schlock, go big. Don't use the clichéd loser that arbitrarily gets awesome powers and abilities, use the Red Skull armed with Pym tech, or Brian Mills utilizing the Venom symbiote. Swing for the fences.

7122895 I do what I want. It is my fic and I do it for the lolz, so really I can do what I want as long as it doesn't violate the site rules.

7123050 Wait, this was supposed to be funny? I didn't notice anything comedic.

Iffy start, but I'll watch.

A time power fic? If there isn't a paradox by the end of this i will be disapointed, watching!

7125391 was it a good chapter? I need the opinion of a reader cause I feel like it was shit.

This is an enjoyable read.

7125642 Will this have anything related to Quantum Break? (Ex; Powers or anything?)

EDIT: Nevermind lol :rainbowlaugh:

7125882 I agree with you MOAR CHAPTERS ARE NEEDED!!!!!!!

Yup. Time egg is totally fucked. No more need to explain. Time is an egg, and the egg is fucked :trollestia::yay:

Hate to be honest like this, but i feel that my attention is far from caught. Just with this chapter alone, there is so much potential to show their relationship growing. I feel a huge lack of connection between them due to the time jumps. For all i know, they're just acquaintances.

7128879 It's fine to be honest. The thing is, I couldn't come up with anything and went with time skips.

Eventually, I'll come back to it and change things.

you have my attention. I will follow

i like the story and am going to follow
the rainbow and pinkie links don't work could you fix em?
is there going to be a picture of twilight? or did i just miss that?

It says there was an update. But there is nothing here :raritydespair::fluttershysad::fluttercry:

7140463
:eeyup: its fixed thanks that'll make my picture-with-story side very happy

I love your shit writing! :pinkiehappy: by the way the links for applejack, rarity, and fluttershy still dont work. Other than that, love the story! :yay:

7142178 They work. They send you to a random page telling you to click the link to be redirected there.

I hope you enjoyed my shitty writing.

Give yourself more credit than that. Its actually pretty good. Now if only Schools were as interesting as this story.

'Hakuna matata! What a wonderful phases, It's our problem free, philosophy, Hakuna matata..'

I had to and I don't regret it :P

more please.

This is my favourite story so far I wish there were more like it

Chapter seemed a little rushed.

Twi....stfu, you know next to nothing about the everfree

Most dangerous forest yet nothing bad happens in it besides a wild beast every plot convenient time.:facehoof:

NOOOOOOOOO god take me now please

7398168 Sorry, I just lost interest but I'm keeping it up in case I suddenly gain the urge to continue it.

7398244 u motherfucker i finally found a quantum break parody and you cancel it screw you man i waited so long to find one

7787909 I'm actually working on another chapter but because of the many fics I have, it'll take time.

7787965 oh ok you are forgiven but why it say canceled?

7787968 I haven't gotten around to change it. I'm still pretty busy but as soon as I can I'll put it on haitus.

7787991
It still reads canceled but since you still working on it I give this story
:moustache: x one million

“I am Rarity , owner of Carousel Boutique. I'll be happy to replace those hideous clothes.” The white unicorn mare introduced.

“My name's F-Fluttershy .” I could barely hear but luckily I caught the name. I nodded at their introductions.

Pictures aren't working. just thought I'd let you know.

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