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Uncle Smiles


Been getting a weird vibe lately. Disease, dispair and distrust. A sinister cloud of looming uncertainty.

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It'll be taken down depending on how it does.:moustache: if think it's shit, I warned you.

I like the concept of an insane human gaining what I can only assume is major power, but still knows to be responsible and good with it, I like the fact that he is aware of the fan base and the fanfics, and thus can establish and break the fourth wall without realm doing so, I love how he refers discord to John de Lancie, and not as discord, I find it very humorous, and I love the references of the shows. That is what I like about it so far. But I will not up vote until I know it will be continued.

I'm Shade Demon, fuck you if you don't like the name, I don't give a flying fuck.

And in just one sentence of the description, you've insulted readers and instantly made them not care about this character and story one bit.

6978743 sorry, I made this at like eleven at night and I was tired. I'll try to come up with a better description, I just need more time

Edit: I hope it's better.

It didn't last long for them as I had continued my normal routine of annoying the guards and doctors, until I found one show that had peaked my interest.
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. It had peaked my interest with some of it's inside jokes, but when I got to watch more of the show, I had grown a liking to it.

I believe you mean piqued.

6979016 Ashes to ashes. Bones to bones...

Its an old, old saying...

Comment posted by wlam deleted Feb 27th, 2016

don't tempt fait you idiot:facehoof:

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when is the next chaper coming?

'Mommy will always love you.’ I thought as I clutched the necklace, silently crying to myself.

Oh wow....O_O

IT WAS NOT A COINCIDENCE!!
also, fluttershy romance interest would really do it for me with this story. You already got it set up.

Well that just happened.

6986418 Don't know, need to wait for the next chapter :P

6986661 I see what you did there.

6986751 but what do you think so far? And what do you think will happen?

6986775 I think we're going to see more of Shade's demonic magic.

Lol and you said it would be funny it was sad that all i didn't Lough not even once
:ajbemused:but still good

Filled with errors and sudden children of Twilight's..... but passable. Maybe a bit more with the little arc created with Scootaloo and a bit more of the evidence that made Shade go from "Fuck you you random women" to "Fuck you for leaving me mom!"

6987372 I'll be honest, I've tried making a scene where Shade sees all of Celestia's memories during her stay at the human world but couldn't, it always came out shit. So really, I know it doesn't seem good but I'm not trying to wow anyone, just entertain those who actually enjoy what I write.

So yeah, I do this not just because I can, I write for the fun of it and I like to entertain.

Though you bringing that up made me think if I could try and make the memories, if i do, I'm sure it'll be shit.

Rushed a bit this chapter, but still good. I don't think I'm getting my fluttershy romance, am I?

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Maybe you do, but maybe not. If you can't get the memory scenes right than maybe have the two talk more about it in later chapters. If you couldn't write them right those kinds of things for things are a bit like shits for stories: If you force it too hard you are just gonna hurt yourself.

6988273 Thanks for the advice.:raritywink:

Being the son of a deity and a Demon, what does that make me?

A Nephilim, i think? :unsuresweetie:

6989425 Really? I didn't really think that was a real thing. I'll check up on it.

Twilight looked at me in fear, I'll ask later.

This is the moment that Twilight knew, she fucked up...

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A Nephilim is different when looking at different places, in Mythology Nephilim are said to be giants or 'Sons of God' or 'Daughters of Men'. Other places say that they are Fallan angles.

In video game wise Nephilim Or I guess Nephalem are the offspring of a demon and angel. Since Sombra is a Demon and Celestia is a angel (Somewhat) than Shade is a Nephalem.

Soooooo. . . Not fluttershy? Probs twilight, isn't it?

Question: i'm tracking this story but for some reason this showed in my feed but not my tracking library. ? Why though?

Also great chapter:twilightsmile:!

Ps: my Shipping sense is tingling:trollestia:

I then fired the first shot at the forest he was so desperately 'run' towards, then fired the second shot under the lifeless corpse.

Isn't it running? Just saying.

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