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Uncle Smiles
Been getting a weird vibe lately. Disease, dispair and distrust. A sinister cloud of looming uncertainty.
Uncle Smiles
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Not bad so far. Like and a fave for you.
1 word comes to mind for this chapter
epic
While I did like the first version, those last few chapters were getting freaking WEIRD!
Only one chapter of this new rendition and all I can say is so far so Epic
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7207819 I'll do my job if you remember to do yours.
Good beginning though. I love the Dragon even more.
i love it
Oh shit, epic first chapter.
I love it so far. And I'm more than willing to be a proofreader for you.
7207805 when can we expect next chapter?
Is this a crossover? It sounds like a crossover of Skyrim.
This only the first chapter and I already tell that this going to be AWESOME with a Capital everything.
Great start, can't wait to see where you go with this!
7208039 It has a little Skyrim in it but it's not a crossover.
Dragon God 2.0, it's only 1 chapter in already better
7207958 I have to ask, is your profile pic Nicholas Cage as Yoda?
.....That is one of the most randomly horrifying thoughts I've ever had, AND I HAVE SEEN SOME SHIT!!!
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7208324 I know right. Like I said in my blog the first had
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7207847 Thanks man, appreciate it.
7208677 WTF is that Pic?
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7208651 Yes, it's Nicholas Cage as Yoda.
Looks good. A decent improvement over the old version; I look forward to seeing what you have planned.
Also, the dragon's name: is it in Dovahzul?
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7209492 its a name I got from a Dovah name generator.
7209587: Thought as much.
7209598 Meh, its a cool and Dovazul like name.
Someones in for a spanking.
7209780 Imma pretend that it what I means think it means.
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDGE!!!!!!!
i think this is better than dragon god of equestria!!!!!!!!!!!!
cant wait for more dude!
woot!
I like it so far, though i think instead of actually POSTING the images of certain character, you should link the image of said character in the worlds, like this while still descripting the character. Dont put too many links though, as too many links directs the viewers attention far too often, which is quite annoying.
You have my interest.
The mental image of that badass dragon with his arm crossed staring at Celestial and Luna with a disapproving frown is way too funny for some strange reason. Can't wait for chapter two!!!!!!
i like it
I am willing to be the proofreader. Just send me the links to the Google docs
Don't stop keep going.
Mmmmm Doom
The game for satisfy our morbid thoughts and bloodlust.
XD
7215356 The amount of tables I've flipped the day it was revealed. My mom eventually taped my mouth shut.
Taking the take off hurt like hell.
Ah~! The sweet sounds of Demons screaming for their lives... Irresistible!
Also, yeah I couldn't stop playing it too. Nice chapter, by the way. I wonder how the girls are gonna take this?
A Dragon fic. This is going to be awesome
Okay I have to say this but, don't use pictures to describe your characters, It makes you seem really lazy
7217116 hate to break it to ya but I am Lazy.
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I'm not saying you have to describe everything in perfect detail, but it would help to say more than just "strange clothing" and "a sword." You could just give a few details and let the pictures do the rest. It's just a suggestion, you do whatever you want or feel comfortable with.
7217487 I say strange clothing becuase I have no idea what type of clothes the picture shown. I post pictures to things I don't know how to describe, like the sky palace, Ultimate Tirek, God King Saanvodkiin.
It's how I roll. If you read my early fics, you'll see that I had no idea how to describe anything so I resorted to images but as time passed, I began to rarely use images.
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That's fair, I wouldn't really know how to describe some of those things either. As for past stories, I think I've only read Dragon God of Equestria, and now that I think about it pictures didn't seem to be there too often, at least as far as I can remember. Now, I would suggest mentioning the gun barrel on the sword, but due to the perspective when it was mentioned, it wouldn't really make any sense. I don't know what to tell you, put a little research in, ask others for advice? Either way, it's strangely not really something that bothers me as much as other people apparently. Doesn't mean I don't care about it, I just don't feel the need to mention it most of the time.
7217508 The sword wouldn't be used as a gun yet until...Idk but yeah mentioning it would be saying the Equestria has firearms.
Besides, it's my fic. My writing is law in this universe. (It just means that I wouldn't give a Damn how people negatively comment on the smallest things. Except you, you're the only one who had actually wondered about the use of images)
Have a hat
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Exactly, Spike shouldn't know what guns are, so it wouldn't make sense (depending on head canon).
7217563 Whenever I think of Equestrias Military with guns, I think cannons, Muskets, and as a super weapon a Blunderbuss for its diversity in ammunition (Nails, Screws and such)
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Yeah, I tend to only consider cannons. If not those, there are always ballistae, I guess.
Interesting. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
A small nit-pick to an otherwise grand story: you said, "he revealed six bubble containing her friends and the traitor." when the canon had 7 bubbles, and you even eluded to Spike being there, making the count 7 again
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