HAHA i have found, what is quite possibly, a mistake in this story, but given your kind of writing it could just be a really out there pun

It had been worth the weight.

I'd expected wait but given it being like a "Pringles can strapped to your inner thigh with a couple of tennis balls at the base" it could've just been you making a pun really far away from that section. Also, first. I have no shame.

7816495 It is no mistake.

I have no shame.

You've come to the right place.

I wonder who will win...

Hohoho, what a chapter this one!~
A Christmas miracle! Hahaha!

Nicely done man, nicely done!

"It's a Christmas miracle," he said.

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It had been worth the weight.

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Thank you for sexy time with Luna.

Huh, overlooked this one last time.

Small typos/suggestion
Chapter#2

Oh, I'm sure stallions would be lining up, fighting eachother over you

Chapter#3

Each time she came down, it came to her stretched opening already at it's limit.

Well, I don't know what kind of mis-leading porn you've been watching,

I would remove hyphen here

7818678 Thanks. Fixed.

Wow! I literally reread this the day before the update was posted, really glad I stopped by again. This story really is a favorite

He began to she the massive bulge in her abdomen.

Hmmmmm... Something's off about this sentence.

It had been worth the weight.

We hath observed what thou hast performed here

...I don't know how to feel right now...

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Butt these are all old. :v

Also dammit, Shakes, I need to finish my accidental august fic. That's, like, several months overdue.