• Member Since 26th Jun, 2013
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Clacksphob


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Sequels? Side stories? I demand MOAR

6765419
I have some ideas that could fit with this one, but they don't quite make whole stories yet. Glad you enjoyed it!

6766071

It was quite good indeed. You've earned yourself a follower.

6769296
I'm honoured, hope I won't disappoint in the future!

"As serious as I can be." She began to slowly sway her plot back and forth, stretching her legs and neck, calling as much attention as possible to her sleek body, kept in form over years of adventuring. "I'm in chains. Bragging aside, I'm not going anywhere soon. And nopony would ever have to know. I'd do just about anything, one last time because I want it, on my terms, and not because some zookeeper decides he needs more pegasus foals."

I really liked this paragraph! There's a lot of personality to this line of dialogue, and it just remarkably flows well and feels natural. And all the clop in this story is fucking unfffff. Nice writing!

Daring, welcome to the reason for humanity's perpetual spot as Apex Predator of Planet Earth; endurance, guile, and determination are the cornerstones of Humanity's success! A lack of a heat season (which means perpetual mating), incredibly resilient and durable bodies, an omnivorous diet, a lack of fur, our very digits (and tools we operate with them), in addition to learning the art of utilising our environment in our favor has all but secured our inevitable conquest of most things.

Then there's fucking magic. Sure, we could just drop a metric fuck ton of dirty bombs on Equestria, but with the Sun being under the exclusive control of it's inhabitants... Let's just say that it wouldn't really be worth it. We might prove a point by bombing the fuck out of Griffonstone, to make an example of them, and say, in no uncertain terms, that we are willing to negotiate the terms of their surrender... Buuuuut, that means very little, if they can tell it's a bluff...

Point is, humanity, while impressive, is not infallible.

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Well, Humanity need not necessarily conquer to win. It only comes down to whether magic works on Earth or not. If not, great, we can fuck over Equestria and wait for tribute :pinkiecrazy: If yes, that is basically a pre-lost war :fluttershysad:

Of course that assumes if we really were the collective bloodthirsty evil that the Conversion Bureau likes to portray :ajsmug:

7133375 As might not be evident, such is why I avoid the Conversion Bureau... Human bashing is not my favorite theme... Then again, neither is human wank... Unless the latter is utilized to comedic effect.

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Yeah, TCB has not gained my affection.
Then again, I just write clop, so what do I know of good storytelling.

7133582 :rainbowlaugh:In all seriousness, though, it takes skill to write "decent" erotica/smut... Consider yourself proud to have at least one good piece.:pinkiehappy:

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Thanks mate, really appreciate it. I already got other ideas cooking, and they're not all going to be human wank :raritywink:

7134452 Once more, you have me laughing in hysterics, and chomping at the bit in anticipation!:trollestia:

7134452 Once more, you have me laughing in hysterics, and chomping at the bit in anticipation!:trollestia:

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Yikes, double chomping already. Hope I can measure up to this much anticipation :rainbowlaugh:

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