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Ok, this was good. Better than What I thought it would be. If I may offer a suggestion, though. Redo your description. It's very vague and boring and it almost made me skip the story entirely. Which would have been unfortunate.
Nah, it's perfectly accurate as it is.
Continue Please.
I'll definitely follow this for now.
This, I like.
The concept is strange, but well detailed.
The background story of the man is foggy but believable, I like it quite much.
The state of the pony is surprising, to say the least, but expected after the things that happened to her.
Now I only have a small amount of questions.
1. Will we get a better description of her, including colors and name, some past too, even?
2. How detailed the mature parts will be?
3. When will you continue it and how far will you go, dear author?
You got my intrest, I expect this quality to carry over the whole story.
-Zeph
1. I don't like doing colors/names for oneshot OCs, so probably not, some past may be mentioned but may not be - after all, that's not what the story's about.
2. Very detailed. That's what the story's about, duh.
3. No idea and no idea.
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So we won't get a single color of her?
That's depressing. With her current state, even moreso.
But I must wonder. Why?
I think it really isn't a difficult task to put a color combination together, which is also true to the show. Oh well.
-Zeph
It was the worst I've ever seen.
Nah, just kidding.
Keep up the good work, maestro!
This story had me going, I would like to see how far you go with this. Hopefully this story doesn't end up in "incomplete" hell like most good stories. Keep it up.
This story is strange... It's a one shot, a short story or a full story?
Yes.
this is interesting a little dark for my tastes but you got a good story going on I will continue to read this story out of sheer morbid fascination this is going to be a unique read
Well it threw me off from the very beginning, as I read along the story very interesting enough for me to want, to continue. I like how dark it is, but I want know to is what has happen to this mare and the backstory to this. Maybe in chapter for a late time I guess. Over all keep up the good work.
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I know right. A good story comes along but not has been completed for what ever reason. I want to see how it ends.
Great chapter, glad to see that this fic updated, I thought it was dead! :D
Oh my, its been a while. Very happy to see this one again :D
Yes, yes. Please keep up the work, I want to see this go on.
Why do I keep picturing the guy as the Medic from TF2?
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That's... That's a very good question. Why would you do that?...
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Glasses, knows surgery, I keep reading his lines in that accent of his; for all I know, he's tired because of all the killing he had to do nearly every day.
Ah, after half a year, we have an update. I'm glad it's finally here, though I'm not fond of the long waiting.
This chapter is great, I enjoyed reading it thoroughly, I also hope for a continuation as interesting as this one was.
Please do continue, as soon as possible.
-Zeph
Such a cock tease and I don't mean it like that I'm really into it and it ends with no sign of starting again
Its never too late to continue your fic. But I really hope next chapter will be soon. Finally there's proper sex and humiliation, but I still can't figure out human and why exactly he does what he does.
I can slowly see that this guy is going to teach himself on how to correctly talk to this mare, or at least how to be better in terms of social terms.
A wizard is never late, nor is he early. He arrives precisely when he means to.
I'm glad this story is not 'over'.
Even though over a year passed since the last update.
I'm also glad the real parts began. Quite an interesting read, really.
Well, until next time, I suppose?...
why such a long wait between chapters the writing's not half bad
finally.
I think this fic has a lot of good potential I like it so far!
Hmm. It goes where I think ti goes?
What is schedule? Twice a year?
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Better than nothing I guess. I was surprised when I saw the update on my feed.
The stolkholm stndrom is working on the poor pony.
Oh my, an update!
*after finishing it*
Okay, a couple thoughts:
-mind break
-all the way through
-size difference
Normally these aren't my fetishes, but... damn!
Also, I just realized how little she is, therefore, how little ponies are!
I hate it when people make the ponies human sized or heck, taller than 1.2 meters, but in this story, they are so tiny!
7722151 Valid question, based on the previous release dates we will see the next chapter in 2017's June or so. :I
7722333 Oh yes, Stockholm Syndrome all the way! This story uses it all too well, isn't it? :D
Well, let's hope we will see more soon.
I see you've made ponies incredibly small in this story, while I'm not a huge fan of huge size difference you write quite well and look forward to the next update!
Ah, this just popped into my mind.
The theme of the end of the 4th chapter.
even though it took forever, this story is hitting so many of my niche fetishes that its worth it.
Your story gives me shivers every time I read a chapter.
Please, find it in your heart to shorten your schedule of 'two updates per year'.
Is it possible to have it be at least once every two months ?
Please ?!
7726361 A perfect theme for the ending of chapter four. Indeed, I wholeheartedly agree.
You sure have started the dark side of the story but bright out some version of the light to it. I would like to see how the story ends.
Hell of a note to leave off on.
Interesting concept. I like it.
Well well.
It's the October of 2017, so even my almost a year old assumption is out of date.
When will an update happen? I (and I assume a couple others) have been waiting for a looong time now!
New chapter please?
Hopefully, the author will remember that life, is best lived whenever we see to complete our goals.
So, hopefully, I think an update will come to us, perhaps, in 2019 ?
Eh, not the worst way this story could have been left incomplete. And although an outline of the rest of the story would've been nice, I'll take what I've got and be thankful for it.
I don't think you'll ever read this, DWriter, but the story you crafted was fantastic and, indeed, a unique take on the "Human saves homeless pone" subgenre. I may not know you, but I do genuinely wish you the best of luck in life, and hope you're doing well.
Oh this mare got stockholm syndrome pretty bad.
I really wish to have a happy ending for her but I don't think that's ever gonna happen.
Почему история мертва она хорошая?!
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