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AmtrakBrony
I'm a guy who loves many things. Trains, planes, writing, Yu-Gi-Oh!, and especially ponies. I became a Brony on 9-1-2013, and my life's never been the same since then. I hope you enjoy my works.
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love it.
6364826 Thank you! Like I said, more to come soon for this story!
It's good... but I'm going to be honest what the actual fuck. It is WAY too rushed and you should have went slow with a series of chapters explaining there relationship.
6365184 Trust me, there'll be more. You're going to see progress in their relationship, even if you think it's already gone as far as it could, plus multiple scenes of Sonata starting over with everyone at the school. Once I'm finished, if I think the intimate scenes should have been later, then I'll edit the story to make that happen. For right now, I just wanted to write what I wanted to write.
6365224 So you just wanted to write the sex? Really? OK well you still should have been slow about it if you wanted to do that. For example saying that you and Sonata were dating for a while like a flash of the future.
6365231 No, I wasn't planning on writing about just sex. The thing is, I don't know how far along the school year is after Rainbow Rocks (it could have already past spring break for all we know), and I didn't want to take too long in having everything progress. I completely understand how you feel about it being rushed, and now that I look at it, I have to agree somewhat. I think what I'll do is create a two-week gap near the end of this first chapter, then make all the other chapters show Sonata's reformation within the school. That should show progression in both the relationship and her fulfilling her desire to change. How does that sound?
6365312 For now good but once it's all settled take a break for like 2 weeks maybe then re write the whole thing. Not in one outing. I mean take your time writing and thinking about it. Do this after all chapters are finished.
6365348 Sounds good!
6365355 :P I haz the best ideaz ever.
6365360 Lol
6365363 See that everyone?! I made him laugh! I actually made a infamous stone cold author laugh!
6365480 Excuse me?!?!?
6365483 :P it Was a joke. Some authors can get very dickish when someone gives em advice. Not all of them do it though you don't. Anyways quick someone run he's going to write and narrate our entire lives with his words of death!
6365535 Yes, yes, yes...evil beware...
LOL
Anyway, sorry if I sounded a bit aggravated. Hope I didn't anger you at all.
6365545 Na na I'm pretty easy going as it is and It takes a lot to rile me up. Anyways let's take this to PMs now that we have sufficiently filled up the comments.
6365558 Good idea.
Sonata is my waifu!
6367841 I love her, too, but Rarity is MY waifu.
All well and good, but how did the test go?
6383235 Ah, good question, my friend. We'll find out sooner or later!
6383283 good. I always felt Sonata deserved a decent guy, yet oddly I always pictured him being deaf for a sense of irony.
6383319 Seriously? Interesting...
6383369 yeah, I just imagine a cute scene where Aria and Adagio are arguing and Sonata hangs back upset and unsure what to do, when a hand goes to her shoulder. She turns around to see a cute guy who smiles at her, he asks if she's ok, his handicap evident in his voice (tastefully of course.)
She would shrug.
He would look at the arguing Dazzlings who haven't noticed him.
He turns to her and asks if she would like to go get a coffee, to which she smiles and signs "I would love too."
He offers her an arm and the two walk away leaving the Adagio and Aria stunned at the departing Sonata.
I just think it would be a sweet way to show her being smarter and more beautiful than the others expected
6383727 Great idea! Are you planning on writing a story about that concept?
6383897 naw, it's just that one scene. Take it if you want it.
6383897 ehhh maybe I will do something with it. The more I thought about it the more beautiful it sounds
6391856 Great! Can't wait to see it!
6392148 here is hoping I can do it justice.
6392148 Here it is. Let me know what you think.
Now I just want te part where Sonata bids the guy goodbye at the school and everyone's like
and they just watch in total shock as the guy kisses her and Sonata goes on her way and everyone's like,"OH MY GOD!" and everyone just kind of stays quiet as the guy enters CHS and the news spread and and 
is the tension around him for a while then soon it changes to 
and soon it becomes 
and then everyone just gets accustomed to it and like
I JUST WANT THE CHAPTER WHERE THEY GET MARRIED DAMMIT
6497310
You seem pretty eager!
I don't plan to actually go that far with this story, unfortunately, but if I ever do, it may not be for several months. It may not happen until I've completely run out of other ideas, and that itself could take some time.
WHY IS THIS NOT REAL LIFE?
6580126 I was about to ask the same question...
Ok so I haven't watched rainbow rocks yet. But sonata is to adorable to be pure evil like Adagio and Aria. So the Sonya in this story I hope is the how sonata is near the end. She is so cute. Also. Fantastic story 10/10 I only wished the story was longer lol
6661305 It will be at some point. I'm going to restructure the story to where her reformation comes before all the clop.
Really glad you liked the story!
Thank you for the follow, as well! 
6661729 I actually read a story about the dazzling by Harms Way. I actually like them a lot...sonata is still a favorite.
6662033 Which one did you read? He has a few about the Dazzlings.
Also, thanks for the fave!
6662181 well right now I'm reading hunted but the other one I read from him was "A New Beginning". That's been happening lately I won't like a character I'll read a good fic and fall in love with them...especially sonatas bear hug...I feel so bad for anon on that one.
6662196 Thanks! I'll have to check those out later tonight.
Awww, Sonata deserves a lot of love, like she got here.
More to come as well, eh? I shall keep an eye out for more.
6709702 It may not be for a while, though. I've got a few other stories/projects on my mind at the moment.
That was great. I love it
Is this guy planning on being the head of a politician's PR department? Or is he practicing for being a used car salesman?
Aww, Sonata is just so cute I could just scoop her up and hug her
This was great
Using that logic is a top notch way to get your self pregnant.
You never took your hairband out, did you?" you ask.
"Oh," she replies, her already lust-filled blush deepening to a darker shade of red, "You're right."
You see her move a hand up to take it off, but you reach out and stop her, causing the teal girl to look at you in confusion. "Don't worry about it. I like your hair this way. It's beautiful."
You know Sonata with her hair down is pretty sexy.
https://derpicdn.net/img/view/2015/1/13/805435__suggestive_artist-colon-bluse_sonata+dusk_equestria+girls_rainbow+rocks_alternate+hairstyle_bedroom+eyes_belly+button_blushing_cleavage_female_.jpeg
Would it be too much to ask for a sequel?