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AmtrakBrony


I'm a guy who loves many things. Trains, planes, writing, Yu-Gi-Oh!, and especially ponies. I became a Brony on 9-1-2013, and my life's never been the same since then. I hope you enjoy my works.

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It's Spike's birthday, and he feels the day couldn't get any better, given the party he has just been thrown. However, Twilight says she has one more present for him, but when the little dragon receives it, he doesn't know how to react.

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This is a brilliant and intuitive idea. I enjoyed this story immensely and think that you executed the idea perfectly. There was one grammar/spelling mistake in this story, which is so much better than some stories where the entire thing is filled with mistakes.
Good job.

Very heartwarming :twilightsmile:

6374386 Thank you so much! Where exactly was the mistake?

"Twilight giggled. “You probably right. Anyway, like I said, I’ve been thinking about this long and hard, and I really feel that this is an appropriate gift to give you, especially after what you said to Scootaloo that one day.”"

6374867 Thanks! All fixed now!

Except that Spike, by virtue of being the adopted brother of Princess Twilight Sparkle and Prince-Consort Shining Armor, is royalty. Not sure if 'Prince' is the appropriate title, but seeing Blueblood has it, I don't see why he can't either

6377285 Technically, you're right, but since no one in the fandom ever really talked about that subject (to my knowledge), I just decided to leave it as is. Who knows? Maybe the writers will actually bring that up in the show sometime in the future.

And and and and..i'm no sure ha really jusified long run on sentences by uses comma's.

story was okay alhough here ARE wingless dragons in mytholigy so whatever.

6464064 I don't pay a whole lot of attention to mythology, and the whole point of this story was based upon the fact that Spike is the ONLY non-winged dragon in Equestria that we know of.

For a second, I thought she turned him into a pony, and if she did, I would go crazy mad. Anyways, great story! Keep up the good work!

6474251 Thank you! I do have another story where Spike is a stallion, however. :raritywink:

Thanks for the fave!

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