An Uplifting Sonata

by AmtrakBrony

First published

Your usual day at CHS takes an interesting turn when you see a certain girl on the outside of the building, one that you know is highly disliked by the entire student body. You, however, feel differently, especially after she tells you something.

It's been a while since the Dazzlings had been defeated at the Battle of the Bands, and you know that everyone at CHS would definitely not like to see those girls around ever again. However, when one of them reappears at the school on a completely random day, you see a different side of her that makes you want the whole school to give her a fresh start.

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The final bell rings as your classmates storm out of the room, eager to enjoy themselves for the rest of the day before having to come back tomorrow. You, on the other hand, take things a bit slower, taking time to reorganize your belongings before putting them into your backpack. As you do, you turn your head to your English teacher, Miss Cheerilee, who has just finished erasing everything she wrote on the chalkboard during the period. "Boy, I don't know what's gotten THEM so riled up," you casually say to her, referring to your now long-gone classmates.

"Oh, I guess they're eager to get home and study for the big test tomorrow," she replies, knowing that her response is incorrect.

"I wish," you say as the two of you share a laugh. You then finish packing up for the day and say goodbye to Miss Cheerilee, your teacher doing the same in response.

After a quick trip to your locker, you make your way to the main entrance of the school. You're relatively new at CHS, having become a new Senior at the school about a month after your 18th birthday. You became a student less than a week after the Battle of the Bands competition, that information being provided by the countless number of mentions you've overheard from random students. You don't know much about it, but you do know that a group of seven girls defeated a trio called the Dazzlings, sending them off the stage in complete shame. You don't know who the Dazzlings are or what they look like; all you know is that everyone pretty much hates them.

You exit the school and take a left at the statue in front, the one that you'd heard leads to another world. However, as a new student, you feel that some people are telling you silly jokes just for fun, and you don't believe that the statue is enchanted.

You walk past the soccer field and are soon at the corner of the fence. There's no afterschool practice today, and no one else is using the field. For no apparent reason, you look to your left and look down the southern wall of the fence. You stop when you see what looks to be someone sitting with their back against the fence. You can see that she's a girl, roughly the age of all the Seniors at CHS, and she looks very sad. Being the kind person that you are, you slowly walk toward her, and you can see that she's barely moving. Her eyes are closed, her head lowered and buried slightly in her knees as she holds her legs to her chest. She has a long ponytail of bright teal with grayish purple, and she's wearing a black jacket, the design of which you've never seen before, but you think it looks pretty on her. She's also wearing a skirt that matches the teal in her hair. You can't recall seeing her before, but there's something about her that makes your brain think a little. You can't help but think that you've seen that face before, and you think it might be from a picture.

Regardless of what your brain is telling you, you decide to see what's troubling her. "Excuse me," you say to her, gently, "What's wrong? Are you okay?"

She ceases her sobbing momentarily and looks up at you, surprised that anyone would come and ask her such a question, given the reputation she's already been given. "N-Not r-really," she stammers.

"Would you like to talk? I'm new here, so you don't have to worry about me judging you or anything like that," you tell her, trying to make her feel a bit more comfortable.

She gives you a warm smile and sighs a bit in relief before replying. "Ummm...sure. I guess so. What's your name?" she asks before you introduce yourself. "N-Nice to meet you." You can tell that she hasn't stopped sobbing for good, as indicated by her slight stutter. "I'm Sonata. Sonata Dusk."

"Nice to meet you, Sonata," you reply, "Now what's troubling you?"

She inhales audibly before saying, "Well, here's the thing. I was part of this singing group that competed here recently, and we almost won, but we were stopped mid-performance by all these girls. After that, the tension between me and the other two girls I sang with grew, and things just went haywire."

"Are you talking about the Battle of the Bands?" you ask her.

"Yeah," she responds, "I'm...well, I was...one of the Dazzlings."

It all becomes very clear to you now. What your brain was telling you a couple of minutes ago all makes sense. Sonata was one of the girls in that picture you were shown just that one time, yet you hadn't remembered what they looked like. Even though you know that she's extremely disliked within the school, you feel it would be wrong to just shun her away right after meeting her. "What else happened?" you ask.

"Well," Sonata continues, "Adagio and Aria, the girls I sang with, just kept fighting and getting mad at each other after we were defeated, and sometimes they would blame me just because they think I'm stupid!" You realize that she's starting to shed a few tears again. "I mean, I know I act differently from how they do, but...hhhh...I hate it when they treat me like total garbage! Hhhh...And then one day, I told them that I was upset at how we made everyone feel, and that I really didn't want to go through with putting everyone under our spell. I wanted to tell them earlier, but...hhhh...I knew that they'd just tell me to get lost, and they were the only friends that I had, so I didn't want that to happen. But now, I felt that I may as well just go ahead and tell them, since we don't have any power anymore. And then, after I told them, Adagio said, 'Sonata, you never belonged in this group in the first place! You always held us back! You're free to leave whenever you want!'. And so I did...hhhh...AAAAAhhhhAAhhAAhhAA!!!!!..."

You sit there in utter shock as Sonata cries her eyes out. You can't believe that those other two girls would treat her that way. You move closer to her and place your left arm around her neck, pulling her toward you. She quickly notices this and immediately throws both of her arms around you, hysterically sobbing into your shoulder. You rub her back slowly, trying to calm her down as she lets everything out. Eventually, when her crying has decreased in volume, you softly say to her, "I'm so sorry. No one should ever be treated like that."

"The truth is...hhhh...I've wanted to break out of this shell for the longest time. I want to treat everyone how they should be treated, but I could never do that because the only two people I respected were Adagio and Aria. It was like I could never evade their grasp. I really want to change, but I didn't know who to turn to, given that I nearly enslaved all of Canterlot High."

You look Sonata in the eyes and give her a warm smile. "I can help you," you tell her.

A look of genuine hope appears on Sonata's face. "F-For realizes?" You giggle at how cute she sounds. "S-Sorry," she continues, "I say that all the time."

"I like it," you reply, "Anyway, you seem really nice, Sonata."

The teal girl blushes at you, "Thanks," she says almost in a whisper.

"I can tell that you've been stuck on a road of turmoil and uncertainties, but now I feel that I can finally turn you onto a crossroads that'll give you a new hope. I'll do whatever it takes to help you get the life you want while you're here."

Crystal clear tears begin to form inside Sonata's gorgeous eyes, and she smiles at you like she's never smiled before. She lunges forward and hugs you tightly, sobbing into you shoulder once again. "Hhhh...Thank you so much! You don't know how long I've wanted this!"

You hug Sonata back, letting her know that you'll be with her as long as she needs you to be, giving her all the help and support she needs. You pat her back, slightly relaxing the embrace as you look her in the eyes. "Well, school's out. Wanna go back to my place?"

"That sounds great," Sonata continues, "Considering that Adagio and Aria probably don't want me back at the apartment."

"Well then, let's go!" You say as the two of you stand up and walk in the direction of your house. Just as you're leaving the school grounds, something comes back to the front of your mind. "Aw, shoot!" you exclaim, "I have to study for the English test tomorrow! Sorry, Sonata, but I may be a bit busy for a while."

"Maybe I could study with you?"

"But...you're not in my class."

"I know, but...you know," she says while casually bumping her side against yours.

"Sure," you reply, "I love study partners."


The air around you is slowly cooling down as the sun sets over the mountainous horizon. It's 7:30, and you and Sonata are having dinner at an outdoor restaurant in Canterlot. You two studied at your house for about three hours before you felt that you were decently prepared for tomorrow's test. You had Sonata quiz you on a few things, and everything worked out perfectly. Now, the two of you are enjoying a simple night out, continuing getting to know each other. "So," you begin, "I'd really like to hear your singing voice, if you're okay with that."

Sonata's eyes widen slightly. "Oh?" she asks, "You know I used my voice for evil, right?"

"Who cares?" you reply, "You said you wanted to move on."

"You're right," she giggles, "And I don't have my red pendant anymore, so I can't put you under my spell," her tone shifts to a mischievous one as she narrows her eyes at you playfully, "Unless you want me to..."

You chuckle in reply. "Nah, just let me hear you sing."

"Okay," she replies in a sing-song voice, "I'm only gonna do a little, though. Don't wanna make people think the Dazzlings have returned and are corrupting the entire town."

You chuckle again. "I know, right?" you reply.

Sonata then takes a deep breath and begins to sing a tune that's familiar to her. "Aaaaahhhh, aahh aahh...aaaaaahhhhh, aaaaahhhh..." she sings in a C Minor-sounding tone.

Your eyes widen upon hearing her voice. Alone, she sounds amazing. You begin to think that the other two Dazzlings were no good for her for a new reason, and that is that they were holding her back from expressing her glorious and uplifting voice. You also think, "Wow, no wonder her name's Sonata!"

"Was that okay?" Sonata asks you.

You jerk your head slightly as her regular speaking voice breaks you of your momentary trance. "Sonata, you have one of the greatest singing voices I've ever heard. You were absolutely astounding!"

She blushes at you again. "Wow, thanks," she replies, "I didn't think you'd like it that much."

"Are you kidding?? You're wonderful! Anyway, since you don't have any place to go, do you wanna, maybe...stay at my place for the time being? I'd sure love the company."

Sonata gives you another wide-eyed grin as she jumps out of her chair and throws herself around you. "YES! THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!!!!!"

"Whoa, whoa, whoa," you respond, "We've still got a while here at this restaurant. Relax."

Sonata pulls back, blushes, and giggles at you at the same time. "Sorry," she replies, "Got a little ahead of myself there," she says as she sits back down.

"It's fine," you tell her, "You're really cute, Sonata, you know that?"

Her blush deepens as she looks away from you slightly. "For realizes?" she asks you again.

"For realizes."


You and Sonata both walk through the front door of your apartment, Sonata's arm lazily hanging around your neck. It's almost 9:30, and the two of you have been out longer than you expected. Needless to say, you're ready for bed. "Hey, Sonata," you say to the girl who you feel could easily be considered your girlfriend at this point, "I'm headed to bed, but I only have one bedroom, unless you'd like the bed. I can just sleep on the couch."

Sonata rubs her nose against your right cheek, making you shiver slightly. "I wouldn't mind sharing your bed, if that's alright with you."

You tense up at the prospect. You only met Sonata earlier today, and now you just might be sharing a bed with her? "Uhhh...don't you think you might be taking things a little too fast?"

Sonata only giggles. "Nah. Besides, you've already made me feel as amazing as I've ever felt."

"You mean you never felt satisfied sucking the well-being out of the student body?"

"I looked like I did, but deep down, I never liked it."

"Then why did you...Oh, that's right," you reply as you remember what she said earlier about not wanting to be alone, even in her previous situation.

"Hey, do you mind if we sit on that couch over there first?" she asks you, pointing to the couch on the far side of the room, next to your bedroom door.

"Sure," you reply as you take her hand and lead her to your couch.

After you both sit down, Sonata looks you in the eyes. "Look...hhhaaa," she sighs, "I'm gonna get straight to the point. I...I love you."

Your heart skips a beat at her statement. "Y-You...love me?" you ask in a slight stutter.

"I know that sounds a bit blunt, but really, how could I not? There I was, a huge pile of sadness, and then you came and rescued me. You realized how horrible I was feeling, and you were willing to help me change. Like I said before, it's something I've wanted for so long." She then takes your left hand in both of hers. "You're the first person who's actually cared about me. Plus, you're a guy. I never thought I'd have the chance to have my own...boyfriend," she says, her last word coming out with a bit of hesitation.

You place your other hand on top of hers. "Sonata, I love you, too. I want you to be my girlfriend."

The teal girl immediately lunges forward, pushing you down onto the couch as she presses her soft lips against yours. They're nothing like you've felt before, and you can't help but relax and return the kiss. She pulls back slightly, looking into your eyes as you both share the same look of love and adoration. Sonata dives back down, your lips meeting in another kiss as you feel her trying to press her tongue into your mouth. You kindly let her in, your tongue immediately becoming enveloped around hers. You stay this way for about half a minute before you break the kiss and bring the two of you to a sitting position. "Wanna take this to the bedroom?" you ask her.

Sonata only gives you a devilish grin before kissing you again, your tongues immediately going at each other. You pick Sonata up by her back and legs and bring her into your bedroom, laying her down on your double bed before laying on top of her and continuing the kiss. After a while, you pull away and fall to your side, still holding her with one arm. She presses herself against you, wrapping one arm around your neck while placing the other on your chest. You sigh at the touch, her soft hand feeling your abs, which you've worked hard to keep nice and toned.

You suddenly let out a yawn before telling the girl next to you, "Hey, I'm pretty tired. I'm gonna go to sleep." You then get out of your bed, standing in front of your armoire and taking your clothes off until your boxers are the only thing covering you. You turn around, only to find Sonata out of bed as well, and she's already taken her jacket, skirt, and boots off, leaving only her bra and panties on, both of which are the same color as the darker strands of her gorgeous hair. You stare at her, wide-eyed, surprised that she's already comfortable doing this.

"I guess you like this, don't you?" Sonata says with a sultry tone.

You shake your head to make yourself focus. "Uhhh...yeah," you chuckle, nervously, "I do." You then start to feel a tightness in your boxers, and you realize that it could peek out of the bottom at any point, so you quickly get back into your bed and pull the covers over you.

Sonata realizes what you're doing and giggles softly at you. She climbs into your bed, cuddling up close to you as you wrap one of your arms around her. She meets you halfway and embraces you back, sighing as she feels the heat of your body. You sigh in complete contentment as your bodies touch, her soft, teal skin pressing against yours and sharing your warmth. The feeling sends a pulse through your body and down to your groin, and you feel the head of your member peek out from the bottom of your boxers.

Only now do you realize that one of Sonata's legs is pressed up against your personal area, and you shudder as you feel your tip gently press against it. You look her in the eyes, nervously, and see that she's already staring at you with a very seductive gaze. "Well?" she asks in her sultry tone, "Don't you wanna do something about that?"

At this point, you know that she knows you want her, and it's clear that she wants you, as well. Smiling devilishly, you bring Sonata in for another kiss as you reach for the waistband of your boxers, only to find that her hand is already doing the job. You immediately reach for another waistband, this one belonging to her panties, which you quickly feel to be slightly damp with arousal. She softly moans into your mouth as she feels you pull her panties off, all while she slides your boxers all the way down your legs until they're off as well. You quickly move your left hand up behind her back and undo the clasps of her bra, and you pull one side forward, sliding the strap down her right shoulder as she takes care of the left side herself.

Now, you're both completely naked. You look down slightly and get your first look at Sonata's plump, C-cup breasts, both of which look like the most enticing things you've seen all night, other than Sonata herself entirely. You gasp as you feel her grind her crotch against yours, her lust visible through both her motions and her half-lidded eyes. She brings her mouth up to your left ear and whispers, "I love you so freaking much, and I want you to do me. Right here, right now."

As she gently takes the tip of your ear into her mouth and begins to nibble on it, you ask her, "W-Wait...aaahhh...I don't have any condoms."

"Don't worry," she continues whispering, "My period ended two days ago." She then brings her head back in front of your face, her face turning from devilishly seductive to completely romantic. "Besides," she continues, this time in a more loving tone as she caresses your cheek, "I wouldn't be doing this if I didn't trust you. You helped me regain some of my confidence, and now I want to make you feel the best you've ever felt."

"Sonata, this night is already amazing. You're an amazing girl, and I feel honored to be with you right now. On the other hand," you say, your tone becoming a bit sultry, "I can't help but want you like I want the most expensive sports car in the world. Needless to say," you continue, your left hand cupping Sonata's right breast, making her squeal in delight, "I want you. So, so bad," you finish in a tone that's as seductive and lust-filled as hers was.

The two of you waste no time in locking your lips in another kiss, all while you roll on top of her. You then both feel a jolt of electricity move through your bodies as your tip finally comes into contact with Sonata's soaking wet outer lips. You waste no time in pushing forward, your member slowly sliding into her depths. You both moan loudly as your bodies connect, pleasure coursing through the two of you like it's never done before.

Soon, you're completely hilted inside the former Dazzling, her walls smooth and slick around your erection, yet tight as they clamp down on you. At that moment, you look up a bit and notice something that Sonata never did. "You never took your hairband out, did you?" you ask.

"Oh," she replies, her already lust-filled blush deepening to a darker shade of red, "You're right."

You see her move a hand up to take it off, but you reach out and stop her, causing the teal girl to look at you in confusion. "Don't worry about it. I like your hair this way. It's beautiful."

Sonata smiles lovingly at you as you move your face closer to hers. "I love you," she says, softly.

"I love you, too," you reply before kissing her again. As your tongues play with one another, you begin to slowly thrust in and out of her, causing your kiss to be flooded with moans and groans of blissful pleasure, only adding fuel to the fires of passion burning deep within both of you. Her inner walls are perfect. Not too tight, not too loose, just right. Plus, they're positively drenched at this point, making your thrusts as easy as they'll ever be. Each time you thrust your enormous cock into Sonata's pussy, you hear your lower halves slapping together with a wet smack, and that combined with Sonata's heavenly moans drives you absolutely crazy. In fact, her moans of pleasure are nothing like you've ever heard before, not even in the movies. It's as if you're listening to a unique, special sonata being performed exclusively for you, and you have a front row seat. No, scratch that...You're right on stage. It's all just music to your ears.

Feeling the pressure build, you take your right hand and begin groping Sonata's left breast, squeezing it as hard as you can before extending your fingers and tweaking her erect nipple, tugging and pulling at the little nub of flesh, but not too much so that it hurts. You know you're doing it the right way when you hear even more of the teal girl's moans leave her mouth. You begin thrusting faster and faster, and you suddenly feel Sonata's walls clamping down on your manhood as she screams, "Aaaahhhh...I-I'm close!...AAAAAHHHHH!!!!!"

"M-Me, too...Aaahhh!!!" you reply as you hilt yourself completely inside the former Dazzling. In an instant, you feel a warm rush of fluids run over your cock and drench your scrotum, and at the same time, you feel the rush of release as your warm, white semen shoots out of your tip and deep into your lover's love tunnel. You both scream in pleasure as you ride out your orgasms, bucking your hips wildly into each other.

After almost a minute, you finally fall to Sonata's side, embracing her tightly as you slip out of her. Sonata herself is still panting heavily, her body still relaxing in the amazing afterglow as she looks up at you. You then hear a whisper. "Thank you," is all she can muster before laying her head on your right shoulder. You soon hear steady breathing coming from your girlfriend, letting you know that's she's asleep. You kiss her gently on the forehead as you begin to doze off yourself.

THE END