Writing GLORIOUS trash. Nothing more or less.
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This looks good, time to read.
Holy... Wow... My friend, this is an extremely entertaining and appealing writing style. It's almost poetic. It is poetic really, and I can only imagine that you were either gifted with this being your natural writing style, similar to that of thought-provoking novels and plays, or that you are a far more experienced writer than many, who simply obtained this ability through practice.
I say to you, well done. In the highest of esteems and regards, well done.
That was... incredibly good. I hope eventually you make. Proper story with these two. A lot of potential for it and it would be interesting to see how they met, and what their future holds. The sex was more passion and want I feel than just mindlessness. Upvote and fave from me for sure.
That was a lovely short story. The words flow a lot better than my typical story.
It's rather believable that Princess Celestia could be lonely for being immortal. Tony's eventual death from old age would sadden her, but she would love him in her memories. She would probably accidentally call out his name when has sex with her newest human lover.
Hopefully you can expand on this story someday with sequel/prequel or something.
I think it should be hooves or front legs. She's in pony form, right?
And you did it good, story is heart warning. Wish to see more like that.
Also, considering by your avatar, I expected that she will feed him with cookies.
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Thanks for reading.
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Oh wow, thanks. I'm flattered by your praise. This is actually my natural writing style though I don't usually use it for clopfics. I imagine it works well because this is a character piece but in another type of story, not so much.
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Thanks for reading and I'll definitely give it some thought to write a prequel/sequel or even just continue the story.
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Got the edit. And, thanks for reading. I might put a sequel or at least, open the story up for later chapters but you know *shrugs* might fall back into a non-writing slump. College really saps your energy. I have a few more Celestia-orientated fics coming up (possibly today) so will that make you feel better?
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Gee, thanks. Also, you don't think Celestia wouldn't bring a cake and- Wait, hold that thought. I just got an idea for a fic. Celestia is crushing hard on a visiting human and makes him treats that are strangely erotic and delicious. And then he catches her in the act of putting her 'love' in the batter. Remind me to credit you once I get it out of the presses.
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You're welcome. If you need help with editing just ask. I don't turn down help for most stories.
Take your time, don't rush out the stories. You aren't on any deadline here. Write happily, not like it's a job.
That sounds awesome! Looking forward to seeing them.
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Cake that looks like Tia's butt and taste like Celestia.
Top KEK.
Also, do you think that have a sex with slipping ponies/humans is Luna's fetish?
How lovely, how tragic.
Who drew that cover art
HUMAN!!!!!
This is an excellent peice, a rare gem in clop fiction. You've conveyed in one chapter what would normally take several thousand words of exposition. The best fiction connects with the reader on some level and...damn you, you've certainly achieved that!
As someone who is a reader, not a writer, consider me engaged.
amazing man
6729676 I got that impression as well.
wow this is something
Hey there. i've just found your piece. And it is amazing. I really like the potential of Celestia as a character. And i do love sad/happy stories like this.
This is really a change of pace from other more intense sex stories on the site.
I do need more of that kind. If it is your base style. Keep it, it is good.
If I could do a métaphore. To me that story was like, when outside, the weather is sunny but there is some rainy cloud. Just beautiful.