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The Story Man
I'm posting some of my stories from the /fb/ general on /mlp/ and I'll be writing some other stuff from time to time.
The Story Man
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Huh, I did not expect Trixie to wear I-No's clothes.
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I actually didn't realize the outfit was from anything, just thought it was a typical rock-star type outfit.
6079994 It just goes to show that Daisuke Ishiwatari knows how to design a character.
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eleven thousand words?
For what it's worth, I don't think an apology is necessary when you deliver such an extensive story. I'll be reading this tomorrow when i'm awake enough to comprehend it.
Good job Stork
Absolutely amazing work, Mr. Man! You keep doing what you're doing and you'll never disappoint!
That build up was a touch slow but quite worth it in the end.
I liked it.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Lyra. Heh. Nice work.
Say, you got a source for that cover pic?
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Glad to hear, but not glad to hear it twice.
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Eh.
You can have it a third time then: I liked it.
~Skeeter The Lurker
That was quite a good fic.It had a good 1st part to show the protagonist's kind of relationship with Trixie. And I must say that Trixie surprised me when she confessed her feelings towards him, with a pleasent resolution
you can say Trixie was hiding aces and tricks when it came to "bedroom matters" 
It was something that broke the mood in a couple of occasions.
If I should pick something wrong it would be how passive and indifferent the roadie is with...well with everything that happens to him
But apart from that, pretty nice fic, Mr. Story Man.
Soooooooo...
No possibility of a continuation to this? If not, would you be willing to let me do so myself? This is a surprisingly good story.
Otherwise, excellent job. You've earned a favorite and a follow.
That was actually a really good portrayal of Trixie, and I find myself not caring that she doesn't become a tad more modest. Two thumbs way up
So it passed? Nice! I'll do better to keep up next time, damn work got in the way of me getting back to you. You can depend on me next time
Now onto Spike of Magic!
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Eh, you'd have to send me a PM so we could discuss it. I don't really mind if you wanted to write a sequel or anything, but I wouldn't want you souring the story or anything. No offense intended of course, I'm just a little paranoid.
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I myself prefer an arrogant Trixie, makes her look stronger and such, y'know?
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Sorry about that, but I felt like if I needed to post it as soon as possible. After all, I know I've kept a lot of good people waiting far longer than they really should have been.
6082836 No worries, it's my fault for not using my 10 seconds of free time for it haha. In all seriousness though, I'll try to be much better help next time, if you're willing to let me help again that is
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Yeah, sorry about that again. And of course you can help, can't have too many people previewing honestly.
6082871 Awesome, send anything over that you may need help with like last time then
I'll squeeze you in. And remember that you'll never bother me. I'm hard to shake.
Trixie dressed as Ino...
Total.
F**king.
Click-bait.
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Um, is that a good thing or a bad one? Cause I didn't know who that person was till someone else in the comments told me about them.
6083121 In all honesty, it depends on who's reading the story. And I like Ino. Think of that equation as you will.
Oh wow, Trixie is dressed as a rock star what is everyone upset about?
6083023 Who? Never heard of her. I don't think she is all that popular.
Exellent work! I love how in character you kept Trixie, if she ever caught sight of a male she approved of i can fully see her doing Everything she did in this fic, heh, instead of giving compliments to the guy she liked she would describe how Amazing she is and that he should be happy that she is considering him worthy to be her hubby, gotta love that mentality of hers.
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your avatars + cover art are... just... dayum
and boy do I want to be that guy, he so lucky
dat ending
I really like how you portray Trixie's personality. Congrats on having this featured.
What up with Lyra though? Are we gonna get a sequel or something explaing it at some point?
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You don't need to put your name at the end of a comment. People know how to look slight left.
6084738 come any closer, and I will TAZE you.
6085683 "running in opposite DIRECTION"
6085723 That's what I thought
Play a little number Trixie with you'r firework and flamethrower guitar.
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Good story by the way.
Just finished this, and I have to say that this is really good.
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After yesterday's episode, I don't know anymore. My headcanon was always that Lyra was a goofy spy type (even wrote story about awhile ago), but now ironically her friend was the spy.
Still, I might write Lyra again in the future. Not as a sequel to this though.
Man, Trix must be part Vulcan 'cause that seduction technique was pure logic. Dayum, girl.
Nice. Assertive trixie is such a turn on. 10 out of 10 would bang her in a heartbeat.
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6104307 agreed.
I like how she's very accurate to show cannon in personality but you still have her being rather affectionate and loving.
I think you should edit that part to 'starts lightly grasping' ^^
Still, love that fic!
I wanna say...Spitfire? Yeah, that's who I'm going with for the identity of the mysterious stranger. Well, either that, or it was the female version of Revan. (Heh. Star Wars Knights of the Old Republic reference/joke is funny).
And they say I'm paranoid!
At least this story has me being as smart as I actually am with the whole "She's just putting on a show, and her stage ppersonality isn't her real personality." Mind you, she's called down a bolt of lightning as though she was
ing Thor in the cartoon before, whereas Twilight Sparkle, a pony who is now an Alicorn, which by the very definition of the type of pony would make such a feat easier, has NOT. Trixie, therefore, is far superior to Twilight, especially since if she hadn't called down that bolt of lightning, thus distracting the Ursa Minor, the two idiots who had led it into the town would have died.
Achievement unlocked: Putting others in their place