6769384 I will try it.

Yes, because Tia's foal(s) obviously need one or more half-siblings/cousins.

Well done, Shakespearicles! You've made another great story that I'm SO putting into one of my bookshelves! *hands out a cookie* Have a cookie! And have a Happy New Year!

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That's was hot and fun.
And a sequel in the works?! Hell yes!

BRING ON, LUNA!

Needing no further prompting, he got down on his knees in reverence to praise the sun. He placed his hands upon her solar cutie marks, pulling her hips back to him. He aroma was not at all what he was expecting.

I enjoyed the Dark Souls reference. And, I do believe that you meant to put her, not he.

You could, in my personal opinion from reading and self revising, take "He placed his hands upon her solar cutie marks, pulling her hips back to him" and turn it into "Placing his (optional adjective, such as nimble, rough or coarse) hands upon her solar cutie marks (optional detail), he pulled her (optional adjective again) hips back to/into him/his (optional add on).

Don't forget, you can just ignore everything I say about it, as it is good either way.

Nicely done. I'm guessing that the ending means a sequel with Luna?

I must say, that was a most excitable read, and, though it may have not been your intention, I got a somewhat comedic feel from it, with the well placed verses from what seemed to be Luna, or his writing, with the semi-obvious reference to How the Grinch Stole Christmas, as an example.
I do hope you produce one for the New Years season, as you have me interested in more.

with all the subtlety of an atomic detonation.

The best kind of subtlety

I'll be waiting for the New Year's Eve story...

6770238 Okay! That just made my night and my day!

Um... I got one question for you... Sequel?

6770659 6770793 Fixed those. Thank you.

6770757

Thus far, this is only the first of your works my eyes have laid upon, but, I must say, you know how to leave a worthy impression upon my mind and body.

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6771163 Your avatar is supremely qualified for that comment.
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I have to say, this was a fun read and I enjoyed it, but I felt the "climax" feel flat. At least for me. It really kills it for me when authors spend all this time with great sex and build up, but when it cums time for the big climax, they only spend one short paragraph or a few sentences on it. ln my opinion, I think you could have spent a little more time on that part. Maybe have Celestia struggle a bit more as he continued to hold her and fill her up.

Half the point of sex is getting to that climax, and I know that in real life that part is short lived, but if your trying to write stuff that's intentionally erotic and stimulating, then I suggest drawing out the orgasm a little more.

Anyways, everything else was fun and I enjoyed it, even though fisting isn't my thing. Have my like.

Well, that was a thing. Essentially a self-insert(?) clopfic...

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
11:52_12/27/2015

6771163 "Congrats, your New Years gift is a pair of foals!"

6771867 Literally a self-insert.
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6771864 BONUS CONTENT ADDED!

6771873 That would be a very short pregnancy.

6771921
That would be a pregnancy test.

Really good story, best pressent ever! But I feel a bit sorry for a main character. Even if Celestia's appearance is real, anyway it seem as a one night stand. Have a sex only twice a year (with Tia at Christmas and, probably, with Luna at New Year) a bit cruel fate. Hope you will change it in sequel. (if you plan to do it at New Year)

Suckling my teats when they become full with milk?

Please do it.

6770238
Who said cookies?
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6771909
Oh shit! Much better! Have a fav! Can't wait for more!

I wanted her knocked up. I am disappointed.

6771875 I doubt your arms are that big... Maybe a stylized over-the-top version of you, but not you as you actually are.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
15:34_12/27/2015

6772307 fite me

Chekhov's Clapper.

First chapter: beautiful blank verse poetry
Second chapter: clop with implication of sequel

*vibrating intensifies*

6772411 I'd probably kick your ass. Nothing against you, but unless you are trained to fight against people who know Krav Maga and other high-damage martial arts, you probably wouldn't last very long. My fighting style is actually a bit of a fusion of Krav Maga and Kempo, with some other MMA stuff mixed in.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
19:1_12/27/2015

6772837 Now you've actually got me curious. No, my arms are not actually as big as pictured. But I am a military brony. It shows through sometimes in my writing when I talk about Shining Armor and the Royal Guards at the barracks. I don't spar as often as I'd like. And I haven't had any (opportunity to have had) hand-to-hand combat with insurgents. I generally didn't get that close.
But it's adorable listening to you try to prove how tough you are to me on the internet.
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6773042 Well, if you are a military person, you probably could kick my ass then.
While I can fight, I can't stand up against military trained people.
Military trained people are scary.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
23:23_12/27/2015

6773582
Sounds awfully familiar,

Man, I never get sick of these Celestia x Human stories. Her royal fat booty is mighty fine and needs a loving human's touch.

That's probably one of the hottest climax scenes I ever read in a clopfic.

The slapping noises they were making were causing the Clapper to turn the lights on and off like a strobe light at some kind of crazy inter-species sex-rave.

That's an excellent use of something mentioned many words back.

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6773596

Ah see there was a reason I don't remember that then. I purged that whole goddamn movie from my brain years ago.

Still a good line though.

Come on, as if you would need magic to please a mare properly...

6776048

She's a really big pone.

She always could have pity sex with a human. XD

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Fun fact: A mares sensitive spots are just a few cm behind the entry.

Don't ask me how i know this.

Dat ending, dou!
Loved the story

"He shoved his dick so deep that whosoever should be able to pull him out would be crowned the new king of England."
BEST LINE EVER!!! ROFL!!!

6776620 I forgot, so I looked it up, and I saw Catwoman and Batman. Maybe Ivy and Robin said the same line, too? I dunno.

6776324 How do you know this?

how is my username not taken what the fuck is wrong with you people?

6773592 I remember you! You're the keyboard warrior! The guy who tries to prove that he's vastly superior to literally every single person on this site! You once had a fight with a guy (though the other guy was just doing it for shits and giggles) and you called him a prude for asking for more detail in a clopfic (which is the complete opposite of prudishness), and you attacked him when he "insulted your intellect" or some shit, and then went on to say that you "design all manner of devices" in an attempt to make him realise that you clearly outmatch him. Because you didn't look like enough of a cockhead already. Now, you're saying that you know several different fighting styles. Hmmm.

Again, sounds like the fat little twelve-year old with a dictionary, but now we also know that you've probably never touched a dumbbell or gone for a jog in your life, and is massively overcompensating for it in the form of attacking people you've never seen. You've reached level 2 on the cockhead meter.

Dude, just stop. You're trying to make youself like Arnold Schwarzenegger, Bruce Lee, Stephen Hawking, Leonardo Davinci and Muhammed Ali's insanely strong and smart love child who's also a master fighter, and its not working.

I laughed my ass off at how fast you retracted all of your previous statements as soon as 6773042 said he was in the military. Come on, he's just one guy. Surely he couldn't stand up to a master fighter such as yourself, what with your "fusion of Krav Maga and Kempo, with some other MMA stuff mixed in."

AAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

*wheeze*

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

Sorry, my asthma is triggered by cunts.

Great fic, Shakes. Sequel, maybe?

6776324 I think we've all learned more than we ever wanted to about horse anatomy from this fandom.

6777964 True.
6776860 Thank you.
6777659 Good grab. Although in my, (and most our our), defense. We were registered on here long before that show ever got popular.
6777848 Maybe.

6777964
Oh yesss....i didnt knew before that mares are that warm down there.
Or their vaginal muscle control..

6778161 still the manga is great and you would think at least some people would take it just to take it.

6777848 "with some other MMA stuff mixed in." So you have Krav Maga, Kempo and Mixed Martial Arts forms mixed into one? I HIGHLY doubt that.
Silly boy. (I know you didn't say that, I just wanted to point that out to the guy who seems to have beef with him)