• Member Since 22nd Nov, 2011
  • offline last seen Feb 10th, 2019

Hivemind


Captain Cutie on duty!

Comments ( 20 )

Flowery language, and a good setup and story despite the much-maligned 2nd person perspective. I admit, I skimmed, but will read in full later tonight. This seems ridiculously hot and well-written. I look forward to my full reading.

Hmm this looks interesting. A little too many commas, but I like the long description. Its setup well. I'll be sure to read this tonight, and have a review for it at some point or other. :heart:

Absolutely loved it plz make more

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I'll admit that, despite my past experience, the whole story is a bit too flowery on the language and description, but I expected myself to do that. Here's hoping I'll be able to tone it down over the coming weeks.

Color me impressed. This is genuinely one of the first Fleur stories I've read that I've actually enjoyed. Not just because you wrote the erotica very well - this qualifies as erotica by the way, not just ample smut - but you took the time to develop it, to have us be invested in this story. Job well done! :twilightsmile:

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It has a time and place, and with this, from what I've read thus far, it works. This feels so classy.

Great story and a tastefully written clop scene. Great work.

Really enjoyed this chapter and it's damn nice to see a story rather than just senseless clop; it always seems to make clop far more enjoyable.

Were you to turn this into it's own story {I've not even read the clop yet}, I would read the shite out of it. Too little Fleur shipping on this site.

Glad I read the romance section first.

That was impressive.

~Skeeter The Lurker

...And it was followed with some downright amazing sex.

Incredible work, dude. Incredible.

~Skeeter The Lurker

I liked it, keep up the good work my friend.
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6678350 the fact that you put my favorite TV show person makes me want to hurt you

15 Weeks later I have a review: In short this is one of the most well written clopfics I have read in a long time. You have skill Hive. Looking forward to more of your work. :heart:

I love romance like this two childhood friends finally coming together so sweet

and that wasn't a joke for the internet to enjoy :trollestia:

this was a great story, I loved it

SEQUEL! PLEASE! (Or maybe at least an epilogue...) :pinkiehappy:

This story is literally god-tier sexy. Prose as smooth as the finest silk; deliciously teasing language, and the loveliest back story.

So why the fuck doesn't it have more views and upvotes?

Also, this story just became my 600th favourite.

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