• Member Since 22nd Nov, 2011
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Captain Cutie on duty!



(2nd Person x Fluttershy) Moving to Ponyville from your hometown, you meet a shy, animal-loving pegasus by the name of Fluttershy. After discovering that the both of you like to care for animals, you and Fluttershy quickly become friends. But lately, the two of you seemed to gotten a bit closer together than usual. You have feelings for her, but you just don't know how to express them to her. Fortunately for you, you finally get the chance, but it's gonna be a painful one.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 242 )

I liked how the story was in 2nd person, it's kind of epic xD

And Fluttershy is best pony, so this fic is awesome! :yay:

Love it so far!!! 5 stars and TRACKING :scootangel::eeyup:

over 12 trackers in under an hour? :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

You wouldn't happen to have had any inspiration from Flutterheart, would you?


I've read some of that story, but no. This fic was just something that I wrote to calm my nerves after I finished writing the next chapter in another story I have.

Never expected this story to skyrocket with tracks! :pinkiehappy:

Darn it. You know how to draw me in. Can't wait to see how this plays out! :pinkiehappy:

...Okay, the Grammar Nazi in me is screaming at the use of "alot." It needs to be "a lot." That's all I found to rant on though. Keep it up!

248977 Ah. Plotline seems similar. I wouldn't care, I was just wondering, what with "Flutter" and "Heart" both in the title.


I still can't believe that the story title has not been used for any other fic. It's the perfect title for a Fluttershy shipfic and it was just dangling in the air like a plump and ripe cherry.

249086 lol There's one other fic I found with that name that isn't quite as good.

Well... About that title... It's not exactly the same, but mine's just a little similar.

Besides that, good story!

- Midnight Specter

Once I saw it was a Fluttershy, 2nd person, I was like, "OK, I'm totally reading this."

Good story so far.

And Fluttershy is best pony!:yay:

Hmm...interesting. Quite a few ways you could take this one from here.

But be wary of what you do, son...:flutterrage:

love it so far. One question. How often do you think you will be updating this story. I love where it is going from here. Looking forward to reading more :scootangel:


Stay online for five more minutes and you will see...

252881 Hey....hey you....I love you

Sorry everypony, but I just couldn't resist...:pinkiecrazy:

Now this is what I call a relaxing night....playin' Beelzeboss by Tenacious D on my guitar and reading some mlp shipfic :rainbowlaugh:

Ahh what a nice way to end my night. Keep up the good work sir! madam! Being whose gender I am not certain about, but I love the story regardless!

Very very well written!

confound these cliffhangers for they drive me to drink :twilightangry2: more tomorrow? :fluttershysad:

confound your awesome story drives me to want more:pinkiehappy:


A new update every day or until Jonsey stops being such a faggot :rainbowlaugh:

256321 I hate to be that guy, but.......who the fuck is Jonsey :rainbowhuh: , and not the dead cat :rainbowlaugh:


Finally, someone asks :coolphoto:

Jonsey is my editor/pre-reader/troll friend. Whenever I'm not around to work on my fics, he takes up some of the work for me, but he likes to troll me, alot.

So one day, I thought, "If Jonsey likes to troll me? Then why not I try to troll him?" Sadly, it didn't work. So now I just make fun of him every now and then, but it's all in good fun! :scootangel:


WHAT THE BUCK MAN?! REALLY?! :twilightangry2:

Does anyone else think that 'Jonsey' sounds like the name of a fashion line that Rarity would put out for Canterlot hipsters? :raritystarry:

257141 now that u mention it...yes, yes it does :scootangel::rainbowlaugh:

256429 Well when you put it that way, I hope Jonsey's faggotry continues :rainbowlaugh: looking forward to today's chapter :scootangel:

INB4 MIDNIGHT! Sorry for the delay :fluttershyouch:

GAAAAAAAHHHHHHH........I think my hear just exploded.....twice :fluttershbad: Oh, and don't worry about the delay. Might I just suggest that you make longer chapters. Other than that, I love the story. :scootangel:


This will probably be the longest of all the chapters. I've spent all day writing this one chapter, start to finish. Not even stopping for a piss break :rainbowlaugh:

All good :pinkiehappy: loving it so far.

d'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw :fluttercry::ajsmug:

12:22 pm see's update

AWWWWW yeaaaaaaaaaah

so much awwww and dawwwww its overload for me bronys i think i just died inside a little then reborn TEN FOLD

Very good. This story is tracked!:pinkiesmile:

Aww...I'm liking how this is going! The rate you put these chapters out is crazy! Keep it up!

I do believe that my heart might be melting.

Well; stop working so hard. An author like you deserves a good piss.

I feel all warm and fuzzy inside

I'm suing you for causing my heart to melt and now causing my transplant to explode from cuteness. I hope you've been saving up.

Twilight why u think iz Bad romance why dont u ASK FOR ONCE :twilightangry2:

I think we have all learned something important today...

Never take my advice.

Don't want a bad romance...
caught in a bad romance... :trollestia:


And there it is. The Lady GaGa joke.

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