• Published 23rd Feb 2012
  • 11,743 Views, 242 Comments

Setting Her Heart Aflutter - Hivemind



(2nd Person x Fluttershy) You like animals. She likes animals.

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Who's up for a sequel?

For those who are just now reading this. The sequel is up. You can find it on my profile page. Just like this story, it is multi-part. Expect some long waits between each chapter as life tends to get in the way of my writing time.

-Hivemind

Comments ( 42 )

AW HELL YES

324286

Honestly, I did not feel like that this story was rushed at all.

I DID have a get-together party scene set up for chapter, but scrapped the idea when I noticed that it was terribly, terribly written :pinkiesick:

what Seven Venom said

324537

I mean like, It was too short as in it got to marriage to quickly. :fluttershbad:

325332

Me and Jonsey were pretty clueless as to how we should end it, and seeing as to how dragging the story on would make things really dull, we decided to end it off at the precise moment.

Besides, we're making a sequel to cover it all :scootangel:

325359

:pinkiehappy:

Very happy to hear that and as always keep up the great work! :moustache:

325775

A Happy-Sad brony? What's that? :rainbowhuh:

I hope that isn't bad :fluttercry:

Please please please!

325789 not at all,
I'm happy that fluttershy had a happy ending:pinkiehappy: and i'm sad cause the story was so good but it had to end.:fluttershysad:
Also I can't what for the sequel:derpytongue2:

323846 Mybad, I was just expressing my enjoyment of the story :twilightsheepish:

412806

You know that there is a sequel right?

412830

I do. But I still want more.

I don’t want to set the world a flutter
I just want to start
A flutter in your heart

In my heart I have but one desire
And that one is you
No other will do

I’ve lost all ambition for worldly acclaim
I just want to be the one you love
And with your admission that you feel the same
I’ll have reached the goal I’m dreaming of

Believe me
I don’t want to set the world a flutter
I just want to start
A flutter in your heart

[Spoken Word]
I don't wanna set the world a flutter, honey
I love ya too much
I just wanna start a great big flutter
Down in your heart
You see, way down inside of me
Darlin' I have only one desire
And that one desire is you
And I know nobody else ain't gonna do

[Sung]
I’ve lost all ambition for worldly acclaim
I just want to be the one you love
And with your admission that you feel the same
I’ll have reached the goal I’m dreaming of

Believe me
I don’t want to set the world a flutter
I just want to start
A flutter in your heart

419066

*manly sniffle* :rainbowdetermined2::pinkiesad2:

419084
Hurry up and write something about a Mareizona Ranger and her duel with an outlaw in Appleoosa and I can ponify Big Iron, too. :pinkiehappy:

419128

Wait wut :rainbowhuh:

I was just commenting on the poem :rainbowlaugh:

419154
You haven't played Fallout 3, have you? Its a song by the Ink Spots... I just changed some words.

419158

I've played and beat FO3 several times. Never heard of Ink Spots (I don't listen to fan-music)

419228
Did you never listen to GNR or something? "I Don't Want to Set the World On Fire" is a 1941 song by The Ink Spots that is even played in the intro to FO3...

419247

Ooooooooh. THAT song. Sure I've heard of it, but I never knew who created the song. :twilightsheepish:

419397
Glad you came around. I was starting to feel like Twi trying to talk to RD about anything not related to the Wonderbolts or Daring Doo...

724553

Finally someone recognizes what I was originally leading up to! :pinkiehappy:

862428

If you haven't already taken note of how long ago this story was made, then the answer to the pointed mistakes have been both pointed out by others and noticed by me at certain points. Besides, this is was my first 2nd person fic. I have several more in the making.

the great and powerfull:trixieshiftleft: :trixieshiftright:csabijo is :pinkiehappy:

I NEVER KNEW THIS STORY EXISTED UNTIL NOW.

To all future readers of this story: I have not found much time to edit out any mistakes. I didn't take this story too seriously when I made it all those months ago, and has been overshadowed by my more successful works. :pinkiesmile:

Yay!!!!! So glad you wanna continue the story! :yay: :yay: :yay:

1275584
So...the mistakes I found will just...Remain? They're the only blemishes on the face of an otherwise perfect Romance fic, and they'll just...Remain?!:pinkiegasp:

419066
tinyurl.com/bssvz9w

2130076

Mate, I wrote this story a long, LONG time ago (in my mind anyway). I've come a long way in writing and became much better in writing more fluently and with better descriptive verses. I'm still blown away by how people are still visiting, reading, liking, and favoriting this thing. It started out as a just a fun little side-story that I would have been writing off and on about, but to see it get this far with no added effort from my side whatsoever is just...amazing. :raritystarry:

Also, there's a sequel out for it. You can check my page for it if you want.

2130085 That's not helpful. :facehoof:

Truly fahking wonderful. My life is saved from knowing there's a sequel; I'm reading it now.

We want a sequal

This is by far the best fan fiction I have read in ages, it is very well written. It makes me feel I am actually living out the story itself. Perhaps I will take up the pen ( or in this case keyboard ) and write my own stories. Any tips you have would be helpful, if you have any send them to my email which is ssnowdealdylan@yahoo.com.

thank you for the lovely story


stay classy :moustache:

Ya sequel thank you you are an awesome pony dude brohoof all the way dude aaaa:pinkiehappy:

Sequel!!!! Yay!:yay:

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