Like 2nd-person sensual and cute fun? Well, there's about five or six other authors you should probably go to first. If you've read all their works, however, then I'm your go-to guy. Also, watersports
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(This fic is rated [Romantic] by the rating scale of the Sensual Fiction General on Ponychan)
All you want is to make Fluttershy feel as happy as you do just from her being there, but a discovery at her house sheds a new light on the pegasus that you would never guess in your wildest dreams....
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(Author's Note - You now have a thing for cheesy romantic novels/short stories...oh, and Fluttershy too, I suppose)
XD so true, sooo true. Bravo ^^
:D first 2 rate it, yay~ i gave it a 5, a much deserved 5, though i did not like the 2nd person style in the beginning by the end i did not care. ^^ And im am happy to have read this, good job sir, good job.
D'awwww! It's a sweet story.
The second person style put me off a touch -- especially since I knew so little of who the 'you' was supposed to be, yet it wasn't quite me.
There's also some history between the 'you' and Fluttershy, but we only get a few glimpses of it. (I don't believe that Fluttershy would react so strongly well to someone she didn't trust already.) So the story felt very incomplete.
But thank you for writing it!
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Yeah, it's a bit straightforward and shallow, I'll admit. This was my first crack at a sensual fic (and a fanfic period), and I didn't want to make something overly ambitious. In a way, this fic was a way for me to dip my....hooves in the water before I tried my hand at more elaborate stories.
I do elaborate more on who the "you" character in my other fics are, but I still try to keep it somewhat vague. Part of the appeal of the 2nd-person perspective is that you are the character and you are the one performing the actions, and it's hard to keep that mindset going if the "you" character has too much detail about him/her.
But thanks for the constructive criticism, and I'm glad to hear you enjoyed my fic.
Unrelated: This site really needs more happy Fluttershy emoticons than this one.
Im a 21 year old Male. I am liking this more then gender should allow me to. Why is it so good!?
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I know what you mean. Part of me feels like I shouldn't like this because I'm male but It's too awesome not to read.
I don't even know what I just read. But it was good. I'm surprised you managed to make my love for fluttershy even bigger but well done on that score.
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I'm 19 male and have been reading fics like this for about a month now man. I know exactly where you're coming from. Trust me on this though, once you find more of these you won't wanna stop.
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Odd. I'm 17 year old male, and I'm having the same thoughts as you two.
Lets face it. Anything with Fluttershy is good enough for us.
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I agree I'm 14 years old male gust read a shipping 2 month ago and can't stop reading them.
Too late, I already love cheesy romance fanfics and Fluttershy.
The Author's Note is a lie! Trevor does NOT now have a thing for Flutters and Romantic novels! Trevor already loved them for a VERY long time! (Well, okay, Flutters for only the 6 months I've known her, but romance books for at least 7 years... ^^; )
Can't wait to read the rest of your stories! ALLONS-Y!
~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
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So much for me trying to be logical all the time. Fluttershy is just too darn cute. 
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I'm a 22 year old male and I am enjoying these more then reason dictates.
''you can make out the pink mane and wide green eyes of Fluttershy''
<---- she most certainly has no green eyes.
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No she does not. Thanks for pointing that out.
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lol i pretty much agree... i usually don't like romance but mlp fics are just so cute...
also that was one hell of a cliffhanger lol
its funny, im failing English class yet when i get home i read more fan fictions then i would read books in school. lol
this was to cute and sweet i loved it! cant wait to start on the seqel!
goddamn it, why are romances so awesome!
great job man, you deserve a watch
Forget every 2nd person Fluttershy fic I've read yet! (Even Crowley, sorry to say.) This was awesome! Fluttershy sounded in-character the interaction was just how I would do it! Hell the character ACTUALLY SOUNDED LIKE ME! Lastly, Fluttershy is an author? Be still my heart!
Why can I just imagine derpy going up to the main character and saying "You're welcome! What? I saw the way you were looking at her."
I have to say, that was really good. Though I prefer HiE Romance stories, I was able to relate to this just as much. Good Show and have a moustache.
One of the first MLP fics I ever read, and just as adorable as I remember it!
i can see how people like this, but, well its a great story, but the ending couldve been better, it carried on too long
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I've had a thing for Fluttershy ever since MLP(citation:my story, my profile pic), and romance novels for a while(citation:my story, my memory). Great stories. This and the sequel are both great.