Like 2nd-person sensual and cute fun? Well, there's about five or six other authors you should probably go to first. If you've read all their works, however, then I'm your go-to guy. Also, watersports
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Yep, that about sums me up.
This is fucking great.
Yay..first to watch u ^^ i loved ur last one now that i see this im so excited SHHHUUUSHHHH time to read *goes to the top* yes, i have just made a comment before reading
^^ that was a nice short film in my head Great job :D
SANDVICH!
Sorry, couldn't help myself. This was good!
Props to you my friend, nice use of second-person.
Short, sweet, and now I'm hungry.
amazing 2nd person story & now i'm hungry for a sandwitch
The use of second-person (or is that second-pony?) is well-executed; it gives another dimension to the story, and the way it's written makes the reader feel as though they are there, intensifying the emotions.
Nicely done.
Reading this in second-person gives me a forever alone feeling.
The Gentlecolt Sneaker ? ಠ_ಠ
I approve
The Author has now made Trevor want to try a Flower Sandwich, even though one knows that one won't like it... One hates and loves you at the same time...
I always had a fantasy to where I had a crush on the beautiful Twilight Sparkle, but I could never say it. Then after sometime, I got enough nerve to ask her out and she would say yes.
.................... And you made it come true.
I LOVE YOU MAN!!!!!!
A ROMANCE STORY WITH THE ADORKABLE TWILIGHT, TO WHERE I GOT TO FOLLOW MY FANTASY!!!!!
I can't thank you enough.
That last sentence in every story about me having a thing for each pony...oh god it has me laughing.
and at the same time i find it to be true.
your storys are awesome keep up the good work!
Cute.
fetish for twilight? so totally.
You: "Note: You now have a thing for flower sandwiches, thunderstorms, awkward first impressions, growling stomachs, and what else...oh right, Twilight Sparkle. Yep, that about covers it."
Me: Eeeyyup
-Glassed
This story seriously shot Twilight from mid rated out of the Mane 6 to top on my list of favorites (not that there is a huge gap between them all).
I haven't read it yet, but seeing how it's a Timebomb0 fic, dis gun b Gud
excellent story, enjoyed every word of it!
*takes off glasses*
Sweet
*reads Description* THIS DESCRIBES MY OC PERFECTLY!! HOW DID I NOT FIND THIS EARLIER?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? YOU HAVE EARNED YOURSELF A FOLLOW, AND A FAVORITE!
You my good sir, a genius. Seriously, this is my new favorite 2P story now buddy.
We need to celebrate this glorious moment. And after the party, i'm ready for the sequel. reactiongifs.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/02/EOD.gif
I have NOT read it yet but... it seems like a good Night-Time Story!
I'm confused.