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Captain Cutie on duty!


This story is a sequel to Setting Her Heart Aflutter

(2nd Person x Fluttershy) After the wedding, you and Fluttershy now live a happy, relaxing life. You love each other like nopony ever could, and you treat your new wife with the same level of kindness and respect that she is accustomed to.

But very soon, a very big change is about to occur in your marriage, and from the looks of things, it may not be just the two of you anymore.

Chapters (18)
Comments ( 246 )

Why is the sequel to SHHA getting hated on? The writing quality appears to be very similar to SHHA which is a good thing. Anyway happy to see the sequel up:pinkiehappy:.

While the writing quality is good, I have to say that 2nd perspective stories have always sounded infinitely awkward to me personally. That said, I can appreciate the work for what it is, and I applaud you for that. :pinkiesad2:


What? No.

This is the sequel to another story of mine.

Trolling? Why?

Just because you're you.
I cannot trust you.


I wondered the same thing, but then again, most of the people who favorited this sequel have not read the original. :fluttercry:


The only possible reason for the thumbs down that i can think of is that this story was too sweet and d'awwwww inducing and it have them all diabeetus. I loved it, can't wait for more :pinkiehappy:


Ooh, sequel! :pinkiehappy:

*reads story then reads title* I SAW WHAT YOU DID THERE



Thank you very much for writing this sequel for a story I very much enjoyed!!! :twilightsmile:


Honestly, If you remember my bitchy comments I was disappointed at how fast the prequel for this story went from 2ndPersonXFluttershy being friends to being married. I mean I really hoped that there would be more events and chapters leading up to the "Big Event" but I am happy that you are writing a sequel.

It will satisfy my need for Fluttershy fics! :moustache:


I understand that Jonsey and I REALLY dropped the ball when we did that, but here's our reason why:

If we went ANY further from chapter 8 (as in *we add filler*), the story would only have become bland and underdone. It may not have looked that way, but trust me, we KNOW what that sort of storyline feel is :pinkiesick:

To make up for it, we decided to create the sequel :pinkiesmile:

WOOOOOO SEQUEL :pinkiehappy:

Liked, tracked, MOAR

This story is awesome!!! :heart: Keep up the good work!!

410925 I was thinking th exact same thing, there wasn't an awful lot of development in the first, not enough for some people to guarantee a sequel.


Again, if I was to take it further, it would only become stale and bland. We had to end it off at the right moment with enough "daaaaawness" built up to get people asking for more.

Besides, me and Jonsey ran out of ideas at chapter eight anyway. What were we supposed to do? :rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy:

417263 Well maybe take a tick or two to think of something? Until You Met Her stayed eventful and interesting just fine and is just as competently written.

Get that idea churn rolling right quick!:rainbowdetermined2:


Until You Met Her happened waaaay earlier than this story did, not to mention that author was already somewhat "famous" for other shipfics.

We were just a tad bit afraid that taking it further would only destroy the story. :pinkiesad2:

Now, back to writing! :scootangel:

Can't wait for the next chapter :twilightsmile:

Twilight, the grown-ups were talking about serious business and you interrupted them. :twilightsheepish:

Still, I enjoyed reading the prequel to this and I am must say i'm going to enjoy this too. Although the whole 'discussion' thing about what Fluttershy might want feels like it has come out of nowhere but these feelings she has probably built up in the months previous to the start of this story.

Anyway thank you again for what is going to be another great story. :yay:

:rainbowlaugh: Oh Angel... Even for ruining that moment I can't stay mad at you.

Glad to see this new chapter, looking forward to more.

Another great chapter. I eagerly await the next chapter.

Is Fluttershy referring to Sex being the weird part?

If she is I know this is a story for everyone but honestly there isn't much 'weird' about it...


It would be weird for *her*

(Described as a very nice, innocent pegasus)


Well she is considering kids, so she obviously understands at this point in time.

But you do have a point.

Anyway great chapter, can't wait for moar.

I shall fav it but I shall read the first and then this:moustache:

now i wonder what angel was gonna do hmmm

Kinda on the fence about it, but I'll keep up with it as you write it. Has potential to be pretty D'AAAWWWW-worthy :moustache:


Well, it is the sequel to the already 'daaaaaaaw' filled story of mine. Not to mention that the writing style is the same :ajsmug:

Heheheheheheheheheheheheh I like this 2nd person perspective and I liked the prequel. Keep it up bro!

I read the original, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter...whenever that may be.


It's just a little bit of sidetracking in the way. The first half of the next is already done but I'm working on the second half

492374 you stole the line i was going to use :pinkiegasp:

I'm psychic like that.

Curse long hours! :pinkiesick:

Huh, I assume this will be explained later but I really don't get AJ's worry about this. Ponies get married, they have foals, it's life. Not really sure what's bothering her about it.

Nice chapter partner...:twilightsmile:

Altough im confused what the 'Big Secret' is altough i have an idea it has to to with 'my upcoming foal'.


I have to agree, they seem to think that having foals is an embarrassing subject. :facehoof:


Seems confusing right?

It's all coming in, don't worry :scootangel:


"You" gave her herpes right? Right?!



Correction. YOU gave her herpes! MUAHAHAHAHA! :pinkiecrazy:

No but really, that's not what happens later on. This is a 2nd person story after all :rainbowkiss:

Was the secret about Fluttershy wanting a kid? Cause Twilight and Applejack seemed really sketched out at the idea, almost repulsed at it.

i don't think a party is the best thing for this situation.


Shhhhh! Gotta wait! :pinkiesmile: :rainbowkiss:

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