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Ultimate Punch


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Sombra works at a cafe in Ponyville. But with such a meager income, the fallen king is finding it difficult recovering even a semblance of the grandeur lifestyle he led prior to his banishment and usurpation. Then, when all seems hopeless, Sombra hatches a daring plan that might get him everything he desires and more, using Equestria's two most abundant resources: love and friendship.

He also gets a stalker.


Written in first ppov.
Dry humor.
Art by futuristicspacetiger.
Inspired by this story.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 32 )

Dat Sombra...

Great story so far! You've earned a favorite and I hope to see more soon!:moustache:

so flutterstalker has returned

I have to admit, what with the short into, that I didn't think it would be as good as it is. Dog Days' comment made me read this, and I'm definitely looking forward to more.

3181401 I might base Ms. Manager's design off of that.
3181578 Hide your kids, hide your wife :yay:
3181572>>3181739 Thanks for giving it a chance, and I hope it'll keep you entertained :pinkiehappy:.

The concept is just weird enough to be interesting... :rainbowhuh: :twilightsmile:

However, I'm afraid I do feel compelled to ask: Are you actually committed to finishing this one? Because, much as I hate to say it out loud, your track record so far is not promising... :fluttershysad:

3183125 Life has been wild this past year, so it's been difficult to find time and motivation to write. That said, I do have an idea of where I'm going and how I'm going to end this story. I'm going to try.

Ebon..Ebon hmm:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:
:rainbowkiss:must fight urge...SUPERHERO STATIC SHOCK WOO WOO:rainbowwild:
im weak:fluttershyouch:

3185445 Dang, I just knew someone was going to say that haha.

This is gay. Why am I even reading the description?

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now thats just diabetes waiting to happen.

i like the consept of this story, looking forward for more:twilightsmile:

3189015have you noticed that sombra doesn't have ears in your picture until he takes off his crown:moustache:

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When I think of Flutterstalker I think of this music video:

This site need more Flutterstalker stories. :yay:

I do enjoy the narrative. Normally I'm not a big fan of writing with such a substantial lack of dialogue, but I find this rather refreshing.

I must say, your Sombra's voice is excellent. If only the actual show could have characterized him half as well as you do... :-/

God, Stalkershy is so fucking creepy. Otherwise, great story! I want to see where you plan to go with this.

This is amazing! :pinkiehappy: I love Flutterstalker, it's hilarious somehow.

This story is shaping up very nicely! I definately look forward to MOAR please :twilightsmile:

can't wait for the next chapter!

and flutter stalker is quite... uhh ... yeah..:flutterrage:

and what an ominous cliffhanger:twilightoops:

You know, I have to say this caught my eye because I worked very briefly as a barista. Then the writing hooked me in. Admittedly, I think the idea of him being in Ponyville is kind of unlikely, but I love the concept and the writing, and I really wish the writers had decided to do more with him in the actual show.

I'm not a huge fan of Fluttershy as a stalker, but it's very interesting when paired with Sombra as just some dude who ends up as her unwitting target. I also really loved the description of his reign, before he started breaking bad. In general, just so much win.

I'm not even entirely sure where you're going with this, but I like it a lot, and I'm eager to see more. And even if you never finish it, I like what you have here. I think it could actually end on this note, and I'd be content. :twilightsheepish:

This is, really interesting.

DO you plan on updating?

All abord the rapetrain, last stop mentle scars!!!

is this still alive?

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If you look at the author's profile page, they apparently haven't even logged in to FIMFiction for 41 weeks now. I think it's pretty safe to say these fics are dead. A real shame, too; this one had a fairly unique premise, and some definite potential... :ajsleepy:

This story is interesting.

This story is interesting. Hope there's an update soon.

so we´re going with the anime-rule = STALKING - as long as you are cute, it´s ok

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