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Cheerilee is a sheltered, over imaginative, home schooled filly about to start her first day at Ponyville Elementary. Lyra is an energetic hooligan with a keen interest in the unusual. Bonbon is a clueless, young pony who somehow gets pulled into her childhood friend's shenanigans. And Derpy is a clumsy, young pegasus with a troublesome past.

What happens when these four fillies are placed into the same classroom along with several other unique students? The past happens—er, happened? Just read the story...

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 23 )

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Wow! That was really good!:pinkiehappy:
I can't wait for the next chapter ^^ This will be a good read :twilightsmile:

I really like it. this story is well written with a great attention to detail and while at times it can seem that a simple description can take the equivalent of pages it all helps set up the story in a very descriptive manner. On another note, when does everypony think Cherilee will realize that she is becoming her worst nightmare? I eagerly await more.

AAAnnnnnnnnd-

Favetracked! For the synopsis and title alone.

This'll be featured, I bet... Hope...

Looks interesting! I'll be following this eagerly. :) :twilightsmile:

Fave, Liked, N all of that. Looks like Cherilee became the very thing she sought out to destroy.

Liked, tracked and want more! This first chapter sure sucked me in! very well written :D :rainbowlaugh::heart:

Eh... I can't really buy Cheerilee being that dense to be honest. Especially after Lyra remains friendly. Its a bit of a stretch.

Thanks for the kind words everyone. I'll try not to disappoint.:pinkiehappy:

Im holding this thumb hostage. will release it for the low price of... another chapter.

:twilightblush:please?

Well, here's Chapter 2. I tried adding a lot more commentary into this chapter, so it's a bit messy. But overall, I'm pretty satisfied with it. I tried to add some interesting plot thingies into here, but the next chapters will probably be more similar to chapter 1.

Let me know what you guys think, and like my story if you like my story.

This has the potential for disturbing a whole lot of headcanon.

Which is, of course, lots of fun. I'm definitely going to stick around for more.

Wow...I wonder how this will turn out

Wow...who knew Lyra and Bon-Bon could be so freaking devious. :unsuresweetie:

This is turning into a real mess, isn't it? :facehoof:

The image of Derpy resting on Cheeriliees' head made me laugh, and for that you get a gold star for this chapter

I can tell you right now that you do indeed like your story, you may even love your story, because this story is awesome :pinkiehappy: I can't wait to see more of this plot-line written with the skill that you posses. The more I read, the more I love it, so keep writing and your love for the story can only grow.

By Celestia's naval, this chapter was so difficult for me to write. I honestly had no idea what I was doing, so I just wrote down whatever came to mind. It might seem a tad bit rushed, but that's because it was rushed. I just want to get to the stuff I actually have planned. :derpytongue2:

Hi

OH NO NOT MATH DESTRUCTION EVERYONE RUN!!! RUN LIKE NIGGAS WITH THE FUZZ AFTER YOU!!!

Thus needs to update more it is good and funny. I want more!

this story is so cute! :twilightsmile: please update soon!

Soooo this being continued? I see that you have tasted the fruits of success in Beauty of the Beast, but this story deserves continuation.

The sad part is, that this, this right here, is a pretty good description of me in kindergarten.

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