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A couple of fuck ups here and there but not bad. I really like it good work mate. But I would make it one story! It comes across like you are trying to milk viewers by posting different spin offs of this story, which I know is not true but just be wary.


People asked for a sequel and I complied, if they feel the need to complain after all but demanding it then..well.

Fuck em :twilightsmile:

4446576 Fuck em is a perfect attitude to have. Can't please everyone and really you shouldn't have to! So what are plans for the next big story?

I will go again and say that this is brilliant... again.

I wonder if you will continue on the thought of that cheating bitch Fluttershy trying to get Michaels heart back but instead get's fucked up by Fleur.

Hey, so I just realized, if they share basically everything, how would fleur talk to flutters later and micheal not know? Can she willing block some communication?


If he's otherwise occupied (Singing in the shower) then she can sort of dull their connection without him realizing it.

Cue the verbal beatdown upon Flutters :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Zamairiac deleted May 25th, 2014

This was a sweet chapter, I could feel what you were describing. Now couldn't you just post the next story here instead of making another one?



People like to complain when I milk what I write. So I'm gonna piss them all off and milk this shit for all it's worth. With each one shot being just that, a one shot, a separate story entirely.

Sorry, but I've found myself agreeing with the 'You can't please them all' statement. Thus why I'm just gonna piss them all off :trollestia:

Well I guess I really have no problem with this, so fuck it, do whatever you want.


Way ahead of ya! :pinkiehappy:

So how long till the next story? I really want to see how that goes down.(n see if I was right.)


Either tomorrow or the day after, I'm a tad busy this week :twilightsmile:

OH yes the lovely lovely pony

K, just curious since everyone else has been asking what are the plans for your other stories?(that way they can all shut up n stop bothering you.(do it as a voice blog pwease.))

I'm telling ya, you can piss off way more people by writing Blueblood's gay, BDSM, incestuous, foalcon, necrophilia filled RBUC! Just think of any fetish that could piss people off and put it in.

I am really happy about this, not only have you decided to do this series of one shots, but you've done a sequel (and this isn't a complaint about your other work) and it hasn't gone all grim. I love your work, you are a great writer when romance is concerned, but it always seems that for every happy couple there's a dark turn for them somewhere up ahead. I expect there probably will be one for these two now that I've mentioned it, but at least it wasn't there for a little while. :pinkiecrazy:

This sequel made me so happy I don't even know how to start thanking you!!!:raritycry::pinkiehappy::raritycry::pinkiehappy::raritycry::pinkiehappy::raritycry::pinkiehappy:

Nice. I was kinda hoping for a multi-chaptered slice of life story though. I look forward to the future Michael/Fleur stories regardless.

Keep up the good work.

You know, this isn't so much as pissing them off than proving them right. Rather than enrage all these "haters" you're giving them smug satisfaction in the knowledge that you're outright admitting that you're selling out. :applejackunsure:

This story makes me need a hug. Or $200 for the VIP room at the local strip club. I would if I didn't have to pay rent in a few days. :pinkiesad2:

More more more MOAR!!!!! Loving this story. Need more Fleur goodness! :pinkiehappy:

Ahh Zam, your stories, just, wow. This, however mushy and cheesy it is, really means something to me (for some stupid reason), and it's beautiful! :pinkiesad2:

I don't mind the continuation of this story, but do each part need to be in a separate story? Why not just make chapter two the market/ shopping chapter instead of a whole new story?


And how many one shots have you made, hmm? :derpytongue2:

We'll see what comes of it. In any case I think I'll keep this one what it is, lest I change the title to-

The Chronicled Life and Adventures of Mr and Mrs De Lis.

Hmm, I don't know. What do you think?


I, uh, honestly can't imagine what you'd hope to gain by admitting this. At the very least, it confirms bad faith on any future stories for this premise you intend to submit.


Speaking as a staff member, I'd advise this.


Uh, I've already decided.

Look up, it's all sorted now :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Zamairiac deleted May 26th, 2014


Ah. Cool digs, then.


Saves me waiting for the mods to upload it really, that and despite what some seem to think, I don't actually milk anything.


Ahem, well anyway. Have you read this so far? If so I'd very much like to know what you think :pinkiesmile:

Oh, I'm sorry, I thought this was your story. Why you would mention any of mine baffles me, unless you're trying to justify criticism against anything you write by countering with what other people have wrote. My oneshots have nothing to do with this story, and I'm just a commenter like anyone else, so don't try to use what I have written as an excuse not to listen to me.

And honestly, at this point I couldn't care what you write. You outright said that you're writing to milk out of a story series now. Not interested in that.

this is pretty good, not much else to say other than that


Whoa, slow down Jim. It was a joke :derpytongue2:

Besides, I'm chucking them all in here now. Saves me waiting for the mods to upload it XD


I think it primarily works as a sensory experience, and you do pretty well on that end. Solid description and detail and whatnot. It makes you feel things. That's good.

I'unno how to feel about the series as a narrative experience, 'cause I think Fleur being a siren kinda cuts most of what tension or suspense there could be. She's got the whole bondmate thing, but she knows who her bondmate is on sight, so there's not really much concern on her part as to whether she's making the right choices. Her love's mostly unconditional (and on some level biological), so it's hard to imagine too much shaking it unless it's Michael who pulls back--which doesn't do that much to dissuade her. And she's more or less an empath, so even when Michael initially pulled away from her, she had all the tools to make things work out between them.

It's... just kind of pat, which may or may not've been intentional. I guess my best assessment would be that it's solid prose but the structure feels like a bit of a set-up for Michael and Fleur being together.


It is.

The aim for all of this is to simply write about their life. The drama, the adventures(Big and small), and the romance.

The bond between Fleur and Micheal has limitations, and although they've seen each other, who they truly are beneath the masquerade of lies and bravado, there are still many obstacles for the two to overcome.

Stress will be a player here, jealousy too. The aim to begin with was to try and create a perfect 'love at first sight' scenario, which for the most part I think I did alright. But as we both know, people change as time passes.

Heh, I'm truly looking forward to writing this now. Thanks for the comment :pinkiehappy:

Woah, who knew simple pillow talks could be so awsome!!

Whoa... a sequel? One was one of the first stories I really fell in love with on this site and the one that caused me to fall in love with Fleur. Oh thank you! Thank you! :yay::yay::yay:

I am so happy that you decided to continue this story. It's always nice to read a well written romance story featuring Flyer that doesn't revolve around her cheating on Fancy Pants. Looking forward to reading future chapters, so keep up good work.

So this all happened pretty quick. Fleur is pushy and possessive and wrote her infatuation off as "destiny", but I have another theory.

Sirens are really soul-drinking demonesses who have to get their partners to love them before they can brutally murder them and devour their souls. This not only kills the body, but obliterates the soul, leaving no opportunity for it to go on to the afterlife.

tl;dr: Fleur is worst pone.

Oh hey, a continuation of that unique Fleur story! Now this is what I like to see. While some might claim you're 'cheating' a bit by writing the characters with this type of bond (and thus lessening potential tension), I feel that it's presented in a unique enough way that it has me hooked and wanting to see where things go next.

I'm eagerly looking forward to the next parts.

I read the prequel to this one a while ago, and i enjoyed it. I reread the prequel before starting the sequel and I thought of something I didn't realize before. The whole siren thing is a very complex love and set of emotions.
Imagine two individuals loving each other and each one feeling their own senses and emotions. Besides their own feelings they now experience the others as well. On top of that, they then experience their own feelings through the other. Keep going with that back and forth for a while. It is like a cubed room with walls of mirrors. No matter which way you look, you see image after image reflecting each other into infinity. That would be 'very interesting' to experience.
Not sure if this is how you, Zamairiac, are trying to convey through your story, but I like the idea. It at least helps me understand the relationship between the two and it makes it a better story for me.
This story is excellent. Can't wait to read more.

Makes me wonder if you've read my Fleur x human story...

Wow is all I have to say. :pinkiesad2:

That was amazing as well as intense. I never felt what the characters felt. You have an awesome way to tell a story and I can actually feel the passion come from my computer as I read this this story. I have never felt what the characters feel in other stories I read. You are an extrodinary writer. I am actually breathless. I eagerly await your next chapter or what call the next one-shot story:twilightsmile:

Oh the fuck yes... Awesome sequel

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