Flowery language, and a good setup and story despite the much-maligned 2nd person perspective. I admit, I skimmed, but will read in full later tonight. This seems ridiculously hot and well-written. I look forward to my full reading.

Hmm this looks interesting. A little too many commas, but I like the long description. Its setup well. I'll be sure to read this tonight, and have a review for it at some point or other.

Absolutely loved it plz make more

6590677

I'll admit that, despite my past experience, the whole story is a bit too flowery on the language and description, but I expected myself to do that. Here's hoping I'll be able to tone it down over the coming weeks.

Color me impressed. This is genuinely one of the first Fleur stories I've read that I've actually enjoyed. Not just because you wrote the erotica very well - this qualifies as erotica by the way, not just ample smut - but you took the time to develop it, to have us be invested in this story. Job well done!

6591005
It has a time and place, and with this, from what I've read thus far, it works. This feels so classy.

6591016

Thanks!

Great story and a tastefully written clop scene. Great work.

...And it was followed with some downright amazing sex.

Incredible work, dude. Incredible.

~Skeeter The Lurker

6601326

Thanks!

I liked it, keep up the good work my friend.
stream1.gifsoup.com/view/1032554/good-job-o.gif

6678350 the fact that you put my favorite TV show person makes me want to hurt you

15 Weeks later I have a review: In short this is one of the most well written clopfics I have read in a long time. You have skill Hive. Looking forward to more of your work.

6944791

Thanks!

this was a great story, I loved it

SEQUEL! PLEASE! (Or maybe at least an epilogue...)

This story is literally god-tier sexy. Prose as smooth as the finest silk; deliciously teasing language, and the loveliest back story.

So why the fuck doesn't it have more views and upvotes?

Also, this story just became my 600th favourite.